bizkit01 Posted April 5, 2008 Report Posted April 5, 2008 I just finished reading this fic and it gUD !!! great chapters ... I can't wait for more lOvEd iT xxxx
bay girl Posted April 6, 2008 Report Posted April 6, 2008 Im lovin where this is heading. HAHA. Just keep J/M together thankyou. lol. More soon please.
valli Posted April 6, 2008 Report Posted April 6, 2008 Great chapter with a lot of emotions I loved the way this chapter was built up with Martha following Jack, giving him a speech where Jack was fearing what he expected to come, but it didn't come, which made him cry I especially loved this part: “Oh god, look at me” he laughed as he pulled away from her, “crying over a girl” he spluttered, as he wiped away his tears, “I’m such a wuss”. “Aw” she giggled back, running her thumb across his wet cheek; “you’re my wuss” she smiled, looking deeply into his watery eyes. It was just so J&M More please!
matticus01 Posted April 7, 2008 Report Posted April 7, 2008 YAY *dances around the room before sitting back down in front of the comp* that was.... so jack n martha....ROMANCE... but then you went and spoilt it with the preview... RACHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
vale4eva Posted April 8, 2008 Report Posted April 8, 2008 Thanks for your comments Sorry about the length of this chapter. I couldnt make it into two for some reason Warning: Content unsuitable for younger readers! Enjoy Chapter 26: From the very moment they had embraced, they hadn’t pulled apart. Their hands remained clung to each other, and their lips and tongues were fixed in a passionate lock. She felt herself losing control, as his hand slid beneath her skirt; his fingertips slowly and carefully working their way up her inner thigh. It was bliss… Sheer ecstasy… It had been almost 5 minutes since she had finally declared her love for him, and now they felt on top of the world. How could it be that 4 simple words could produce so much warmth and delight? She moaned against his lips as they kissed, “Mhm, maybe we should stop” she mumbled against his mouth, as he continued to kiss her. He let out a whine of objection as he kept his arms wrapped tightly around her, holding her in. “Jack” she giggled, placing her hand on his chest as she gently pushed him away, “we should stop” she grinned, her eyes flicking downwards to notice how puffy and red his lips had gotten from their constant kissing. He shook his head vigorously, “Jack doesn’t like to stop” he pouted, his eyes wide open like puppy dogs, as his hand rested on her leg. He could feel his arousal reaching its peak; he could quite easily just take her over on this very floor… Unfortunately for him however, Martha wasn’t having any of it… “No offence, but my hopes for us were a little higher than a run down old basement” she took a wary glance around. “You may not know this already, but I have fairly high standards” she held her head up high through pride; before grinning. “Well of course, you wouldn’t be going out with me otherwise” he smugly grinned back. “Hmm, good point” she chuckled through happiness. She could honestly say she had never felt so content in her whole entire life. “Actually, maybe you’re right” he added, as he scanned his eyes over the surrounding area, “This place does kind of scream health violation” he turned back to look at her, before giggling. “Hmm, just a smidge” she smirked. He gazed across at his beautiful girlfriend; his eyes and his smile revealing the true depths of his love for her. Unable to resist, he leant in once again, capturing her lips in a tender kiss. ……………………………………… (10 minutes later) The kisses and cuddles had now died down, but Jack and Martha still remained close, as they sat crossed legged on the gym mat, facing each other. “What’s wrong?” asked Martha, as she became aware of Jacks sudden awkward expression. He frowned, not wanting to cause any upset. After all, he had never seen Martha this happy; and he didn’t exactly want to burst her bubble. “I …” he struggled with his words, “I don’t mean to turn this all serious again, but … what happens now?” he gently questioned her. “What do we do?” he shrugged. “Oh…” her words turned into a whisper, as she quickly remembered the heap of ‘excess baggage’ that was attached to their new found relationship. “Erm, well … that’s the thing,” her voice grew louder through confidence. Taking an awkward glance away from him, she continued. “The truth is; I don’t think I’m ready to tell yet” she began cautiously, watching as Jacks expression remained in a confused frown, but he stayed silent and let her proceed. “I want to get my exams out of the way first; hopefully pass them this time around” she added in annoyance as she rolled her eyes, “and then we can face the world with our big news … I know its not exactly ideal, but … how does that sound?” She waited anxiously for him to respond. Searching his face for an answer. Eventually, he replied. And much to Martha’s relief, a warm smile soon spread across his face. He nodded in understanding, “yeah, I guess that makes sense. Whatever you want” he gazed across at her in adoration. She smiled in return. “Thank you” she leant over and kissed his cheek. Thankful for his kind and considerate nature… ………………………………… “Sooo, Elli’s staying at her friends again tonight, which means we have the place to ourselves” Jack whispered across to her as they walked side by side, towards