Jacksthehottest Posted October 2, 2007 Report Posted October 2, 2007 Aww this is so cute, they miss each other Jack is so jelouse, i love it Please update soon Quote
-x-Siana-x- Posted October 2, 2007 Report Posted October 2, 2007 (edited) vale4eva said: “Martha” he again called out softly after several quite seconds. “Hmm” she mumbled back against his shirt. Taking a deep breath he continued to speak. “I miss you”. Pulling away from his chest she looked into his watery eyes; swallowing down the lump that had now formed in her throat she spoke up. “Please don’t, I’m doing really well … I’m being strong and not needing you, I can’t fall back now” she released a nervous laugh; her face displaying a certain amount of worry and sadness. “Sorry” he lowered his head. “Its ok” she smiled back sadly; hesitating before she continued, “but if it’s any consolation … I miss you too”. Awww how cute Bless... They miss each other! Brilliant as usual! Update soon please Siana__x Edited October 2, 2007 by -x-Siana-x- Quote
Barbara Posted October 3, 2007 Report Posted October 3, 2007 Nice chapter! Something is finally happening between them! Why did you end it there? Can't wait for the next chapter! Quote
-x-Siana-x- Posted October 3, 2007 Report Posted October 3, 2007 Barbara said: Why did you end it there? Yeh why did you end it there? In the next chapter I think they should carry on with what they are doing! I also think you should update really really REALLY soon!! Aww bless them! Update soon Siana__x Quote
penny lane Posted October 3, 2007 Report Posted October 3, 2007 It's been a long time coming! You wrote that scene really well, especially since it's pretty much the pinnacle of the story so far, so there was probably a bit of pressure on you to get it right! Looking forward to more Quote
Zetti Posted October 3, 2007 Report Posted October 3, 2007 I think Martha is going to think Jack is forcing her! Quote
bay girl Posted October 3, 2007 Report Posted October 3, 2007 Why the hell did you finish that there. It was going so well. LOL. They love each other...awww. I know it. I hope they dont go all weird suddenly and stop. They need to be together forever. Haha. Quote
Tasha Posted October 4, 2007 Report Posted October 4, 2007 they better not go on another rollercoaster ride like the other fic Great chapter though Jack and Martha doing the naughty naughty, tut tut More please Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted October 4, 2007 Report Posted October 4, 2007 I know I told you to halve the chapter but did you have to do it at that precise point?! Geeez Rach Update soooooon ish Quote
-lolly- Posted October 4, 2007 Report Posted October 4, 2007 Jamey-Maria said: I know I told you to halve the chapter but did you have to do it at that precise point?! Geeez Rach Update soooooon ish So it's your fault then? Aww Martha and Jack finally together, well almost anyway... Please, please update soon Loving this story. Quote
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