Complicated Desires, Forbidden Meetings (by matticus01) - comments

[*caitie*]

Jack has a son!!!

I hopw Marthas Dad doesn't hurt Lucas or Mattie!!!

Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[valli]

Ha, Valli is so lying But Martha will set her straight

Phew, Lucas and Mattie escaped from the claws of the devil

Jack is doing the right thing by not telling Martha and wanting a paternity test. Valli is so up to something

Ok everyone just to clarify something...im not doing this to make Martha in (Love has arrived) to get intentionally hurt but i am writing these chapters for a reason...in any of my fics i do things for a reason...Please forgive me???

Hm, I guess I'll forgive you... for now.

More please!

[matticus01]

heya al just lettin you know that i will be startin a new fic but it will have to be put in the adult section because there are some realli explicit scenes so if you want to read a new fic by matticus01 (aka) bec that has explicit scenes then come read when i post it.... mind you this will be a first fic like this i have ever written..... soz to anyone who thought it was an update

[Barbara]

^^ I'll check it out.

Why would Martha's dad want to hurt Lucas and Mattie? I would understand if he would want to hurt Jack or his parents but why the youngest Holden? He didn't do anything and he's not dating Martha.

Valli is lying. So it's not Jack's son. Thank God Martha heard the conversation, she'll tell Jack.

Morag and Alf don't know about Martha yet. Wonder how they will find out. But that's good, she can go and live with them, they won't hurt her!

More please.

[Channy!!!]

Hey great updates, Martha's dad needs to be locked up and have the key thrown away.

Valli is also a little obsessive/psycho, I'm glad Martha overhead the conversation maybe she can convince Jack that Valli is no good.

If I have time I'll read ur new fiction as I love ur work.

Please update soon :-)

Channy

[Barbara]

Awwwwwwwwwww Jack said "I love you".

Love the relationship between Macca and Martha. He's a really nice big brother!

How dare Valli hurt Mattie? And she tried to sleep with Lucas. Glad Martha told her she had heard everything.

Unfortunately, she will come back!

I'm scared. What's Macca going to do? Hope he doesn't get hurt! *prays*

The preview sounds interesting.

Please update soon.

[valli]

Nawww, Jack said "I love you" And he threw out Valli after Martha had told him the truth

Valli's insane She tried to sleep with Lucas and she hurt Mattie

Unfortunately she's appears to be coming back

What's Macca going to do? Hope he doesn't get hurt!

The preview sounds interesting...

More please!

[*caitie*]

SHE TRIED TO SLEEP WITH LUCAS??HOW OLD WAS HE??!!!!!

Wonder what the news Mattie and Martha receive is??

Please update soon!!!!!!!

[valli]

Oh no! Martha's mother is dead Poor Martha. Her world is crushing down around her. Her mother's dead and she doesn't know whether Macca'll make it or not

Oh my God, Mattie is pregnant How will Lucas take it? Those little accidents can have serious consequences, it appears

The preview sounds very interesting. Hopefully Macca will make it, Lucas will take the news about becoming a father nicely and Martha won't do anything stupid.

More please!

[Barbara]

Martha's mother died. And Macca is badly hurt too. Hope he's going to make it!

Poor Martha! Her father better be arrested. He needs to stay away from his children. How can you hurt someone you love like that? Martha'd better listen to her mother and not go to her parents' house.

Matilda is pregnant! Wonder how Lucas is going to take it. He's a nice guy, so I think he'll be there to support her.

Hope Alf finds Martha really soon. Then she can go and live with him. He would never hit her.

More please.