-Jade- Posted August 12, 2007 Report Posted August 12, 2007 (edited) Well, no change in opinion from me. I still think that this is great. It's just the way you write Jack and Martha... it's perfect. Even though they're not together, I love the fact that Martha is way more important to Jack than any other girl is or could be. Erm, including the one night stands. You write this so well, and you really do make it funny, I haven't read one chapter yet without laughing out loud at the computer screen (I'm not crazy, dont worry ). Anyways, keep it up, and please please update asap! Edited August 12, 2007 by -Jade- Quote
Cerise Posted August 12, 2007 Author Report Posted August 12, 2007 This fic is way cute. For some reason I laughed at Martha running around the Kitchen like a headless chicken... I actually imagined Martha with Chicken legs, and wings without a head! (That will make a great sketch, you know.) Aanyway.. great Chapter and great writing Rachel... I love Martha. Quote
Cerise Posted August 12, 2007 Author Report Posted August 12, 2007 Aww Martha's scared! That is SO cute! That Chapter was hilarious! Well, to me anyway. And I'm strange... Quote 'He laughed to himself as he held it around his backside, “Does this make my bum look big,” he put on a girly accent as he angled his butt in Martha’s direction.' Jack's so cute. And i found the Bin Liner funny. Don't ask me why! Great, funny Chapter Rach. Can't wait for more Quote
kaciexox Posted August 12, 2007 Report Posted August 12, 2007 sooooo cute hopefully the date goes well or not then Jacky can come and save her update soon Quote
bay girl Posted August 12, 2007 Report Posted August 12, 2007 Lol. This is funny. Martha shouldn't be going on a date with this toher guy. She should be staying at home with Jaxk. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter. Quote
puja Posted August 13, 2007 Report Posted August 13, 2007 Jack's just so It was so sweet how his opinion made such a difference to Martha; so cute Hope this Billy is a good fellow. If not, can't wait for Jack to kick his behind! More soon please. Quote
dolly-999 Posted August 13, 2007 Report Posted August 13, 2007 Just finnished reading the whole thing. I'm loving it Rach, it's awsome. Jack's so adorable how he's so protective over Martha. And I love how they tease each other. You've done an excelent job with the dialogue. More soon. Quote
Tasha Posted August 13, 2007 Report Posted August 13, 2007 Quote Note: Sorry Tash, I didn’t include whatever it is I might include in this chapter lol. Possibly the next one You're forgiven Great chapter though. Martha has a date, how cute. Billy sounds lovely Jack better kick some a$$ if Billy hurts Martha More please Quote
Zetti Posted August 13, 2007 Report Posted August 13, 2007 Martha is scared, Jack will be there for her Loving the chapter Quote
Adia Posted August 13, 2007 Report Posted August 13, 2007 That was such a great chapter! Absolutely loved it! Quote He laughed to himself as he held it around his backside, “Does this make my bum look big,” he put on a girly accent as he angled his butt in Martha’s direction That was hilarious! Jack is so cute! The dialouge between Jack and Martha was awesome! Quote
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