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  vale4eva said:
Martha” he again called out softly after several quite seconds.

Hmm” she mumbled back against his shirt.

Taking a deep breath he continued to speak. “I miss you”.

Pulling away from his chest she looked into his watery eyes; swallowing down the lump that had now formed in her throat she spoke up. “Please don’t, I’m doing really well … I’m being strong and not needing you, I can’t fall back now” she released a nervous laugh; her face displaying a certain amount of worry and sadness.

Sorry” he lowered his head.

Its ok” she smiled back sadly; hesitating before she continued, “but if it’s any consolation … I miss you too”.

Awww how cute :wub: Bless... They miss each other!

Brilliant as usual!

Update soon please :)

Siana__x

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  Barbara said:
Why did you end it there? :angry:

Yeh why did you end it there? :(

In the next chapter I think they should carry on with what they are doing! :wub:

I also think you should update really really REALLY soon!!

Aww bless them!

Update soon :D

Siana__x

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It's been a long time coming! You wrote that scene really well, especially since it's pretty much the pinnacle of the story so far, so there was probably a bit of pressure on you to get it right! Looking forward to more :)

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Why the hell did you finish that there. It was going so well. LOL.

They love each other...awww. I know it.

I hope they dont go all weird suddenly and stop. They need to be together forever. Haha.

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:rolleyes: they better not go on another rollercoaster ride like the other fic :P

Great chapter though

Jack and Martha doing the naughty naughty, tut tut

More please

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  Jamey-Maria said:
I know I told you to halve the chapter but did you have to do it at that precise point?! Geeez Rach :P Update soooooon ish :D

So it's your fault then? :P

Aww Martha and Jack finally together, well almost anyway...

Please, please update soon :) Loving this story.

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