matticus01 Posted February 23, 2008 Report Posted February 23, 2008 I AGREE...............with Zetti How could you do that...I have a very off feeling Jack is going to go for Martha's friend just to make her jealous... please dont let that happen You really are mean fix it Rach...I mean (Meanie)
Tasha Posted February 23, 2008 Report Posted February 23, 2008 awww...poor Jackles Martha stop being a scaredy cat, no-one can resist Jackles <33 Great chapter More please
martha-jack Posted February 23, 2008 Report Posted February 23, 2008 Martha what is wrong with you, you know you want Jack. well i hope it gets better in the next chapter(prays) update soon please.
martha-jack Posted February 23, 2008 Report Posted February 23, 2008 oh yeah by the way please dont make your chapters shorter, i love reading them too much.
vale4eva Posted February 24, 2008 Report Posted February 24, 2008 Thanks peeps WARNING: Content not suitable for younger readers! Enjoy Chapter 16: (6pm, later that day) “Perfect timing mate, dinners just about ready” Tony called out to his son as Jack entered from the hallway, “where’ve you been anyway?” Walking through into the living room he took a glance at Martha, watching as she ignorantly focussed on the television, before turning back to his father, “I went for a walk, I needed to clear my head”. “Oh right, is something wrong?” asked Tony as he frowned; noticing Jacks uncharacteristically quiet personality. “No, of course not. I just had a headache that’s all”. “Oh, well come on then, dinners up, it might even make you feel better”. “I doubt it” Martha heard Jack mutter as she walked passed him and off into the kitchen. Sitting down for dinner they kept up with the pleasantries. Discussing work, university and Jacks upcoming birthday plans; anything really, just to avoid the awkward silences. Tony could sense something was wrong, but he couldn’t quite put his finger on it… … (20 minutes later) … “I can do the washing-up if you’d like?” Martha placed a comforting hand on her fathers shoulder. “Yeah, thanks love, that’d be great,” he smiled; thankful for the offered help, “oh and Jack, would you mind taking a look at the pipes under the sink. I noticed one of them was rattling the other day.” “Yeah, no problem, I’ll get my tools”. ……………………………………… Shuffling across slightly, she tried to make room for him. She heard him fidgeting around beneath her, pipes being tapped and bolts being tightened, before no other sounds apart from the gushing of running water, could be heard. She frowned with unease, a little concerned about being alone and in such close proximity with Jack, but she tried to ignore it, and continued on with her washing up … … (30 seconds later) … The unexpected feeling of 5 warm and soft fingers could be felt beneath her skirt, trailing over her thigh and up the inside of her leg. Her jaw dropped and she gasped at the feeling, nearly dropping the plate in the process. Pulling back from the sink, she looked down to see Jack smiling up at her sweetly. Her face strained and her body tensed as his hand lingered beneath her skirt, caressing her inner thigh ever so slightly. “Jack…” she began as she slowly shook her head, but the words just wouldn’t come out. He continued to smile at her from where he was crouched; enjoying every moment as it was clear to him just how much she was loving this… Slowly he rose to his feet, his hand gradually moving upwards as he went; dragging past her pant-area and up towards her front. Standing beside her, he gazed into her watery eyes. He heard and felt her heavy breaths as he stood at her level. “Why are you doing this to me?” she whispered as she looked into his eyes. “Oh, because it’s so much fun” he smiled back at her; slightly amused at his obvious affect on her. She lowered her head in sadness. She was certain she couldn’t take much more of this… “But, I can stop, if you want?” he continued. She swallowed away the lump in her throat; pulling herself together before nodding in response, “Yes” she began, “I’d appreciate that” she replied before turning back towards the sink. “Alright fine, I will … Just admit how you feel and I’ll be on my way”. She stopped her movements, her head remaining forward as she kept her mouth shut tight. She could feel her cheeks turning red, but there would be no point in answering back, arguing wouldn’t get them anywhere. “Fine then, have it your way” he shrugged as he took a step away from her, “you know you’ll only end up caving eventually”. “Oh please” she scoffed back, scrubbing hard at the dishes as she went. “So this is the way it’s going to be huh?” she began, “You can’t have what you want, so you make my life a living hell. Well that’s really sweet of you Jack” she spoke in sarcasm as she practically threw the plate down onto the dryer. “Well maybe if you stopped being such an ignorant bitch we’d all be better off” he casually told her before he flashed her an exaggerated grin. “Ugh! You are so asking for a slap!” She growled at him through her frustration. “Actually, I’d much prefer a spank instead,” he smartly smirked back as he cocked her a cheeky eyebrow. Just as she was about to reply, the door swung open, and in waltzed Elli... “I hope you didn’t eat all of the chocolate cake Martha” she whinged as she stomped her way passed them and over towards the cupboards. Tearing her vision away from Jack, she focused on Elli, “No, of course not. There’s load’s left”. “Well good, because I wouldn’t have been very happy if you’d eaten it all” she moaned as she made her way back into the living room; chocolate cake in hand. Jack sniggered as he watched her leave, she could be so amusing at times; before he turned back to face Martha. From then on, no other words were spoken; they just stared at each other; with Martha’s eyes all the while narrow and threatening, before she turned away in a huff, and carried on with her dishes... ……………………………… (8.30pm) After having removed the water droplets with her towel, she picked up her robe, encircling it around her naked figure, and tying up the front. Opening the bathroom door, she stepped outside, walking down the hallway and off towards the kitchen. Pouring herself a glass of cool water she took a sip… The house was empty, everyone had gone out, either to work, or out to meet friends; consequently leaving Martha alone. She was thankful for this however, as she needed some time to clear her head. Rummaging around in the fridge, she failed to hear the front door gently close shut… Placing her glass back onto the side, she re-made her way into the bathroom… Walking inside, she left the door wide open. Allowing for the towel to fall down to her waist as she applied her deodorant… He stood in the shadows across