Barbara Posted May 9, 2008 Report Posted May 9, 2008 Jack and Martha should just be honest. He has to break up with Lisa. I'm not a fan of Lisa but she deserves someone who loves her. And then Jack and Martha can finally be together. Jack does seem to cry a lot, doesn't he? Turning back to face her, he took note of her watery eyes; her fear and sadness almost too unbearable for Jack to witness. Sighing once again he continued, “I’m sorry” he hushed back, before stepping forward and welcoming her into his arms. “Look, no matter what, we’ll still have each other” he said with encouragement, " … and you know, they say time is a great healer, so who knows what could happen” he tried his best to remain positive, although right now it was all looking rather bleak. Love that part. So sweet! And Jack and Martha get some time alone (See Av ) Love the sound of that part of the preview! More please. PS: Good luck with your last exam! Hope the others went well. And have fun on your short weekend break!
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 9, 2008 Report Posted May 9, 2008 Hot scenes Hope they're not too x-rated lol
valli Posted May 9, 2008 Report Posted May 9, 2008 As to the Lisa/Martha/Jack-triangle, I think that Lisa deserves to know the truth. I don't like her, and I don't think I ever will, but she deserves the truth. They have been going behind her back, and Lisa is after all Martha's friend. And like Barbara said, then JM can be together Jack does seem to have been crying a lot lately, but he has a reason to. And I don't mind a guy who can tell how he feels Favourite part: Turning back to face her, he took note of her watery eyes; her fear and sadness almost too unbearable for Jack to witness. Sighing once again he continued, “I’m sorry” he hushed back, before stepping forward and welcoming her into his arms. “Look, no matter what, we’ll still have each other” he said with encouragement, " … and you know, they say time is a great healer, so who knows what could happen” he tried his best to remain positive, although right now it was all looking rather bleak. Jack is really good with words But it was such a cute line And Jack and Martha get some time alone (See Av ) Sounds interesting, can't wait! More please!
stephyrose4 Posted May 10, 2008 Report Posted May 10, 2008 Excellent chapter. i love it stttiiiilll!!! more please
vale4eva Posted May 11, 2008 Report Posted May 11, 2008 Hot scenes Hope they're not too x-rated lol Oh dear, wait until you read chapter 35 It wouldnt surprise me if someone ended up removing it lol Note. If the fic has somehow disapeared () after chapter 35 has been posted, its because its in the adult section lol Warning: content not suitable for younger readers Enjoy Chapter 34: Martha sat fully clothed on the side of the swimming pool, twiddling her thumbs and fingers nervously, while her feet dangled into the warm chlorinated water. Her eyes remained open wide and her ears ‘pricked’ up as she kept an eye out for Jack and Lisa. It was the following morning, and since the moment that Jack had made his way back to Lisa, Martha had been unawares, silently fretting about what Jack would say to her, and more importantly, whether she would believe it; but much to Martha’s surprise (and somewhat relief), she spotted Jack and Lisa walking out hand in hand; their faces lit up in warm smiles as they giggled like a couple very much in love. Clearly Jacks explanation had done the trick. Martha smiled as she caught their eye-line, giving them a wave and encouraging them to come over to her. She couldn’t help but feel a weight being lifted off her shoulders; thankful that everything appeared to be back to ‘normal’. “Hey guys” she grinned. “Hey!” They replied in unison. “Where’s Kim and Tash?” asked Lisa as she and Jack came to a stop; standing in front of Martha. “Oh, they’re not down yet, in fact they’re probably still fast asleep knowing them” Martha smirked, rolling her eyes. “Yeah, probably,” chuckled Lisa. “I’m going to get some juices, I’ll be back in a bit” said Jack before walking off towards the juice bar. Taking a seat on the edge of the swimming pool, Lisa dangled her feet into the water; mimicking Martha’s position. “Actually, while it’s just us, I wanted to say thank you,” she turned to an oblivious Martha. “Jack and I had a really good talk last night. He told me about his mom and why he got so upset. I had no idea how hard his birthday would be for him, not to mention this being his first major relationship, I guess the combination of the two just got too much for him; understandably”. “Oh, right, yeah” Martha slowly nodded; trying to look as if she knew what she was talking about. “Well, you looked after him, so I just wanted to say thank you” she smiled in gratitude. “Oh, please” she tried to brush it off, “its totally fine … I didn’t really do much to be honest,” she shrugged nervously. “Well, you obviously did something, so, whatever it was, I appreciate it” she said, reaching over and giving her friend a hug. Martha gratefully received the embrace; but inside she couldn’t help but feel awful, as in a couple of days, all of Lisa’s happiness would soon be harshly ripped away. …………………………………… It was 11am, and following Kim and Tasha’s appearance, the 5 friends had decided to take a walk. Apparently there was an amusement park a few blocks away, so they had