Tasha Posted March 4, 2008 Report Posted March 4, 2008 If she could crawl into a black hole right now, she would. just what i want to do right about now Great chapter. Jack sounded more like a brother scared and worried about his sister, which was really sweet. Clueless Lisa, im going to start liking her next chapter More please
Jamey-Maria Posted March 4, 2008 Report Posted March 4, 2008 Aww how sweet. She likes him too. Was the dad bit really needed? So off putting. Loved the hug. Great update.
matticus01 Posted March 4, 2008 Report Posted March 4, 2008 oh my god *smiles* that was so beautiful...except for the dad bit *eeeeiiiww* Anyhoo...I especially loved the way Jack just held Martha until she fell asleep... Great Chappie... Update soon
Zetti Posted March 4, 2008 Report Posted March 4, 2008 Another great chapter!! My favourite bit was Jack holding Martha!
Barbara Posted March 4, 2008 Report Posted March 4, 2008 Jack scared me. I really thought someone was going to attack Martha. I really wasn't expecting Jack. But I was glad it was him. Loved the bit where Jack hugged her and she fell asleep in his arms. How sweet! It would have been so much better if Jack had been by her side when she woke up. If only he wasn't dating Lisa. More please.
kaciexox Posted March 4, 2008 Report Posted March 4, 2008 Jack scared me there for a second Their hug was so cute Preview: An oblivious Lisa pushes Martha and Jack together ... And romance is in the air, but will Jack and Martha welcome it with open arms? Yay!! Romance Of course they will welcome it, they are Jack and Martha Lisa is a bit stupid, pushing JM together, she will only end up hurting herself update soon
bay girl Posted March 5, 2008 Report Posted March 5, 2008 Just caught up. Finally. Ive so missed this fic over the last couple of weeks. Stupid bigpond people for taking so long to send me my new modem. A-holes. Cant wait for more Rach. I think its about time that Jack and Martha hook up. Properly. lol.
dee83 Posted March 5, 2008 Report Posted March 5, 2008 i agree i defiantly time for them 2 hook up he doesnt belong with lisa update soon plz
valli Posted March 7, 2008 Report Posted March 7, 2008 Jack scared me there for a moment. Talking about tough love... Well, at least it wasn't a creep Jack and Martha so belong together, and the hug was the proof Fortunately, Lisa isn't the smartest girl in the neighbourhood, so Jack and Martha could be having an affair, and she wouldn't know a thing, even if she walked in on them. She'd just think that they were having a "brother and sister" - moment And, yes, Martha and Jack will welcome a romance with open arms I hope... More please!
vale4eva Posted March 9, 2008 Report Posted March 9, 2008 Hey guys... Its the message Ive been dreading to post Unfortunately, lifes pretty rough at the moment ... what with final year uni work (assignments/exams) and current family issues etc So, it looks like I'm going to have to put this fic off for a while. Its my own fault really, I began writing this at the most rediculous time (my final year) and should have known better lol. Its just, I love writing so much .... I cant really help it So, I will say this ... dont expect an update for a while, I need to focus on my project and assignments first (dads already given me the ... "you need to leave your msn friends for a while and focus on your work ... I'm sure theyll understand" .... line ) BUT! Its easter coming up, so I have two weeks off, hopefully then I'll be able to update *Big grin* As for now peeps, I'll say fare-the-well *waves* lol PS, Also, dont be suprised if I just so happen to update this week I do have a tendancy to say things and then do the complete opposite lol Anyhoo, take care people and please hang in with me ... Id hate to think Id come back and you werent there *cries* lol JnM Forever hehe Love Rach xxx PS, and thank you for all your lovely comments! *smile*
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