matticus01 Posted May 3, 2008 Report Posted May 3, 2008 WOW . . . . . . GO JACKY . . . ohhhhhhhhh noooooooooooooooo . . . Lisa . . . no more writing needed
Barbara Posted May 3, 2008 Report Posted May 3, 2008 The speech Jack gave to Martha about her giving him her heart was so sweet! That man didn't have to be so rude. Martha didn't spill the drinks on purpose. Jack is a hero. Love Tasha's reaction. Lisa is finally starting to realise there's something going on. More please.
kaciexox Posted May 4, 2008 Report Posted May 4, 2008 Awwww isn't Jack just like the most adorable thing ever I want him. Yay Lisa finally realises something is going on. I can't believe it has taken her this long She's so annoying urgh! Update soon
bay girl Posted May 4, 2008 Report Posted May 4, 2008 OMG i just keep loving this even more. Jack was such a hero. He can be mine anytime. And finally Lisa is opening her eyes, and seeing what is really there. Sucked in. More soon please.
stephyrose4 Posted May 4, 2008 Report Posted May 4, 2008 Aw awesome chapter! Jack the hero! awwww :wub: That was so cute. Be mine Jack!! Anyways excellent chapter. Update soon Cos i'm obsessed now And ps; I reckon Jack should dump Lisa after the holiday!
Tasha Posted May 4, 2008 Report Posted May 4, 2008 paha, sucked in Lisa Jack is Marthas knight in shining armour Great chapter By the way, its manners not manors More please
vale4eva Posted May 4, 2008 Report Posted May 4, 2008 Thanks peeps Another update Warning: Chapter not suitable for younger readers! Chapter 32: “Right, I think I’ll be heading off now” Lisa spoke up, having finished the last of her drink. “Will you come up in about half an hour?” she placed her hand on Jacks knee as she spoke to him seductively; her eyelashes flickering at him flirtatiously. “Um, yeah … sure” replied a nervous Jack. He could only imagine what she had planned for tonight … that thought alone filled him with dread. “Ok cool. I’ll see you in a bit then … good night guys” she hopped off her chair and strolled happily out the bar. Kim chuckled to himself as he watched her walk away, “wonder what she’s got planned,” he smirked smartly, “I doubt you’ll be getting much sleep tonight mate”. “Hh, yeah” Jack replied as he displayed an awkward smile, shuffling in his chair through his discomfort, before turning to glance at Martha, but she merely kept her head down; avoiding Jacks eye-line completely. Turning back to look out into the open air, he inwardly sighed. He felt so helpless and incapable of carrying on. He knew how much this meant to Martha, but he couldn’t help but wonder whether all of this upcoming heartbreak, was really necessary. If only they had been honest and up-front from the start, then none of this would be happening… ………………………………… (30 minutes later) “Right mate, I think you’re wanted aren’t you!?” Exclaimed an amused Kim as he gave Jacks side a playful nudge. “Oh … yeah, right”, he let out an awkward smile; suddenly feeling as he became consumed with the jitters. “I guess, I better get going then” he slowly added; but he failed to move, instead he just remained as rigid as stone in his chair. “Yeah, well have fun” Kim emphasized his words, “but not too much fun yeah; we don’t want to be hearing any strange noises in the night, if you know what I mean” he smirked; raising his eyebrow at the girls. “Give it a rest Kim” Tasha giggled as she whacked him on the arm. “Seriously though Jack, have a good night … it is your birthday after all” she smiled. “Yeah … thanks” he glanced across to Tasha; unable to look into her eyes for too long as he feared she’d sense something was wrong. Turning to look at Martha, he took note of her worried expression; before she caught him looking at her, prompting her to give him a small and supportive smile. He smiled back sadly; his face falling and the colour in his cheeks draining away, as he dreaded what was to come. Taking to his feet, he turned back to Martha, “are you sure you’re alright?” he asked in concern; referring to the previous incident. “Yeah, I’m fine. And thanks for looking out for me” she smiled shyly, “And, if he comes back, I’ll just…” “Oh don’t you worry, I’ll totally kick his ass if he comes back!” Kim butted in; trying to be manly, “that guy won’t know what’s hit him!” “Yeah, thanks man” Jack chuckled back. “Well, I guess I’ll see you guys tomorrow then” he reluctantly added, before gathering up the courage to walk out of the bar … heading straight towards doomsville… ………………………………… (8pm) He swallowed hard; watching as she slowly unraveled the fluffy robe that covered her petite frame, before she let it fall to the ground, leaving her standing before him, topless. She smiled shyly, walking forward as she presented herself to him, waiting for him to react… He looked at her with distant eyes. Not