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They better wriggle their way out of this. And i pray that they were wearing clothes when they went downstairs :P

Great chapter :)

Cute bath scene :wub:

More please :)

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Aww that was cute and sweet Rach.

But lol.....busted. hehe.

why couldn't it have been Lisa? haha.

OMG were they evening waering clothes.

More soon please.

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well if there wearing clothes they shouldn't have anything to worry about, unless he finds her knickers on the floor or something lol onli messing, i wish it was lisa two lol, but i do like he idea of sneeking around behind everyones back.

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Naw, Jack and Martha are so cute together :wub: And in the bath :o Me like :P

Okay, I'll try to be serious. The best part of this chapter, in my opinion, was this:

Climbing into the bath he sunk himself into the bubbles. “Ahhhh, this is nice” he sighed peacefully. “You know I’ve always wanted to take a bath with a sexy naked lady” he smirked as he shuffled forward into the centre, reaching over to grab her hips before he gently pulled her towards him, her bottom sliding along the plastic base of the bath before coming to a halt. She raised her legs slightly as she wrapped them around his waist, closing any gap there once was and getting herself comfortable.

She chuckled as she placed her arms across his shoulders, “And I’ve always wanted to have a bath with a sexy naked man” she grinned, “so I guess it’s a pretty good day for both of us” she laughed.

It's such a well-written part and very typical JM :P

Hopefully Tony won't catch them, which he shouldn't, unless they're naked >.<

More please!

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OH MY GOD....THAT WAS... * self* whoa :wub:

I loved it and you used some very discriptive words in that chappy...well done Rach

lets hope they can wriggle there way out of this from Tony :D

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Here I am :D

Warning: Content will not be suitable for younger readers!

Enjoy :)

Chapter 28:

Hastily stepping backwards she fixed her night shirt, pulling it in place and ensuring she was covered up.

She felt her hands clam up as she released the material; her entire body was moist and wet; panic was beginning to consume her.

As everything turned to muffle, the last word she made out was the mumble of Jack reassuring her … “It’ll be ok, I promise”…

And then it happened.

The door swung open and Tony stood at the entrance, his face displaying clear disappointment.

“What’s going on here then?” his prying voice was low and suspicious…

Martha’s head automatically stooped downwards, she couldn’t bear to look into his eyes; she hated the thought of letting him down.

“Late night snacking?” his tone rose in amusement, “You two should know better” he smirked as he raised his eyebrows; before walking forward and embracing Martha in a warm hug. “How are you love?” he asked as he clung onto his eldest daughter.

Relief flooded through Martha’s veins as she sensed he was completely unaware; wrapping her arms around his body she smiled, thankful he hadn’t suspected a thing.

“I’m fine dad, how are you?” she replied; glancing over to Jack who flashed her a thoughtful smile…

Smiling back she closed her eyes.

Their secret was safe … for now at least …

…………………………………

“Righteo you two, we’re off to bed” announced Tony as he and Kate made their way off towards their bedroom.

“Ok, good night” Martha called back with a smile. Before she watched as their bedroom door was brought to a close. Her face fell as she looked at Jack with a mixture of pure dread and relief.

“I thought we’d been well and truly busted back then … I was about to go and pack my suitcase” she said as she let out a nervous chuckle.

“Yeah, I know” he released an uneasy smile. “It was pretty damn close … I guess we’ll just have to be more careful from now on” he said as he came over towards the couch and took a seat beside her.

She nodded in agreement.

Placing his arm nearest Martha onto the head of the couch, he welcomed her into the warmth of his chest; she smiled, closing her eyes and snuggling into him, as she briefly forgot all about their secret relationship.

Hearing the distant sound of drawers slamming shut, she opened her eyes.

Pulling backwards slightly she looked at him; “maybe we shouldn’t” she spoke softly.

He sighed, letting his now-free-arm fall down at his side; “yeah, you’re probably right … maybe we should just head to bed”.

She reluctantly nodded, before they both rose to their feet and made their way down the hall.

Turning on her heel she leant with her back against her doorframe.

“Well, I guess this is it then” she hushed; swallowing hard.

He couldn’t help but chuckle softly, “You make it sound like were never going to see each other again” he smirked, giving her stomach a playful poke.

She stifled her giggle as she tried to control her level of volume. “I’m just saying … I’ll miss you” she pouted.

He smiled across at her warmly, “I know … me too.” He whispered back to her; his hand gently cupping her one cheek. “I love you”.

“I love you too” she hushed back, rising onto her tiptoes and placing a soft kiss on his lips … before they both turned away, entering their separate bedrooms and closing the doors behind them.

…………………………………

(1.30am)

It was the early hours of the morning, but she couldn’t sleep. Truth be told she’d barely slept 40 winks.

She placed a light delicate kiss on his cheek, before she ran her hand slowly and seductively down from his neck to his chest; her fingertips trickling down his torso and then towards his lower half…

He groaned softly at her touch, his legs unconsciously parting, but his eyes still closed shut as he slept contentedly on his back; the covers sprawled left, right and centre…

She grinned as she noticed a bulge appear beneath his shorts. Even when he was sleeping she had the power to arouse him

Running her hands further down, she lightly tugged at the top of his shorts.

“Don’t …” he grunted, as he caught her arm with his hand, stopping her from going any further, “that’ll drive me crazy” he whispered up to her as his tired eyes slowly opened wide.

He took note of her cheeky grin; as she glanced down towards her achievement.

He chuckled softly, shaking his head at the state he was currently in. “You always know what buttons to push” he smirked.

“Yep, it certainly looks that way” she giggled back.

A moment of silence filled the air, before Jack spoke up.

