Sinful Seduction?

[Barbara]

That was a very hot chapter! I don't think I've ever read such a naughty chapter from you or anyone else.

“It doesn’t matter” she hissed at him; her voice low to avoid attracting any attention, “and can’t you see how gross this is, having sex in a public swimming pool! Eugh!” she turned her nose up at him.

“So what!?” he ignorantly continued, “it’s exciting!” he beamed.

I had the same reaction. Public swimming pools aren't always very clean. That would be gross. But not everyone has his own swimming pool.

While I was reading, I had the feeling someone was going to come in just at the wrong moment. Glad they weren't interrupted!

I wish a handsome man would give me a massage. I feel stressed and a massage would be great!

More please.

[vale4eva]

I don't think I've ever read such a naughty chapter from you or anyone else.

Clearly you havent read my other fics ... because this is rather tame compared to them

Believe it or not, but Ive calmed down considerably where sexual content is concerned

Although some may disagree

[puja]

Wow, that certainly was intense lol

Tut, tut Krystal. And here's me thinking you were all sweet, innocent and what not

Jack certainly likes to keep his sex life exciting, doesn't he?! It would be quite funny if they got busted though lol!

More soon please.

[dee83]

i`d have to agree with you on that he does like to keep his sex life exciting but I had to agree with him it would be so funny if they got caught

More soon please its great

[stephyrose4]

Haha very exciting and intense!

I really thought you were gonna get them caught

Would of been hilarious if they did!

More soon please!

[Tasha]

I think you've written more intense sex scenes than that in other fics (i think cant remember anymore). That wasnt that bad

Oh well

Great chapter

Sex in the steam room?? They are definitely insane. I cant even last 10mins in the steam room

More please

[matticus01]

WOW . . .

TALKA BOUT HOT

that was . . . very intense . . .sexual stuff and I loved it lol . . .

I thought they were going to get caught

Maybe they still will

Keep it up, amazing job

[jack+martha=trooluvv]

*clears throat*

Er-herm. In shock, so can't write much (I'm not used to sexy fics).

But the hotness was great, btw.

[Barbara]

I don't think I've ever read such a naughty chapter from you or anyone else.

Clearly you havent read my other fics ... because this is rather tame compared to them

Believe it or not, but Ive calmed down considerably where sexual content is concerned

Although some may disagree

I'm taking that back. I totally forgot about Bec's fic! My mind is working over time at the moment.

Rachel, it hasn't been a year since I registered on this forum. I read More Than Anyone. I think that's all unless you wrote a oneshot. But I'll read your other fics this summer, I promise!

[matticus01]

I don't think I've ever read such a naughty chapter from you or anyone else.

Clearly you havent read my other fics ... because this is rather tame compared to them

Believe it or not, but Ive calmed down considerably where sexual content is concerned

Although some may disagree

I'm taking that back. I totally forgot about Bec's fic! My mind is working over time at the moment.

Rachel, it hasn't been a year since I registered on this forum. I read More Than Anyone. I think that's all unless you wrote a oneshot. But I'll read your other fics this summer, I promise!

HEY! Im not that bad . . .

I dont think . . .

Am I really that bad . . .?

No Im not lol . . . anyway I havent updated in a while, either of my fics lol . . . its time I move my butt !

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm *grins an evil grin* I've got an idea!

Im off to write . . . hehe *grins*