bay girl Posted April 22, 2008 Report Posted April 22, 2008 Gosh i dont like Lisa. Dumb ass girl. Hope she walks in on them fully going at it. Loved that chapter Rach. Cant wait for more.
KaitieL Posted April 22, 2008 Report Posted April 22, 2008 God Lisa a b!tch. Goes on about her and Jack/Kim and Tash will be sharing a double room and poor Martha just has a single. Talk about rubbing it in and then innocently asking Jack if it bother's Martha that she doesn't have anyone. That girl is so stupid. If only she knew that her boyfriend was in love with Martha. Tears Rach? There better not be.
Zetti Posted April 22, 2008 Report Posted April 22, 2008 “Is she ok?” frowned Lisa as she watched her walk away, “I thought she’d be excited about this” said an unbeknownst Lisa. “Yeah, she’s fine … just a little stressed because her exams are approaching”. “Yeah … it could be that. But maybe its something else” she looked at him inquisitively, “maybe she’s feeling lonely or something … Has she ever mentioned wanting a guy in her life?” “Where’d that come from?” He frowned at her, suddenly feeling uncomfortable at where this conversation was heading. “Nowhere, I’m just asking” she shrugged. “Well, no, she’s never seemed too bothered to be honest” he said as his face remained fixed in a frown. “Hmmm, I wouldn’t be so sure about that” she said as she tapped her chin with the tip of her index finger, “she probably does, she just doesn’t want to admit it” she started, “I mean, pretty much all of her friends are dating someone, it has to get on her nerves occasionally” she thought for a moment, her face focused as she looked down at the hotel images. “Ooo!" she quickly beamed; consequently making Jack even more edgy, "and that’s another reason why this holiday will totally rule! It’s the perfect opportunity for me to play match maker!” she exclaimed, clapping her hands together in excitement, “I’ll have some cute guy eating out of the palm of Martha’s hand in no time” she grinned. Just too funny, how naive can Lisa be! JM in the bedroom was just too funny
Barbara Posted April 22, 2008 Report Posted April 22, 2008 Glad they didn't get busted by Tony. Lisa is so annoying. She has to go on about Martha being the only one who's single. And she wants to play matchmaker. Martha can find her own man. No wait, she already found him. Lisa just doesn't know it yet. If this is going to end in tears, it'd better be Lisa's tears. More please.
matticus01 Posted April 23, 2008 Report Posted April 23, 2008 I soooooooo agree with Barbara on this one if there are any tears . . . . . . . . . . MAKE IT LISA'S . . . . . . . . . . . . . greatt up date...once again
vale4eva Posted April 24, 2008 Report Posted April 24, 2008 Hi again lol Happy J&M times, makes Rachel update faster Warning: Content not suitable for younger readers! Enjoy and thanks for commenting Chapter 29: (ONE WEEK LATER!) It was the day before Jacks birthday, and the five friends had arrived at the hotel resort. Dumping their bags at the hotel entrance, they strolled over towards the desk; ready to check in. “Hi, we have 3 rooms booked under the name of Lisa Mackintosh”. They waited patiently as the young man behind the desk checked their details, once completed, he handed them their keys and they made their way towards the lift. Taking the lift up to floor 3, they arrived at their destination. “Ok, we’ll see you guys later then” said Tasha as she followed Kim towards their room, “we’ll pop around after we’ve had a shower and settled in”. “Yeah sure, no worries, see you later” Lisa waved them off. The departure of Kim and Tasha left Jack and Lisa alone with Martha… “Well, here’s my room” Martha revealed an awkward smile as she inserted her key into the lock, “an entire room to myself … how exciting” she chuckled nervously; trying her best to hide her state of unease. “Yeah, well enjoy” exclaimed an oblivious Lisa, before she scooted off into her own room; leaving Jack in the hallway with Martha. “Sooo, I guess I better go and enjoy the quality of my own company then” she said as she rolled her eyes; she didn’t want to make Jack feel bad, mostly because this was all her doing anyway, but she wouldn’t say no to a little sympathy and attention. He sighed loudly, looking sadly into her eyes; “this is going to be tough.” She nodded slowly, “I know”. He hated the thought of her being alone in an unfamiliar surrounding. He would do anything to just stay with her, wrap his arms around her tiny frame and hold her for all eternity … but with Lisa right next door, it was never going to happen. “I promise you, I’ll be over as soon as I can” he told her as he looked deeply into her eyes. She nodded slowly, holding