Jack and Martha, A Love Given (by matticus01) - comments

[matticus01]

Aww Macca died

Great updates.

thanx im glad you like it and dont worry about Belle........She gets a very big wake up call

[Tasha]

Yay, Martha has body guards. Im happy now, and i loved the way Jack spoke to all the cop people. I dont like the sound of that new constable though, he sounds to hot to be around Martha. He better not do anything But Martha would never do anything like that to Jack so i dont have anything to worry about Go Mattie, Belle is such a spoilt brat. Whats Henry up to, he didnt organise for Sarah Lewis to come back did he?????? Great chapter though

Please update soon

[Jackieleanne]

That was brilliant I loved it.

[matticus01]

That was brilliant I loved it.

Glad you liked it.......the next chapter will be up soon!

Mean while here is a little snippet for you all:D

“Cute sister!” the _____ whispered into _____ ear. “It’d be a shame if anything happened to her. Better watch it, you failed in ________ and Sarah isn't going to be happy about this. I’m only in this stupid job so I can feed her information about what's going on!”

____ looked up at the _____ and gave him a filthy look.

“You stay the hell away from my sister and my family, if anything happens to them I’ll be coming after you or whoever hurt them myself!” _____ whispered back and walked in before _____ or anyone noticed he hadn’t walked in yet.

Edited October 2, 2006 by matticus01

[Jackieleanne]

Ric what do you think you're playing at and I sense that Matilda is going to get hurt now. I can't wait to read more.

[Tasha]

Great chapter. I thought this fan fic was meant to be mostly Jack and Martha, but its more other people Sorry for being annoying. Ummm...but yeh its good. Oh yeh, im glad Martha has got security around her

Please update soon

[matticus01]

:cool:

Great chapter. I thought this fan fic was meant to be mostly Jack and Martha, but its more other people Sorry for being annoying. Ummm...but yeh its good. Oh yeh, im glad Martha has got security around her

Please update soon

its ok at the start it was just going to martha and jack and there will be more of a mention of them in the next few chapters so hope you like it either way :cool:

[SfanS]

hmmm. Just caught up on it all, good job!!!

[Tasha]

i love it, dont worry. Im gradually getting over Jack and Martha, so i can read any fic now

[tasha7905]

Just read the whole lot. Its a great fic, I hope Ric doesnt come between Maddie and Lucas they belong together. Cant wait to see how the plan they have for henry turns out. More soon please.