Complicated Desires, Forbidden Meetings (by matticus01) - comments

[Barbara]

I knew Aden's next victim would be Mattie.

Hope Jack finds him.

Poor Lucas and Mattie! They lost their baby.

Poor Martha! She's so scared and she doesn't want Jack to come near her.

Aden didn't use protection. Martha better be ok and not pregnant. Wait, Bec is the one writing this fic, everything could happen.

Maybe their families are cursed.

More please.

[shortie_689]

I just read this entire fic!!! It is great I can't wait to read what you have in store for all of them next!!!

Keep up the great work!!!

[matticus01]

I just read this entire fic!!! It is great I can't wait to read what you have in store for all of them next!!!

Keep up the great work!!!

thankyou so much...I will post later on tonight for you all ok

[*caitie*]

They lost the baby :(

Poor Martha, I hope she isn't pregnant!!!

[valli]

No preview? Does that mean that this was the last chapter?

Oh no, Mattie lost the baby And all thanks to Aden

Go Jack! That bastard deserved it

It'll be good for Martha getting away from the Bay as long as she isn't pregnant

More please!

[matticus01]

No preview? Does that mean that this was the last chapter?

No it isn't the end just yet...it just mean's i dont want you to know what happens in the next chapter

[Barbara]

Well here it is and (Barbara) *smiles*

No preview? Does that mean that this was the last chapter?

No it isn't the end just yet...it just mean's i dont want you to know what happens in the next chapter

Is it because we're not going to like you?

Poor Mattie and Lucas!

Aden got what he deserved.

Hope Martha'll come back soon and she'll feel better.

Please update soon.

[valli]

No preview? Does that mean that this was the last chapter?

No it isn't the end just yet...it just mean's i dont want you to know what happens in the next chapter

That doesn't sound very good

[matticus01]

No preview? Does that mean that this was the last chapter?

No it isn't the end just yet...it just mean's i dont want you to know what happens in the next chapter

That doesn't sound very good

*Evil grin* haha do you doubt me that much HM

actually i doubt myself

wait and see

[valli]

*Evil grin* haha do you doubt me that much HM

actually i doubt myself

wait and see

Well, you never know

And you shouldn't doubt yourself

Anway, hate Kirsty How can she just walk up to Jack and say something like that?! Stupid girl >_< And she's a stalker too. Watching Jack

The preview doesn't sound very good, but I won't shoot you just yet. Because if I shoot you, I'll never know what happens

More please!