irish_angel Posted August 9, 2007 Report Posted August 9, 2007 Love this fic already. The JM interaction is great and it's really well written. Can't wait for the next update. Quote
holden_girl9051 Posted August 9, 2007 Report Posted August 9, 2007 (edited) I love it already the bed room thing with them creeping in since they were little reminds me of dawsons creek love jack and martha relationship cant wait for more Edited August 9, 2007 by holden_girl9051 Quote
beckyboo Posted August 9, 2007 Report Posted August 9, 2007 1st of all - Well done for updating I know you've been ill! They act like a married couple its so cute! I wish they just get together already Update soon xxxxx Quote
-Jade- Posted August 9, 2007 Report Posted August 9, 2007 (edited) Jack and Martha. They're just great. I love all the teasing, I also love your brilliant grammar Rach . The relationship dynamics are really brill - an original take on the friendship. I can't wait to see how it unravels... Please update soon! Edited August 9, 2007 by -Jade- Quote
puja Posted August 9, 2007 Report Posted August 9, 2007 Aww, what a cute friendship Jack was hilarious in the shower! And yeah, he's definately sexy This is fab. Can't wait to read more. Quote
Zetti Posted August 9, 2007 Report Posted August 9, 2007 Good chapter, hope you feel better soon, Jack and Martha are so cute together, I love it Quote
bay girl Posted August 10, 2007 Report Posted August 10, 2007 This is all just so cute. I love a cute fic. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter. Quote
irish_angel Posted August 10, 2007 Report Posted August 10, 2007 (edited) Quote Turning on the shower, he began to sing … “ Im too sexy for my car, too sexy for my car, too sexy by far … And Im too sexy for my hat, too sexy for my hat, what do you think about that …” he continued on; his voice gradually getting louder as he bopped along in the shower, to his rhythmic tune; oblivious to the fact that Martha, as well as possibly the entire street, could hear him sing, “Im a model and you know what I mean, and I do my little turn on the catwalk. Yeah on the catwalk, on the catwalk yeah, I shake my little touche on the catwalk.” I near choked on my hot chocolate when i read this bit. I love everything about this fic, it's very funny, well written and leaves you hanging out for the next chapter... Hint Hint. Edited August 10, 2007 by irish_angel Quote
Tasha Posted August 10, 2007 Report Posted August 10, 2007 I love this Jack and Martha more than the shows Jack and Martha, duh! They are sooo cute. Bless their little socks Jack singing in the shower is just adorable, and both their pouts, so cute. Great chapter More please Quote
Adia Posted August 10, 2007 Report Posted August 10, 2007 I'm sticking with you from the beginning! This is really cool, I *heart* the J&M realationship it's so sweet and cute. I thought of Dawson's Creek too when I read the first chapter! It was hilarious when Jack muttered about the spidey suit! I really like your style of writing, everything seems to flow really well, I can't wait to see more! Quote
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