agreed to check it out. After all, they were heading home tomorrow, so they wanted to make the most of their final day… Lisa and Tasha walked on ahead, linked arm in arm as they chatted about the various celebrity gossip; meanwhile, Martha purposely trailed behind, catching Jacks attention so she could talk to him. “So, what did you say to her last night?” hushed Martha as she walked beside her boyfriend. “Oh, nothing much” he began, keeping his eyes fixed ahead to avoid drawing any attention to them, “I just ranted about how I always miss my mom at times like this, and how I’ve never had a serious relationship and didn’t want to rush things … it was mostly just drivel, it was the best thing I could come up with at the time, she seemed to by it though” he told her. “Yeah, it looks that way … you know, I hate to say ‘congrats’ but … you did good Jack” she turned to him, giving him a small smile. “Yeah, thanks” he awkwardly smiled back, unwilling to accept a congratulations; he could never view lying as an accomplishment. “I’ll just be happy when this whole things out in the open”. ………………………………… “Wooooo!” cheered Jack, “That’s right people!” he threw his arms above his head in delight; “I am the basket ball champion!” he beamed; holding his head up high in pride. He was finally starting to feel better. Martha chuckled to herself as she watched him a few feet away. “Here you go mate, well done,” the owner of the game handed Jack his prize. “A cuddly toy?” Jack scrunched up his nose as he held it in his hand. “Haven’t you got anything a little … manlier?” he questioned him as he raised his eyebrows, “this isn’t going to do much good for my rep man”. “Sorry mate, its all I’ve got” he laughed; before turning to greet the next willing male that came along… “Suits you” Martha called out to him; stifling her laugh as she walked forward. “The cuddly toy I mean … very macho” she smirked. “Hmm, thanks” he grinned at her. She smiled, standing before him with her hands clasped neatly in front of her. “Here you go” he handed her the fluffy bear. “What?” “It’s yours, I won it for you” he smiled. She glanced away awkwardly, lowering her voice slightly, “Jack, I can’t have this … you should give it to Lisa”, she said, handing it back to him. “Don’t be silly” he replied, failing to take it from her, “she’s not even around anyway … you can just pretend that you won it” he shrugged. She released a heavy breath, looking up at him in uncertainty, before she eventually smiled, “ok … thank you” she pouted at him sweetly. He shook his head at her constant worrying, “Come on” he chuckled softly as he wrapped his arm around her shoulders, “lets go find the others.” ……………………………… (An hour and a half later) “Are you guys ready to go? I’m kind of bored”. Moaned an exhausted Martha; as she leant with her back against the surface. “Are you kidding!? I’m having a whale of a time” beamed Lisa. Martha glared at her friend as she folded her arms in annoyance, “Fine, well you can stay here then; I’m going to head back”. “Oh, ok, we’ll see you in a few hours” Lisa responded, her eyes not failing to stray from the game she was currently playing. “Actually, I’ll come with you” Jack piped up, “I can’t have you walking back on your own now can I!?” he flashed Martha a secretive suggestive smile while no one was watching. Now, while the others were distracted, was the perfect opportunity to dash away and spend some quality time together. “I’m going to head back” he turned to Lisa; but she was too captivated by the games machine to reply with anything other than a nod. Taking this as an ‘ok,’ he happily set off back to the hotel with Martha… …………………………………… “It’ll be alright, wont it Jack?” she asked, as she gently swayed in the water before him. They were currently situated in the hotels swimming pool, it was quiet and the sun wasn’t overly intense, so it was perfect for spending some quality romantic alone time. “Yeah, of course … it’ll all be fine in the end” he tried to stay positive for her sake. “Let’s not think about it though, let’s just focus on what’s happening right now” he told her. “Agreed,” she gave him a nod. “Good, because I’d prefer to do a little less worrying, and a little more of focusing on my sexy, semi-naked girlfriend. Who just so happens to be dripping wet, by the way … talk about the ultimate turn on,” he smirked. He leant in closer to her, wrapping his arms around her body and kissing her neck. She giggled as she threw her head to one side; her back becoming increasingly pressed up against the tiles, but it didn’t bother her, even if it left a mark, it was well worth it. “Jack” she giggled softly, “we can’t” she weakly protested, feeling as his hands gripped her legs; wrapping them around his waist. “Who says we can’t?” he asked as he continued to trail kisses on her neck. “I do! … anyone could walk passed, what if Lisa or Tasha comes back”. He couldnt help but release an irritated huff, as he pulled away from her neck; he was starting to get sick of all this constant worrying. Looking into her eyes he replied, “They won’t” he said simply, before he leant inwards to kiss her lips. She pushed at his chest, preventing him from kissing her, “But what if…” “Martha! Will you stop this!” he silenced her, “You know, you’re so much easier to kiss when you’re not talking”. “Oh don’t be a pain Jack, I’m only being