his gaze. She wanted nothing more than to lean over and kiss him softly on the lips. Although they knew they shouldn’t, they slowly inched forward; holding their focus intently. They had only one thought in mind as they closed the gap between them… Cupping her cheek with the palm of his hand, he pulled her closer in. As their lips almost touched, a rustling down the hallway caught them off guard; they jumped slightly at the sound of one of the porters approaching the hallway. Stepping backwards they stood apart, both looking completely dejected as they failed to receive their kiss. Clearing his throat Jack acknowledged the porter with a smile; trying his best to act natural, before turning back to face Martha. “I guess … I better head in there, she’ll be wondering where I am” he reluctantly spoke up; signaling towards his bedroom. He was silently dreading this moment, when he would be alone, vulnerable and unable to escape Lisa’s clutches ... how on earth was he supposed to cope knowing that Martha, the woman he was in love with, was currently alone in the next room!? “Yeah … ok, I’ll see you later” she forced a small smile; she felt rotten inside, she could so easily just burst into tears at this very moment in time. He nodded back, “I will come and spend some time with you … I promise” he once again reaffirmed his promise. “I know … I love you” her voice turned into a whisper. “I love you more” he told her with sincerity, looking intently into her eyes, as he sensed she needed some reassurance, before he placed his key into the lock and made his way inside. Martha stood alone in the hallway, her bags in her hand and her heart breaking as she thought about Jack being with Lisa. Would he hold Lisa the way he holds her? Would he kiss her like he truely meant it? ‘Get a grip Martha! You’re stronger than this!’ she quickly thought to herself. Pulling herself together and shaking away her concerns, she placed her hand onto the surface of the wooden door, before pushing it open. She stepped inside her temporary new home; the door slamming shut behind her, trapping her inside. Standing in the centre of the room, she sighed. No sounds could be heard, it was just a large and spacious room (almost too large for just one person). Granted, it was a very pretty room, luscious deep maroon coloured walls, wooden bed posts, large flat screen TV and a marbled bathroom ... But something was missing. The truth was, she knew exactly why Lisa had chosen this hotel; it was the perfect place to spend a romantic weekend away with the person you love, and if Martha was in her shoes, she would have done the same thing. Unfortunately for Martha however, the person she loved was currently in the room next door, probably making out with her best friend at this very moment in time. While she was stuck here, alone and unwanted, and moping around in her own grumpy company… Oh the joy! ……………………………… Meanwhile… “Mhm, how about …” Lisa began as she shuffled over; maneuvering herself onto Jacks lap as she spoke, “we just make up some random excuse to tell the others and stay in here all day”, she grinned down at him with a giggle, as she wrapped her arms around his neck. “Yeah” he laughed nervously, “sounds like a plan”, he said as he ran his hands up and down her back. “But, don’t you want to go and explore first” he continued with slight hesitancy; it was the best excuse he could think of. Her eyes abruptly lit open at his comment. “Mhm, exploring sounds like fun” she smirked in a husky voice as she kissed him passionately on the lips. He innocently kissed her back, his body suddenly freezing however, and his eyes shooting open, as her hand unexpectedly dipped inside his trousers; gently rubbing him up and down. Pulling away she looked at him with lusty eyes, her face displaying a sweet smile as her hand still lingered within the depths of his trousers. His breath caught in his throat as he opened his mouth to speak; “You know, I was thinking more along the lines of; exploring the city,” he smiled through his discomfort, as he cocked an eyebrow; swallowing hard and finding it increasingly difficult to maintain control. “Aw, spoil sport” she pouted as she pulled her hand from out of his trousers. He smiled back, looking deeply into her eyes; there was so much care there, it was just a pity she was about to get her heart seriously broken. Leaning forward once again, he kissed her softly on the lips… This was never going to be easy! …………………………… (40 minutes later) A tap on the door caught her attention, and Martha speedily arose to answer it. “Hey” she beamed through relief, thrilled to see Jack standing at her doorway; more importantly, he was alone. “Come