valli Posted May 11, 2008 Report Posted May 11, 2008 *shakes head* Do I have to take you for spamming? Bad Rachel No wait, now I'm just making my job harder! More comments = more work
Barbara Posted May 11, 2008 Report Posted May 11, 2008 PS: Good luck with your last exam! Hope the others went well. And have fun on your short weekend break! Oh, and I forgot to say; Thanks Oh my god! Im spamming my own thread You're welcome! You're lucky. My exams haven't even started yet!
Tasha Posted May 11, 2008 Report Posted May 11, 2008 Great chapter He won her a stuffed toy. So sweet. More please and Good luck with whatever exam you have left You'll be a free girl soon
stephyrose4 Posted May 12, 2008 Report Posted May 12, 2008 Aw how sweet, He is so cute. More please! Severely X-Rated
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 12, 2008 Report Posted May 12, 2008 Severely X-rated... HMMMM... Nope, I will not be good and stay away from that chappie I can never resist a JM love scene
bay girl Posted May 12, 2008 Report Posted May 12, 2008 Aww he gave her a stuffed toy. Damn, next chapter is going to be smokin. Cant wait. LOL. Great update.
dee83 Posted May 12, 2008 Report Posted May 12, 2008 next chapter sounds like its going to be really hot and smokin cant wait to read it great so far can`t wait for an update
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 13, 2008 Report Posted May 13, 2008 Can you give us a sneak peek??????? Pleeeeeeeeeease?
puja Posted May 13, 2008 Report Posted May 13, 2008 OMG I've finally caught up Apologies for leaving it this long to catch up with the fic but as you know, I've not been on bttb much.. But this fic is brilliant! I love how you've portrayed Jack and Martha's relationship and their constant battle accepting their 'new relationship' It does bring back some memories of the good ol' Shannis days *sighs* As long as Jack and Martha don't end up with the same fate If that happens then, then I might just not talk to you; ever again haha. Anyway, I know you've got your exam coming up (all the best for that ) so just update when you can. Can't wait to read more!
vale4eva Posted May 13, 2008 Report Posted May 13, 2008 ^ Aw! Love you Puja Can you give us a sneak peek??????? Nope, but I can give you the entire chapter instead (Thanks to Krystal for her tips on this chapter ) BTW, this chapter is severely naughty … the worst I’ve written in a looooong time! If you cant handle it, then … don’t blame me, blame Krystal for showing me a scene from The Atonement WARNING! CHAPTER WILL NOT BE SUITABLE FOR YOUNGER READERS!!! Chapter 35: “Jack” she released a low groan beneath his lips, “maybe we should go up stairs” she panted, her body turning limp in his arms. “No,” he shook his head at her vigorously, “I can’t wait that long” he added, as he placed a hand on her backside, pulling her bikini shorts down to her thighs. “Wait! What!?” she panicked, feeling herself becoming exposed, before she quickly pulled them back up, “we can’t do it here!” “Why not?” he asked in between each heavy breath he took. “What’s the worst they can do? Tell the hotel owner? We’re leaving tomorrow anyway”. “It doesn’t matter” she hissed at him; her voice low to avoid attracting any attention, “and can’t you see how gross this is, having sex in a public swimming pool! Eugh!” she turned her nose up at him. “So what!?” he ignorantly continued, “it’s exciting!” he beamed. … “Haven’t one of your friends ever asked you what the weirdest place is that you’ve had sex?” he randomly questioned her. She scrunched up her face in disgust, “Actually, that’s never come up” she scoffed; rolling her eyes in irritation. “Well, if you’re ever asked in the future, you’ll have a great way to answer back” he grinned; feeling awfully pleased with himself, “and FYI, I wasn’t referring to having pool sex, ew!” he looked at her as if she was stupid, “I was thinking more along the lines of …” his voice drifted away as he took a scan of the hotels surroundings, “over there, under the trees. Its quiet, shaded; no one will see us”. She looked at him as if he had two heads, “Jack, you do baffle me sometimes” she shook her head at him. He chuckled back at her amusing expression. “But you still love me” he smiled sweetly. “Unfortunately yes” she sighed helplessly; before grinning back at him and wrapping her arms around his neck. “Sooo, it’s a no to outdoor sex then?” he pulled his head back to look into her eyes. “Damn right it is! As if I’d ever do it in or around a swimming pool!” she scoffed. He rolled his eyes at her, “You know, there’s nothing wrong with adding