the hallway, watching her with hungry eyes; his tongue automatically licking his lips as he scanned her tanned and supple back … he would do anything right now to taste her… Feeling a cool draft glide across her legs, she quickly spun around; only to get the fright of her life as Jack stood in the darkness facing her. Her eyes shot open in alarm as she hurried in covering her chest. “You shouldn’t leave the door wide open like that” he began; “you never know who might be watching” he spoke in a low and rather creepy tone of voice as his eyes bored into her soul. She frowned at him; settling her erratic breathing as she remained clung onto towel; ensuring she was safely covered up … not that it mattered now, he’d pretty much seen everything. “What are you doing here Jack?” she asked softly; although a hint of annoyance was present as she spoke. He shrugged, slowly walking forward and into the light; “got bored” he said simply “… thought I’d come back … maybe keep you company” he tilted his head to one side, raising his eyebrows for a split second. Her face remained in a frown, as she studied his behaviour; he could be so unnerving at times. “Yeah, well I was enjoying my own company thanks” she turned away from him; facing the mirror. She watched in the reflection of the mirror as he walked towards her and into the bathroom, closing the door behind him. “Jack,” she sighed, turning around to face him, “what are you doing” she said helplessly. He failed to respond, instead he just stared at her; a distinct look of lust in his eyes … that in itself couldn’t help but send her insides tingling. “I thought maybe we could …” he began. “No Jack!” She emphasised her words, “Didn’t you listen to a word I said earlier, I told you it’s not going to happen”. “Yeah well, I chose not to listen” he replied; shrugging his shoulders. She shook her head in irritation; but she didn’t retaliate, she didn’t feel like arguing, she felt far too naked and vulnerable to confront him right now. Turning her head to look at him, she inquisitively narrowed her eyes, “What do you want from me?” she asked hesitantly, her voice in a soft whisper; all the while she silently dreaded the answer. He smiled; almost quite deviously, “I would have thought that was obvious” he leered. She tore her vision away from him; unable to look into his piercing eyes. “It doesn’t have to be an issue you know … the whole family thing,” he said as he walked forward, standing in front of her, “it doesn’t even have to be serious; not if you don’t want it to be” he swallowed hard; almost ashamed at himself for saying such a thing. “…no one has to know”. She turned back to him, looking into his eyes as he stood merely inches away from her, “You’re really that desperate for some action?” she questioned him softly. He frowned at her comment; almost hurt by her words; but he knew she was right ... he was desperate. Moving further forward she brushed against him; squinting her eyes as she looked at him. “Do you want me to use you? Is that it?” she asked; a hint of seduction in her eyes as she looked at him; dragging her focus over his lips as she tried her hand at a different plan of action. She could sense the affect she was having on him; his breath getting heavier by the second; but she failed to foresee his next move. Grabbing her by the arms he pushed her up against the wall, but he didn’t hurt her, he made sure of that. Her breath hitched in her throat at their sudden movements, her eyes opening wide through shock … but she quickly regained her composure, her face falling back into its previous lusty smile; “Oh, so you like it rough do you?” she asked him with a smirk. His face continued to frown as he stared at her intently; his focus so strong, almost as if he was trying to read her mind. She loved this feeling; having so much control over him … it was such a rush of adrenaline. She moved against him; unable to prevent the tiny moan of pleasure as his weight on her body aroused her. Slowly his grip of her began to loosen; his fingers releasing her arms, before his one hand ran down her side, moving across her thigh and ducking beneath the fluffy robe to cup her cheek. She swallowed hard; her body trembling at the feeling of his hand on her bottom, but she tried to control herself … she couldn’t cave now. “Jack” she softly began, her voice wavering as she spoke, her eyes looking deeply into his, “Isn’t it about time we both moved on” she said slowly and softly; a hint of sadness in her voice. He failed to respond; instead he just looked at her blankly. “We can’t always have what we want” she told him gently. “Sometimes … we just have to accept it”. His face fell into a sad and distressed frown; “What if I can’t?” he hushed back to her, looking intently into her eyes. “You don’t have a choice,” she simply whispered back. His focus on her eyes never drifted for a second, as he took in the look of certainty on her face. Regretfully he moved away from her, taking a step back and lowering his head. “I think, maybe we should stay out of each others way for a while … it should help to make things easier” she told him gently. Taking one last glance at her, he took in her determined appearance … before he slowly gave her a nod. For some reason he didn’t feel like putting up a fight, the look in her eyes told him she wouldn’t have anymore of it … so he would be forced to settle for defeat. Turning around, he walked away; closing the door to the bathroom behind him and leaving her to it… Preview: Things arent getting any easier for Jack and Martha ... and what does Jack do that really gets under Martha's skin?
Zetti Posted February 24, 2008 Report Posted February 24, 2008 You are the meanest person on this planet You were meant to make it better They have both given up Update soon Meanie!
matticus01 Posted February 24, 2008 Report Posted February 24, 2008 ok Rach now you've gone too far... I got the feeling that Martha was kind of playing with his head when they were both in the bathroom... was she? Update soon and please fix it
martha-jack Posted February 24, 2008 Report Posted February 24, 2008 all i can say is *wipes away tears*
Barbara Posted February 24, 2008 Report Posted February 24, 2008 Martha, you know you want him! Stop pushing him away! You'll regret it! Poor Jack! He wants her so bad. Wonder what he's going to do that really gets under her skin. Please update soon.
dee83 Posted February 25, 2008 Report Posted February 25, 2008 i get the feeling shes playing around abit cause shes wanting it him 1 minute then turning him away then next so he most no no wether hes cuming or going wiv her she needs 2 make up her mind & soon please update soon
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