their home. “Really!?” she grinned, keeping her eyes fixed forward as she tried to act casual, “Well, isn’t that interesting” her voice was soft and seductive, as she turned her head to look at him, flashing him a lusty gaze as she wiggled her eyebrows suggestively. They approached their street, seeing their house in the distance. Only one thought rushed through their minds as they took each large step forward; passion and romance was quickly approaching... Picking up their pace they walked briskly towards the door. However much to their annoyance, the unthinkable happened, and a voice behind them stopped them in their tracks. “Hey guys” Lisa called over to them. Turning around they experienced what could only be described as a punch in the gut. Their hearts sunk as Lisa approached them … how could they have forgotten all about Lisa! Jacks girlfriend! They both mentally kicked themselves at that very moment in time; hating themselves for being so thoughtless. “Oh, hey there” Jack nervously replied. “Where’ve you been mister, I’ve been calling all day”. “Yeah, I'm sorry, my phone needs charging… are you alright?” “Yeah I’m fine, better for seeing you though” she smiled as she came to his side, wrapping her arms around his waist and kissing his cheek. Martha stood awkwardly beside them; not really knowing what to do with herself, but she tried her best to remain as normal as possible. “So, you fancy coming down to the diner for a bit?” asked an oblivious Lisa; as she darted her vision too and fro, from her boyfriend to her best friend. Despite their hormones yearning for something a little more energetic, they agreed to tag along… ………………………… Sitting at one of the booths, they spoke the usual small-talk; but conversation quickly took an unexpected turn… “I was thinking we could all go away for Jacks birthday” Lisa suggested, which in turn caused Jack and Martha's ears to suddenly prick up. “My dad knows this guy who owns this really cute hotel in the city, soooo, I got him to put in a good word for us and he agreed to give us a discount” she beamed; overjoyed at her own efforts. She certainly had high hopes for this holiday. “What do you think?” “Wow” Jack let out a nervous laugh, “that’s … amazing” he stuttered. Glancing at Martha with a look of dread, he noticed her intense expression; clearly he wasn’t the only one thinking the worst … Knowing it was the right thing to do; he swallowed hard, and gathered up the courage to face her … “Actually … Lisa … I erm …” he reluctantly turned to her, “I think we need to…” As Martha sensed what was coming, without thinking, she quickly piped up; “It sounds like a great idea!” Martha spoke up, and in the process interrupting Jacks ‘break up’ speech. “I can’t wait” she beamed. “Great, ok!” exclaimed an ecstatic Lisa. “So I thought we could invite Kim and Tash along for the ride as well, so it’ll be the 5 of us”. “Sounds perfect” Martha continued. Meanwhile Jack sat back in his chair, his expression displaying utter confusion, his eyes all the while fixed on Martha, waiting for an explanation; but she failed to look back and acknowledge him. “Jack, what do you say? It is your birthday after all” Lisa spoke up, consequently catching Jacks attention. “Umm” he took one last hopeful glance at Martha, praying that she’d look back at him for some reassurance, but to be expected, she merely ignored him. Turning back to Lisa he answered; “yeah” he replied in a soft and rather subdued manor, “sure, it sounds like a great idea” he forced a small smile; inside he was fuming. What kind of game was Martha playing!? ……………………………… “I’m going to the bathroom, I’ll be back in a sec” smiled Lisa as she pecked Jack on the cheek before making her way off towards the restrooms. Watching as she disappeared out of sight, he quickly turned to Martha; “What the hell just happened?” he hissed across at her; his teeth grinding in aggravation. “I’m sorry, I don’t where it came from” she said in fret, as she shook her head helplessly; “I just knew that I couldn’t let you break up with her” she spoke anxiously; equally as confused as Jack. . “What are you talking about? I have to! I’m not going to string her along!” “I know,” she sighed, “but … something inside of me just told me to leave it, like, maybe it’s for the best” she answered awkwardly. “For the best?” he repeated as he looked at her through bewildered eyes, “How is it for the best Martha? She’s going to get really hurt in all of this, and she certainly doesn’t deserve it!” He practically yelled at her; however his voice was kept low at all times. He didn’t want to risk dragging any unwanted attention towards them. She sighed loudly, “I know,” her head fell in shame. “But … I just think it’ll look so suss if you suddenly break it off with her for no reason” she tried to justify her behaviour. “It doesn’t matter!” he said in exasperation, “I’m not going to two-time her Martha, she’ll be devastated when it all comes out” he said, as his tone was forcefully kept at a minimum; his face however showed the true extent of his aggravation. “But if you break up with her, she’s going to want to know why; do you really want all that pressure!? Not to mention I’ll have to deal with the prospect of other girls getting in the way, at least with you taken, I only have to worry about Lisa” she said as her voice gradually softened. “Oh Martha” he sighed, “I know that you’re