stephyrose4 Posted June 10, 2008 Report Posted June 10, 2008 Aw poor Jacky boy How dare someone else hit on Martha .. Nah thats it Elli is so cute ! Martha you need to talk to Jack Your making everything else so worse Anyway great update.. Hope there will another update soon
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 10, 2008 Report Posted June 10, 2008 Elli should be the star character Get "jiggy" with her... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
zzazzb Posted June 10, 2008 Report Posted June 10, 2008 Eli! she's so cute. And only 8! don't be mad Jack Martha wont call Ben will he? hope you can update soon
valli Posted June 10, 2008 Report Posted June 10, 2008 Eli reminds me of... well, me But I wouldn't use the expression "get jiggy with her" I don't like Ben, he's just another obstacle in the JM saga >.< Hey, Rach, are you sure that you're not one of the scriptwriters on Home and Away? Anyway, Jack couldn't have made it more obvious even if he tried But that makes me wonder whether Tony and Kate knows how to use their eyes or not... And what shows does Eli really watch? More please!
EmyKate68 Posted June 10, 2008 Report Posted June 10, 2008 I'm very bad, I've been completely hooked by your fic but never commented before I love the scenario you've set up with them living as 'brother and sister' - great idea - that really is forbidden love! I love Eli (super cute) and really like the way you have developed the relationship between Jack and Martha. Brilliant latest chapter, but just when I thought they were close to getting everything sorted out after Martha's exams - along comes a new obstacle in the form of Ben - I do love a jealous Jack though so can't wait to see more of that.....update soon please
vale4eva Posted June 16, 2008 Report Posted June 16, 2008 I'm very bad, I've been completely hooked by your fic but never commented before Well thanks for commenting. Comments spur me on to write more Warning: Content maybe unsuitable for younger readers! Enjoy Chapter 41: Standing outside the restaurant they waited for their parents to return. Both Tony and Kate had left a few minutes ago to make a pit stop to the restrooms, while Jack, Martha and Eli had made their way towards the car; ready for the long drive home. “Watch yourself on there Eli,” Jack warned his little sister, who was currently entertaining herself in the gardens playground. “I’m not going to fall Jacky” she rolled her eyes at him, as her investigative hands and feet clambered up the ladders and into the play house. Standing upright she peered from the window of the play house; grinning down at her brother and sister. Finally she could enjoy the feeling of towering over them for once… ………… Leaning against the car door, Jack placed his hands into his pockets. His eyes looked ahead at Martha as she stood in front of him; her back leant against the wall of the restaurant, and her arms wrapped around her body to preserve some warmth in the cool air of the night. Their eyes occasionally locked together, just briefly, before they both found themselves turning away in discomfort. Standing silently, she sighed, she hated the uncomfortable atmosphere between them… “I threw it away Jack” she spoke out randomly; her voice soft to avoid catching Eli’s attention. His head rose to look into her eyes, he frowned at her in question, “Sorry?” he replied; unsure of what she was referring to. “The number … Bens number ... I threw it away,” she informed. He nodded slowly, “Oh” he replied; his short term memory suddenly rushing back, “… Well, not that I like playing the jealous boyfriend, but … good”. She smiled across at him in understanding. The uneasy ambiance was gradually beginning to lift, and she found herself stepping towards him. Standing at his side she secretively took his hand; giving it a gentle and reassuring rub. He turned to face her, smiling back sweetly; a warm feeling building up inside of him as he happily received her offered affection. Entwining his fingers with hers, he caressed the back of her hand… “You don’t have to worry Jack, I promise” she confirmed, smiling at him softly. He opened his mouth to respond, but found Tony’s voice beat him too it. “Ok, all done!” their fathers voice sounded aloud, causing Martha to abruptly retract her hand. Standing back, she moved away from him. Focusing her attention on anything and everything but Jack. “Come on Eli, were leaving now,” she called to her sister; as she held out her hand for her to take. Taking the little girls hand in her own, she led her over to the car, before all 5 of them climbed inside… …………………………… A new day had arrived. And Jack had high hopes for this one. The shambles of last night was now in the past, and the future was looking a lot brighter. As far as Jack was concerned, today was the day when his life with Martha would finally begin… He was determined to make sure of it in fact! Casually strolling out of his bedroom, he approached the kitchen area; his senses automatically being drawn towards the tasty aromas. “Mhmm, something smells nice,” said Jack, as he stood at the kitchen doorway, looking across at Martha who stood cooking at the hob. Turning towards the voice, she smiled, “morning.” Her eyes didn’t fail to notice his smooth and supple torso, as he stood proudly at the doorway; his manly physique on full display. Re-facing the hob, her eyebrows quickly rose, remembering exactly what it felt like to have Jacks hot and sweaty body cushioned above her own … ‘Mhmm, and something looks even nicer’, she thought to herself, as she unconsciously licked her hungry lips. Placing her focus back onto the food, she mentally kicked herself; forcing her mind to