in”, she welcomed him inside. Walking through he made his way towards the bed, and with an exhausted sigh, he took a seat. “So” she started, as she tentatively walked over towards him, “… how’s it going in there?” she asked awkwardly. His face fell as he shook his head helplessly, “In one word; nightmarish” he shot out. “I’m strangely getting the feeling she’s going to be somewhat uncontrollable” he said with a long groan. “To be totally frank … Horniest woman I’ve ever met” he told her with a straight face, “And that’s not an exaggeration”. Martha scrunched up her nose; she really didn’t want to hear that. “Oh … well, what are you going to do?” she asked, her face bearing a frown as she stood before him. “Nothing” he shrugged weakly, “I’m just going to have to think of some incredibly believable excuse, as to why I can’t have sex with her” he told her simply, as he rolled his eyes. Her face fell in sadness; she hated putting Jack through so much pain. “But hey, I’ll handle it” he perked up, trying to remain positive as he noticed the sadness pour across Martha’s face; “I’m just glad that you’re here” he smiled, reaching out to her and holding her hips. He guided her towards him, helping her up and onto his lap where she encircled her legs around his waist, unknowingly mirroring the position Lisa was previously in. Looking into his eyes she suddenly felt consumed with shyness. She was bizarrely almost too nervous to kiss him. The guilt and awkwardness of knowing Lisa was just next door was slowly eating her alive. But she tried her utter most to brush it aside. Jack was here with her now… everything else could be dealt with later. Hesitantly she leant down. It was almost as if they had never even kissed before, as she softly claimed his lips; kissing him tenderly. As the seconds passed by, she gradually relaxed, feeling as he soothingly massaged his tongue with her own, making the most of their time alone. “So how’d you get away?” she asked as she pulled away from their kiss. “She went for a shower … she’ll probably come over when she’s ready” he said as he ran his hands up and down her legs. “Oh right” she replied; her face displaying a small smile, before she leant back in and kissed him softly. She felt as his hands slid under her top, caressing her sides and back so carefully. He moaned beneath her lips as she pushed herself into him; their bodies gradually grinding against one another. Feeling himself losing control, he reluctantly pulled away. “Martha” he began, swallowing away his built-up saliva "… maybe we should … put the tele on or something?” he suggested through his current state of breathlessness, his face in a frown as he spoke. Her head tilted as she silently questioned him. “You know … as a distraction” his eyebrows briefly rose, while he took long and heavy breaths, trying to calm himself down. “Oh” she hushed softly; as she came to realize what he meant. “Yeah, I guess it wouldn’t be wise to …” her words drifted away in awkwardness. Now wasnt the time to be engaging in anything too intimate; despite how much they craved it. Shuffling off his lap, she took a seat on the bed beside him; sitting neatly with her hands folded in her lap. He smiled across at her sweetly, leaning over and giving her a kiss on the cheek. “You know, soon we wont even have to think about stopping” he said as he tried to lighten the mood. “Once it’s all out in the open, we’ll have the rest of our lives to be together”. She produced a small smile, “I’m looking forward to that”. He smiled back, his hand moving to stroke the base of her back. “Yeah, me too”… Preview: Tears
Barbara Posted April 24, 2008 Report Posted April 24, 2008 Happy J&M times, makes Rachel update faster I hope there will be more happy JM times then. Poor Martha! All alone in a beautiful hotel room when the man she loves he is with another woman. Seriously, if Lisa wanted to be alone with Jack, she shouldn't have invited their friends. She's stupid! The preview doesn't sound good. But like I said previously, it'd better be Lisa's tears. More please.
kaciexox Posted April 25, 2008 Report Posted April 25, 2008 Stupid Lisa Can you get anymore stupid Jack is so cute I love him. Poor Martha Preview: Tears No tears for Martha or Jack only Lisa Update soon
Tasha Posted April 25, 2008 Report Posted April 25, 2008 Awww...poor Martha Jack's so sweet though Stupid Lisa I agree with Kacie, tears for Lisa, not Martha More please
bay girl Posted April 25, 2008 Report Posted April 25, 2008 It better be tears for that yucky girl Lisa. I feel sad for J/M. Poor sods. Jack just needs to dump that girl, and move on. Loving it. More please.
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