“Martha, what are you doing here?”

She shrugged, her lips forming into a pout, “I missed you”

He released a heavy breath, “You can’t be here; it’s too risky. Tony might hear something.” He warned her.

“I know but … I can’t sleep, I keep thinking about you … I just … wanted you to hold me” she hushed across to him; almost shyly before she looked deeply into his eyes.

He sighed, pushing himself upwards and sitting on the bed. Straightening the covers, he made a space for her, before shuffling across and allowing for her to lie beside him.

“Half an hour, and then you have to go” he told her, “if you want to hold out on this, you have to be willing to sacrifice things … I can’t do it all on my own.”

“I know, I’m sorry” she said sadly as she snuggled up beside him, her head tucking neatly in the crook of his neck, “are you mad at me?”

“No, of course not … its just, spending so much time together, can make it even harder, you know”.

She nodded through understanding. He was right; she was just being selfish…

From now on, she would do all she can to fight away temptation. If Jack was willing to put the effort in, then so would she … no matter how painful and frustrating it might be …

………………………………

(2pm the following day)

Hearing a knock at the front door, Jack arose from the couch.

Making his way towards the front of the apartment, he opened the door; coming face to face with a grinning Lisa.

“Hey honey” she beamed; her hands clinging onto various sheets of paper, as she stood gleefully at the entrance.

“Hey, what are you doing here?” he said as he tried to hide his hidden dread. Leaning forward he kissed her cheek.

“I’m here to talk holiday plans!” she exclaimed through joy, before she stepped inside and waltzed straight passed him, “is Martha here? She should be included in this”.

“Er yeah, she’s in her room, she’s revising though”.

“Oh, well I’m sure its time for her break” she grinned as she approached Martha’s bedroom door, ignorantly banging on the door she called out, “Mac! Come on! Take five yeah!”

Much to Martha’s annoyance, she was forced to appear; she was strangely captivated by her revision and was beginning to really get into it. That was, until Lisa oh-so-kindly interrupted her!

“What’s the drama?” Martha asked in a fed-up tone of voice, as she sat on the living room chair.

“Well, I’ve managed to book the hotel rooms, and I just need to double check everything with you” she began, “now, this hotel complex has two resorts, but I’ve chosen the one with the outdoor pool, I hope that’s ok?” she enquired as she held the pieces of paper up to show them.

“Yeah, I’m not fussed” shrugged Martha. Jack was also in agreement.

“Ok, great, and I’ve booked three rooms, a double for me and Jack, a single for you, and Kim and Tasha will also have a double room”.

“Right, great” Martha couldn’t help but roll her eyes; she really wasn’t interested in this. Any discussion that included the concept of Jack and Lisa sharing a bedroom for a few days, was least than appealing for Martha.

“And your room will be next to ours; Kim and Tash will be further down the hallway” she concluded.

“Well, it sounds like you’ve got everything under control” Martha stated as she rose to her feet, “I think I’m going to head back to my room now. My revisions calling me”.

And with that, she gave Jack a small smile, before quickly leaving the living room area…

“Is she ok?” frowned Lisa as she watched her walk away, “I thought she’d be excited about this” said an unbeknownst Lisa.

“Yeah, she’s fine … just a little stressed because her exams are approaching”.

“Yeah … it could be that. But maybe its something else” she looked at him inquisitively, “maybe she’s feeling lonely or something … Has she ever mentioned wanting a guy in her life?”

“Where’d that come from?” He frowned at her, suddenly feeling uncomfortable at where this conversation was heading.

“Nowhere, I’m just asking” she shrugged.

“Well, no, she’s never seemed too bothered to be honest” he said as his face remained fixed in a frown.

“Hmmm, I wouldn’t be so sure about that” she said as she tapped her chin with the tip of her index finger, “she probably does, she just doesn’t want to admit it” she started, “I mean, pretty much all of her friends are dating someone, it has to get on her nerves occasionally” she thought for a moment, her face focused as she looked down at the hotel images. “Ooo!" she quickly beamed; consequently making Jack even more edgy, "and that’s another reason why this holiday will totally rule! It’s the perfect opportunity for me to play match maker!” she exclaimed, clapping her hands together in excitement, “I’ll have some cute guy eating out of the palm of Martha’s hand in no time” she grinned.

“Oh Great” Jack laughed nervously, his face scrunching up in displeasure as he took a glance away from her.

Why was this holiday suddenly starting to sound like the nightmare from hell!?

Preview for up and coming chapters: Its a week later, which means its holiday time! But not everyones in the holiday spirit <_< Whilst Martha deals with her current state of loneliness, Jacks got his own problems. How will he cope sharing a bedroom with Lisa, knowing the women he really loves, is right next door?

I can sense a few tears are about to appear :(

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Naww, Jack and Martha are so adorable together, but it was a close call :P They almost got busted!

Lisa is truly annoying <_< She wants to play match maker? That's got to go well :rolleyes:

Favourite part of the chapter was this:

“Hmmm, I wouldn’t be so sure about that” she said as she tapped her chin with the tip of her index finger, “she probably does, she just doesn’t want to admit it” she started, “I mean, pretty much all of her friends are dating someone, it has to get on her nerves occasionally” she thought for a moment, her face focused as she looked down at the hotel images. “Ooo!" she quickly beamed; consequently making Jack even more edgy, "and that’s another reason why this holiday will totally rule! It’s the perfect opportunity for me to play match maker!” she exclaimed, clapping her hands together in excitement, “I’ll have some cute guy eating out of the palm of Martha’s hand in no time” she grinned.

It's so funny when Lisa's so stupid :lol:

More please!

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