hurting, and I know that you’re scared. But can’t you see how wrong this is? It’s only going to end in tears”. She looked up at him; her vulnerable eyes drooped downwards like a little lost puppy. “I just need a little more time Jack, please…. I thought you understood”. “Yeah, I understand you’re not ready to tell Tony, and I’ve accepted that, but I can’t understand why you would want to put your best friend through so much heartache” he exclaimed, looking into her eyes for answers. He had honestly never expected something like this from Martha. She remained silent, her head bowed downwards in shame. “You can’t honestly tell me that you’d be ok with me being with her? Touching her, kissing her, right in front of your eyes?” he looked at her through bewilderment. “Of course not” she whispered in sadness, “but let’s face it, I’ve been doing it for the last two weeks and I’m getting pretty damn good at it!” she argued back in irritation. Calming herself down she took a breath. “Look Jack, I don’t expect you to understand my logic for this, but I just need you to do this for me … please” she pleaded desperately. He released a loud breath as he shook his head. “I really don’t like this Martha” he told her, “You know, not only will she get seriously hurt here, but the longer this goes on for, the harder and more complicated its going to get … I wont be able to put her off forever,” he said. “She’s going to want to take things further sooner or later, and there’s only so much I can do to stall her”. “Oh” she hushed, her face frowning through her discomfort, “so you haven’t?” she spoke in hesitation; “… I just presumed you’d already … you know; done it.” Her voice lowered towards the end. “No” he shook his head “but I know that she wants too”. “Well …” she shrugged her shoulders as she struggled with her words, “can’t we just deal with that when the time comes?” she asked cautiously. This certainly wasn’t a topic Martha wanted to discuss. Just the thought of Lisa and Jack being intimate with each other made her feel queasy. “Look” she started once again, “I’ve only got another month to go until my exams start, and then it can all be over, we can come clean and try and repair the damage … Jack, you know how much I love Lisa, and I don’t want to hurt her, but … I just don’t think I can handle anymore pressure right now … lets just try and keep things, relatively normal, yeah”. Despite his reservations, he found himself giving in. He would do anything for Martha, and just the fear of him losing her over this argument, tore him apart; he would therefore agree to go along with it. “Ok, fine … but as soon as your exams are over, that’s it, I’m ending it with her and then we’re coming clean … I can’t go on living a lie” he told her forcefully. “I know, I promise… thank you” she tried to smile; leaning over and rubbing the back of his hand. He melted as he felt her soft fingertip caress his hand. Taking her hand in his, he gave it a gentle reassuring squeeze. Before he watched as she quickly pulled away, remembering that they were in a public place and were currently supposed to be in brother/sister mode. Sitting back in her chair she looked down at her hands, thinking about the next few weeks and what they would bring. The big question here was, how would she handle her inevitable jealously? Following a few moments of intense thought, she decided she was in need of some fresh air. “I think I’m going to head off now” she spoke up. “Yeah ok. I’ll stay for a bit longer and then I’ll be right behind you”. “Ok” she smiled, “well … I’ll see you in a bit then” she said, before flashing him a sweet smile and taking to her feet. "you know, I do appreciate it Jack" she turned back to him, "... everything you're doing; you've been amazing". "Dont mention it. I just hope it shows you how much you mean to me". "It does" she spoke softly, "and I love you for it" she added with a gentle smile; her eyes growing watery through tears. Taking a breath, she eventually walked away. Heading towards the exit. Turning at the door, she glanced back at Jack. She watched as Lisa made her reappearance; giving Jack a kiss on the lips, before she giggled and snuggled comfortably into his chest… Oh boy, this was going to be the worst month of Martha’s life…
kaciexox Posted April 8, 2008 Report Posted April 8, 2008 Jack is so cute, doing whatever Martha wants Yay, now JM can sneak around who cares about Lisa Can't wait for the next chapter
Barbara Posted April 8, 2008 Report Posted April 8, 2008 A very long chapter! Jack is so sweet, agreeing with everything Martha says. They were so happy but then Lisa had to show up. I've got a feeling Lisa is going to find out before Jack has a chance to break up with her. They don't need to tell her about their relationship yet but Jack should break up with her. Besides, Martha is jealous. How is she going to act everytime she sees them kissing or touching? More please.
Tasha Posted April 9, 2008 Report Posted April 9, 2008 awwww...poor Martha She is always doing whats best for others. Go away Lisa Great chapter more please
bay girl Posted April 9, 2008 Report Posted April 9, 2008 What the frig is wrong with Martha? She's just gonna let some other girl have her man. She's nuts. Crazy. Martha, you idiot, just be together. Properly. Jack's needs to dump Lisa. More soon. Im loving this.
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