that she seemed to notice; she liked the feeling of his eyes on her, but she was certain his hands would prove to be more delightful… She continued to wait, but he merely stood there, rigid on the spot as he looked across at her with uneasy eyes. “Don’t you want to touch me?” she asked him as she gazed into his eyes, “You know, I’m not going to break” she said with a sweet chuckle. He smiled back, “I know” he whispered back. Swallowing away the lump in his throat, he stepped forward, placing his hands on her waist; “You deserve so much more than I can give you” he said softly as he looked deeply into her eyes. She titled her head in confusion, “What are you talking about?” He sighed, shaking his head; knowing that if he said the wrong thing, it would all be over, and Martha would forever hate him, “it doesn’t matter”. She frowned through her uncertainty, but she tried to brush it aside; tonight was about the two of them coming together, and she was adamant they’d both enjoy it. “You know what I think” she started as she began to unbutton his shirt, occasionally glancing up at him through her long and fluttery eyelashes, “I think you just need to relax” she said as she undid the final button. “You’re so tense all the time” she added as she felt his tight muscles. “Let’s just forget all about work, and our friends and family … and Martha” she said as she emphasized her last word; looking into his eyes for any reaction at the mention of her name, but he failed to move. His insides told a different story however, just the mention of Martha’s name made his heart melt. “Just let me help you … yeah” she hushed up to him, “let me help you relax”… He let out a calm breath; the thought of Martha drifting away as her soft words began to soothe him. Leaning downwards, he fell into her kiss; his muscles flexing as he wrapped his arms around her; before feeling as her weight against him gently led him over towards the bed. She moaned through desire as her back fell onto the mattress, bringing Jack down on top of her as she went. She continued to kiss him, before throwing her head back to one side and allowing for him to trail kisses along her neck. Every kiss Jack gave her felt like a mountain of effort. He inwardly cringed every time she moaned through pleasure, while feeling as her hands worked over his form; investigating his every inch. At this moment in time, he could honestly say he’d never felt worse. The truth was, he felt like crying, he could so easily just burst into tears, like a little child wanting its mother, but he couldn’t, he would have to force himself to go on … if not for Lisa, then for Martha’s sake… Martha… He pictured her face in his mind, imagining what it would feel like to have her in his arms, holding and caressing her all over. But at the sound of Lisa’s voice, he abruptly pulled away; unable to stand anymore of it. Pulling back as if he had just touched a hot iron, he looked down at her with distressed and vulnerable eyes. “Jack what’s wrong?” she asked in a breathless whisper. “I’m sorry … I can’t” he shook his head; his eyes glassing over with tears. Watching the spark of pleasure drain from her face and leaving only sadness, was just too painful for him to handle … His heart broke at her misery, and it was all because of him… He just had to get out of there… …………………………………… (Martha’s room) Hearing a commotion outside, she walked over towards the door. Opening it wide, she peered down the hallway. She was shocked to see Jack running off in the distance, clearly distraught, while Lisa was left behind, her bath robe wrapped around her as she clung onto it with sweaty hands. Frowning at Lisa, she looked at her in question, before she turned back to face the direction that Jack had disappeared, and without thinking, she ran after him; leaving Lisa to wallow away in her own upset and confusion. Preview: What now for Jack, Martha and Lisa? Will Jack finally crack and spill the beans to a horrified Lisa?
Barbara Posted May 4, 2008 Report Posted May 4, 2008 Kim's reaction was just so . Why do guys always have to act like that? Lisa shouldn't have invited her friends if she had romantic plans in mind and wanted to be alone with Jack. Glad Jack didn't go through with it. Can't wait to know what's going to happen next. I just hope Jack dumps Lisa as soon as possible. More please.
Zetti Posted May 4, 2008 Report Posted May 4, 2008 “Martha, I honestly don’t need a present from you … that’s not what this day should be about” he gently rubbed her side, “and besides, you’ve already given me the greatest gift I could ever want”. She frowned in question, looking into his eyes, “Really? What’s that?” He smiled, gently touching her cheek as he spoke, “your heart”. So cute I want him
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