valli Posted October 20, 2007 Report Posted October 20, 2007 Great chapter! I hope that it’s not Lily coming back that makes thing difficult for them. Naughty Martha, sneaking around in the middle of the night to see her boyfriend. Lets hope she doesn’t get caught Update soon! Quote
Zetti Posted October 20, 2007 Report Posted October 20, 2007 More More! Martha's comment about the pool table. cute Jack and Martha kiss! Quote
kaciexox Posted October 20, 2007 Report Posted October 20, 2007 Naughty Naughty If Lily comes back I will not be responsible for my actions I have an idea, if Martha and Jack's parents don't approve then.... they should elope I laughed how Jack's mum checks on them like they're little kids Fantastic chapter Please, please update soon *smiles sweetly* (I would use a smiley face there but i have already used up my limit of emoticons *angry face* ) Quote
bay girl Posted October 20, 2007 Report Posted October 20, 2007 You know, they could always just do it on the beach or in the car. LOL. Easier than sneaking around. Great chapter Rach. Bettter not bring that freak back. Lily was a weird one. Quote
paul_is_sexy Posted October 21, 2007 Report Posted October 21, 2007 great chapter but why!!?? why cant it all go smoothly?? =[ lol but fantastic writing update soon Quote
puja Posted October 21, 2007 Report Posted October 21, 2007 Martha! What a sneak she has become! tut tut Oh dear, things aren't getting easier for them. Wonder what's going to happen. More soon please. Quote
katie343 Posted October 21, 2007 Report Posted October 21, 2007 vale4eva said: “Its like …” he thought for a second, “say you give a fat person a cookie, and then at the last minute, you take it away from them … its painful.” She raised her eyebrow as she looked across at him, “Interesting metaphor” she giggled. “Yeah, I know, it’s the best I could think of” he chuckled back. I'll have to remember that. Can't wait for more! Quote
x_kym_x Posted October 21, 2007 Report Posted October 21, 2007 Brilliant chapter ^^ thats where i got to wen i mentioned it to u on msn if that made sense Anyways, writings amazing like always and Jack and Martha are so cute Can't wait for an update Quote
PINK Posted October 22, 2007 Report Posted October 22, 2007 Hey I love this story!!! Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens. I was listening to the radion and thought this song perfectly suited the storyline in this story or well the bit where they got together... What do you think: CHRISTY CARLSON ROMANO LYRICS "Could It Be" I know we've been friends forever But now I think I'm feeling something totally new And after all this time I opened up my eyes Now I see you were always with me [Chorus] Could it be you & I Never imagined Could it be suddenly I'm fallin' for you Could it be you were right here beside me and I never knew Could it be that it's true It's you and it's you It's kinda funny you were always near But who would ever thought we'd end up here And everytime I need you, you've been there for me Now it's clear I've been waiting for you [Chorus] 'Cause today is the start of the rest of our lives I can see it in your eyes And it's real, and it's true It's just me and you Could it be that it's you [Chorus] Quote
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