a little excitement into our lives, I don’t get why you have to be so uptight all of the time.” She took an irritated glance to her left, “Oh great; the 'uptight' comment. I was wondering when that would crop up” she exclaimed in sarcasm. “Sorry” he couldn’t help but snigger. “I just mean, people are having sex anywhere and everywhere these days, why should ours be strictly confined to the bedroom?” he questioned her; his eyebrow rising in the process. “I can not believe we’re having this conversation”. “Alright, alright” he chuckled as he put his hands up in defence, “I get the hint … we’ll move on”. He said as he decided to back down for once; Martha could be severely stubborn at times, and with the limited amount of alone time they had, it wasn’t wise to waste it on arguing. Wrapping his arms around her waist, he pulled her closer in. She lay her head down on his naked chest; her forehead frowning as so many thoughts rushed through her mind. “Do you really think I’m uptight?” she pouted in a sulk as she looked up at him. “Hmm, maybe just a teensy bit” he giggled. “So, you think that having sex outdoors would make me less uptight?” she questioned him. He shrugged; holding her in his arms, “I don’t know … maybe” he grinned. He noticed her uneasy expression as she looked at him, “Martha” he chuckled, “you’re not uptight, don’t worry. I just want you to have some fun, that’s all”. She released a loud breath, her vigilant and uneasy eyes scanning the area around them, “ok” she hesitantly answered. “Ok what?” he asked through confusion. “Ok, let’s do this” she looked at him with wide eyes, noticing his sudden look of surprise. “But not here” she quickly added, “we could … try the steam room?” she suggested. His face lit up at her reply; a cheeky and seductive grin spread across his face as he looked at her. “You know, technically that’s not classed as outdoor sex, but … considering it’s your first time and all, I’m willing to let it go” he grinned, eagerly grabbing her by the hand and pulling her along, “Come on”. “Fine” she followed him out, “but if we get caught, I am so going to kick your ass” she warned him; dread filling her voice as she spoke, before her lips curved into a delightful grin … she had to admit it, this was already getting rather exciting… …………………………… “Make sure you put the ‘not vacant’ sign up” she said anxiously; her lip quivering through her nerves as she walked inside the steamy cubicle. “Nah, how about we leave that” replied Jack; his face displaying a cheeky grin. “WHAT!? ARE YOU CRAZY!?” she burst out loud; before quickly adjusting her volume pitch to avoid dragging any attention towards them, “someone could walk in” she spoke through gritted teeth. “Yeah, so!?” he shrugged; trying his best to stifle his laugh. She frowned at him through bewilderment. “Look Martha, we agreed we’d make things exciting. And in my book, the rules are, if you have sex in a public place, you have to do it properly … which means it’s a no to the ‘not vacant’ sign; sorry” he couldn’t help but snigger as she glared at him. Oh how he loved to rile her up. Closing the door behind him he stood in front of her; preparing to take her into his arms. But he was brought to a stop when Martha hastily reacted. “Ok, well lets not mess about” she quickly spoke up, “lets just get this over with” she hurried in pulling down his trunks. He stood before her, unable to prevent the light chuckle of amusement that slipped from his lips; “oh, how romantic is this!” he exclaimed through sarcasm, giggling as he felt her tug at his shorts. “Don’t joke around Jack, this isn’t funny,” she winged, standing up straight like a child having a tantrum. Her lips gradually forming into a pout. “Martha” he laughed, grabbing her by the arms and stopping her movements, “please calm down … this is supposed to be fun, but right now it’s more comical than anything else” he smirked. She continued to pout, “Ugh. You think I’m a total loser don’t you”. He smirked at her comment, “What I think is that you need to sit down” he took her hand, encouraging her over towards the wooden benches. They had only been occupying the steamed cubicle for approximately 5 minutes, and already it was pretty damn hot; even the benches were now moist due to the humidity of the atmosphere. They sat down, their legs dangling over the side as they turned to face each other. “You need to relax a little” he said as he placed his fingers on her shoulders, drawing circles into her skin and massaging her muscles. “This shouldn’t be about getting stressed all of the time, it’s about having fun … and