realistic” she scolded him; releasing his waist and standing upright as she turned away from him in annoyance. He sighed, sensing she was in a strop with him now, “ok, I’m sorry” he apologized, “Its just, we're leaving tomorrow, which means we’ll probably never get any time alone”. She turned to him, her eyes opened wide, “And you call this alone time? We're currently in a public swimming pool Jack, where anyone could easily catch us! It’s not exactly what I’d call alone” she rolled her eyes. “Alright fine” he exclaimed, “how about we go back up to the room then?” he suggested, trying his best to avoid a full blown argument. “No, I’m not in the mood now” she said in a dull tone as she brushed passed him and swam off into the other direction. Another sigh of irritation escaped his lips as he watched her swim away. He hated it when they fought. But, instead of leaving it, he decided to persist. After all, persistency was one of his best qualities… Following her over to the other end of the pool, he swam up behind her. Wrapping his hands around her waist, he brought her into his chest; kissing her softly on the neck. “Don’t Jack” she whispered in objection; rather unconvincingly. She could feel his arousal touch her back, just the feeling made her body tingle all over. “Why?” he questioned her, “…You’re allowed to enjoy it” he added as he kept a comfortable hold of her figure. She sighed, “But I can’t.” Pulling away from him, she turned around to face him, “because if I start … I won’t be able to stop” she spoke weakly; her face displaying so much sadness. “You don’t have to” he lightly shook his head. “But … what about Lisa?” she looked at him sadly. He swallowed hard; failing to understand why he would soon say such a thing ... (had it gotten to a point where he was literally beyond caring?) ... causally the words just slipped from his lips… “What about her?” he ignorantly hushed back; his shoulders gently shrugging. She frowned as she looked into his eyes, shocked at his distinct lack of emotion as he spoke such hurtful words. Before within the blink of an eye, she felt as his hands grasped her hips, their lower halves suddenly being ground together and their lips colliding in a passionate kiss. Powerless to stop him, she kissed him back… Preview: Martha and Jack continue to enjoy their quality alone time ... Severely X RATED! ---> See avatar TIMES ONE MILLION! .... Content is NOT for the faint hearted! You have been warned
valli Posted May 11, 2008 Report Posted May 11, 2008 Rachel, it looks like I have to keep an eye on you. Anyway, another great chapter! Not much to say other than that this was my favourite part: “Wooooo!” cheered Jack, “That’s right people!” he threw his arms above his head in delight; “I am the basket ball champion!” he beamed; holding his head up high in pride. He was finally starting to feel better. Martha chuckled to herself as she watched him a few feet away. “Here you go mate, well done,” the owner of the game handed Jack his prize. “A cuddly toy?” Jack scrunched up his nose as he held it in his hand. “Haven’t you got anything a little … manlier?” he questioned him as he raised his eyebrows, “this isn’t going to do much good for my rep man”. “Sorry mate, its all I’ve got” he laughed; before turning to greet the next willing male that came along… “Suits you” Martha called out to him; stifling her laugh as she walked forward. “The cuddly toy I mean … very macho” she smirked. Too funny And this fic is soon finished. That means... moving time That means I have to... *thinks of the awful memory when she had to move More Than Anyone* More please! (I think...)
Barbara Posted May 11, 2008 Report Posted May 11, 2008 Lisa fell for it again. She's stupid, isn't she? “A cuddly toy?” Jack scrunched up his nose as he held it in his hand. “Haven’t you got anything a little … manlier?” he questioned him as he raised his eyebrows, “this isn’t going to do much good for my rep man”. That was funny! Men and their reputation “Here you go” he handed her the fluffy bear. “What?” “It’s yours, I won it for you” he smiled. How sweet! Preview: Martha and Jack continue to enjoy their quality alone time ... Severely X RATED! ---> See avatar TIMES ONE MILLION! .... Content is NOT for the faint hearted! You have been warned Can't wait to read it! More please.
vale4eva Posted May 11, 2008 Report Posted May 11, 2008 Rachel, it looks like I have to keep an eye on you. Damn! I forgot you were a librarian ... I shouldnt have said anything And this fic is soon finished. That means... moving time That means I have to... *thinks of the awful memory when she had to move More Than Anyone* More please! (I think...) Oh dear You have some fun times ahead then lol And this fic isnt anywhere close to finishing, (probably another 15 or so chapters I recon) so you really do have some fun times ahead! lmao You might require a few litres of coffee with this one My sincere appologies *sweet smile* lol
valli Posted May 11, 2008 Report Posted May 11, 2008 *faints* You just had to say that, didn't you? And for the record, I don't like coffee
vale4eva Posted May 11, 2008 Report Posted May 11, 2008 PS: Good luck with your last exam! Hope the others went well. And have fun on your short weekend break! Oh, and I forgot to say; Thanks Oh my god! Im spamming my own thread
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