Jack and Martha, A Love Given (by matticus01) - comments

[xsianx]

Good chapter I love this bit :

1. Terrorize Sally Fletcher and poison her food.

2. Kill Sally Fletcher and engrave “Tick, Tock” into her chest

3. Expose Alf and Irene’s secret affair.

Lol ^^ funny!

Aww Jack and Martha sooo cute.

[SfanS]

Yeah, they are cute. But Sophie's REALLLY cute! Well written!!!

[Jackieleanne]

Great chapter can't wait to read more.

[Tasha]

Jack is sooo sweet. I love him. Martha is so lucky. UH OH, Henry is in trouble. Sarah is evil, how did he manage to get on her side?? Great chapter though

Please udpate soon

[Guest]

This is so great

[Tasha]

Awww..poor Mattie. Jack and Lil Sophie are so cute. Go Martha. Poor Belle. BTW how old is Sophie?? Great chapter

Please udpate soon

[Jackieleanne]

Great chapter can't wait to read more. Poor Mattie.

Edited October 10, 2006 by Jackieleanne

[shawtyy]

Great chapter! Poor Matilda, its not her fault Ric likes her.

[SfanS]

Just caught up...hmmm, this is interesting!

[SfanS]

Are you gonna update thisz!? Sniff, I miss it...