valli Posted October 15, 2007 Report Posted October 15, 2007 Loved the ending Please don't let Martha's parents get in the way. No baby Holden? Well, well I guess I have to live with that. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next! Update soon! Quote
-x-Siana-x- Posted October 15, 2007 Report Posted October 15, 2007 (edited) Hahaha!!! Busted big time!!! Once again an amazingly written chapter "Hi Dad" Now that made me chuckle!!! Hmmm I wonder what Mr Mckenzie (Or is it Macklin in this fic... Hmmm I don't know... Oh never mind... basically her Dad) is going to do to Jacky boy? After all he just whitnessed (sp?? Hmmm I can't spell!) him... playing... with his precious little girl!!!... But then again he might not do anything to him... he might patt him on the back !!! Haha!! I love this fic so much! Haha Well anyways i have to go and stop myself laughing, and it wasnt even that funny, Well it was but... I'm just a random person a times... Oh i think i need to compose myself! Yeh i'll shut up now!!!! Update soon please!!! Siana__x Edited October 15, 2007 by -x-Siana-x- Quote
Barbara Posted October 15, 2007 Report Posted October 15, 2007 Awesome chapter! Jack and Martha love each other! They can't take their hands of each other. They are so busted! vale4eva said: “Hi dad” That made me laugh! vale4eva said: Preview: How will Martha’s parents take to the news of their daughter’s relationship? Jack and Martha won't be allowed to sleep in the same bed anymore??? But wait... Martha's 19 and Jack's 20, they're old enough. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter! Please update soon... Quote
beckyboo Posted October 15, 2007 Report Posted October 15, 2007 Well I can tell you iv missed alot iv just had a few things going on lately Iv just caught up!!!! I Should have been doing something else but i got distracted by this Erm Well update soon xxxxxxxxx Quote
kaciexox Posted October 15, 2007 Report Posted October 15, 2007 Wonder how they'll get out of this sticky situation They're in trouble *sings* Can't wait for the reaction of Martha's daddy aww they love each other that was an extremly cute chapter please update soon Quote
bizkit01 Posted October 15, 2007 Report Posted October 15, 2007 LMAO !!! Fantastic Chapter vale4eva said: “Hi dad” BUSTED!! LOL Can't wait for more. Quote
paul_is_sexy Posted October 16, 2007 Report Posted October 16, 2007 ahha BUSTED!!! how funny fantastic writing! update soon =] Quote
-lolly- Posted October 16, 2007 Report Posted October 16, 2007 How EMBARRASSING! The poor things, i wonder how much Martha's dad acutally saw... This is such a great story Rachel, i love reading all the updates its definately one of my favourites! More soon Quote
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