if we get caught, then so be it! It’s all apart of the thrill … think of it as an adventure”. She nodded slowly, still not entirely convinced, but she was willing to give it a go. “Look, turn around” he told her, “lets try and relieve those tight back muscles of yours”. Doing as she was told, she turned her back to him, removing her hair out of the way and letting it rest over her one shoulder. She sighed through peacefulness as his hands worked her back, gently caressing her skin and soothing her muscles. That and the added element of the heat, was enough to send her into a deep and powerful slumber. “Mhm, that’s nice” she said dreamily, closing her eyes as her tension gradually drifted away. He slowly leant downwards, bringing his lips towards her warm, soft skin and kissing her neck. He peppered kisses all over the moist length of her neck, before he gently tugged on her earlobe, squeezing the lobe between his lips, and feeling as she leant her back into him. His hands soon ran up and down her arms, pulling down the straps of her bikini as he went. Her head suddenly felt like a hot air balloon, her body almost floating as she sensed herself begin to sway; she opened her eyes… “Jack” she called out to him; almost deliriously. Her body gently turning and her arms reaching out for him to hold her; a look of vulnerability present in her eyes as she begged for him to take her. Grabbing her hands, he helped her move around, steadying her as she went, before she faced him, lifting herself upwards and onto his lap; her legs wrapping around his waist as she went. “You know …” he began breathlessly, holding her in his arms, “it probably wasn’t the best idea to come in here” he smiled weakly, “I think we’re already on the verge of dehydration”. She chuckled softly, but it was more of a hot breath than a laugh. He felt her hot breath on his neck, her body was now limp and lifeless in his arms … and they hadn’t even done anything yet! Using all of his strength, he gripped onto her body, preparing himself for the wild ride ahead… Standing upwards he kept her with him, her arms all the while wrapped around his neck, keeping her off the floor, while his hands removed her swim briefs; casting them onto the ground. Her now-material-free legs encircled his lower half, her head lowering downwards to rest in the crook of his neck. She let her eyes fall shut, feeling as his hand fiddled around beneath her, but she naively settled herself down, relaxing her body to rest; unaware of how eager Jack really was. She gasped, jolting backwards; her body turning rigid in his arms as he quickly delve inside her. Her breath hitched in her throat as her eyes became watery. She couldn’t help the whimper of pleasure that slipped from her lips however, as she felt their bodies connect. She looked deeply into his eyes as she swallowed away the dry lump in her throat. “I love you Jack,” her quivering voice made out a whisper; her breath in a noticeably heavy pant. “I love you too” he replied in a low and husky voice. Keeping one hand on her lower back, he held her inwards, while his other hand rose to cup her face, pulling her in for a wet and passionate kiss. Pulling away, they looked into each others eyes; their bodies shaking through the intensity of the moment; the hot steam from the sauna and the anticipation of what they craved so badly was indescribable. What was once quite a comical moment, had now turned into the hottest sexual act they had ever experienced... Their foreheads wrinkled through their tension, the strain on both of their faces became more and more evident, as she slowly moved her body against him; all the while desperate to cling on and feel more… Her mind was turning a blank; she was delirious, her eyes dropping heavy every so often as she lost all sense of control. She didn’t fail to feel the cool tiles against her back however, as he leant her against the wall; every hard thrust he made, pushing her backwards into the cool surface. She was actually thankful for the tiles being there, a little bit of hot and cold was such a welcome combination. As their actions continued to increase, so did their moans … their sweaty bodies also molding into one another as they moved together in motion… Finally reaching their climax, the world rushed back. The heat of the room suddenly consuming their bodies; their faces red due to the intensity of their passion, and their bodies wringing wet in saturation ... no feeling had ever been quite like this … Ps. I understand if you feel this should be moved
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