concentrate! “Well I hope you’re hungry, I’ve got enough here to feed a small army” she smirked, grabbing the plate and shoveling the food onto the ceramic surface. He sensed she was feeling a lot brighter this morning, and surprisingly, that feeling was also mirrored within him. There must have been something in the air… “Excellent! Bring it on!” he exclaimed as he took a seat at the table; eager to fill his empty belly. Digging into the food he gobbled it down. “I take it its good then?” she giggled in astonishment, watching as the food quickly vanished from his plate. He shrugged, “Hmm, it’s … satisfactory” he replied, mocking a fake British accent. “Ah right” she nodded back, smirking; “Well, I appreciate your brutal honesty” she smiled, trying to stifle her laughter. He grinned across at her, before taking the last few bites that were left on his plate… “Ahh” he breathed; stretching out his stiffened limbs, “I could get used to this” he started, “wake up at a decent hour, have my breakfast all ready and made. A pretty girl ready and waiting to serve my every need…” he trailed off. “In fact, my laundries in there, you fancy doing that as well?” he asked, cheekily. “Ah, very funny” she smiled at him in amusement. Sitting back into his chair, a grin spread across his face, he felt content. He was finally able to enjoy the warm and friendly atmosphere. It had been rather scarce of late, so the aura of this morning was a welcome occurrence… Things were about to take a turn for the worst however, and Jack was well aware of it. But taking the bull by the horns, he decided it was time to turn serious… “You know” he began as she leant forward in his chair, “since we’ve got the place to ourselves … can we talk?” She frowned for a second. “About what?” she ignorantly responded; she knew full well what he was referring too. He rolled his eyes at her, “about us of course. What else!” She sighed loudly, “Not right now Jack, please. I have stuff to do, can’t it wait until later?” “I think it’s waited long enough, don’t you?” he challenged her. “Yeah well, I doubt another day will make much difference” she attempted to stand up. “Martha” he pulled her back into her seat, holding onto her arm, “you cant keep doing this,” he pleaded with her, his eyes powerfully fixated on hers, “you cant keep stalling on me … I cant handle it … don’t you want to be honest with them?” Looking into his eyes she took in his evident state of anguish, “of course I do” she sighed; feeling as he released his grip on her arm, “but, I just have things I need to do right now … I have to return my books to the library and pick up some old assignments. My university stuff can’t wait Jack” she told him; shaking her head. “Yeah well this can’t wait either!” he spoke firmly; silencing her. “This is the rest of our lives were talking about! Cant you see how important this all is!?” She sighed once again, “Yeah I know”; taking a moment for the right words to come to her, “Look, I know this sucks right now …” she watched as he rolled his eyes away from her, “but I promise, once I’ve packed up my books and finished with uni, we’ll sort this. We’ll be open and honest, just like we said,” she finished, touching his hand and leaning towards him. His eyes remained on hers as she spoke her words (or better known as, her set of excuses). But Jack was a reasonable man, so he would grit his teeth and go along with it … at a certain price however. “Fine, we can wait …” he said in confirmation as he looked into her eyes. She smiled across at him through relief; grateful that he would gladly accept her decision. Inching further forward, she attempted to thank him with a kiss. “… Until tonight that is”. He hushed in a low voice, pulling back slightly as their lips almost touched. “Tonight?” she repeated in a whisper; her body still leant in towards him; her vision flicking too and fro in confusion, searching his eyes for an answer. “Yeah” he said simply, looking at her intensely, “you have until tonight to tell Tony …” he hushed to her in a low but certain voice, “and if you don’t tell him … then I will”. Preview: Will black mail even work? And are Jack and Martha slipping further and further away from each other? Will Lisa throw another spanner into the works?
kaciexox Posted June 16, 2008 Report Posted June 16, 2008 Martha should just stop been so annoying Anddddddd Jack should just tell Tony because Martha is too annoying to do it Martha is annoying Anywayyyys update soon
Barbara Posted June 16, 2008 Report Posted June 16, 2008 Jack is blackmailing her. But he's right. She can't put it off any longer. She has to tell Tony and she can't keep Jack waiting any longer. It's not fair! I hope Tony won't be too hard on them. Glad Martha threw Ben's number away! More please.
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 16, 2008 Report Posted June 16, 2008 AAAAAAAAAK! “Ahh” he breathed; stretching out his stiffened limbs, “I could get used to this” he started, “wake up at a decent hour, have my breakfast all ready and made. A pretty girl ready and waiting to serve my every need…” he trailed off. “In fact, my laundries in there, you fancy doing that as well?” he asked, cheekily. “Ah, very funny” she smiled at him in amusement. Sitting back into his chair, a grin spread across his face, he felt content. He was finally able to enjoy the warm and friendly atmosphere. It had been rather scarce of late, so the aura of this morning was a welcome occurrence… My favourite bit You can't help but love Jacky. Don't like the sneak peek valli EDIT: SORRY SORRY SORRY! I mean Rachel I was just reading "Love Has Arrived" so I got a bit confused :S
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