puja Posted October 25, 2007 Report Posted October 25, 2007 Aww, the 12th birthday memory was so cute And so was the chapter They're so made for each other! The nect chapter sounds intriguing...can't wait to read more Quote
Barbara Posted October 25, 2007 Report Posted October 25, 2007 Great chapter! They're so in love, it's cute! Lovely childhood memories! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Quote
aejdude Posted October 25, 2007 Report Posted October 25, 2007 Lol. Great chapters as always. I loved the memories and that there wasn't actually that much fluff in the latest one even though you said there would be. I think some of the parts in these recent chapters have been just as descriptive as mine. Update soon. Not too keen on the preview. Quote
Tasha Posted October 25, 2007 Report Posted October 25, 2007 Yay an update. One thing though, and i think i did this in one of your other fics as well butttttt.... Quote He nodded slowly, looking deeply into her brown eyes. she has blue eyes sweetie Jack already having their kids names planned out, that guy is organised. If only all guys were like him Great chapter. JM are so cute, i wish they were like that on the show More please Quote
bay girl Posted October 26, 2007 Report Posted October 26, 2007 Aww that was sweet. Im a bit scared about the next chapter though. One of them isnt cheating already, are they? That would be horrible. Quote
aejdude Posted October 26, 2007 Report Posted October 26, 2007 I'm in need of an update. Can i expect to find one later? Quote
Zetti Posted October 26, 2007 Report Posted October 26, 2007 Next chapter doesnt sound too good Quote
-x-Siana-x- Posted October 27, 2007 Report Posted October 27, 2007 (edited) Awwww Jack he's just pure cuteness He remembered her 12th birthday and he's already planned their kids names out More soon please?? *Smiles sweetly* Please.... With a cherry on top... Hmmm Lily or any of Jacks ex-"girlfriends" better not be making any re-apperances in the next chapter Anyways it was brill as usual! Siana__x Edited October 27, 2007 by -x-Siana-x- Quote
kaciexox Posted October 27, 2007 Report Posted October 27, 2007 Fluff Jack and Martha are just but im sensing it wont last you better not make Lily come back rach Jack is adorable remembering her birthday I love him Great chapter Please please update soon Quote
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