Tasha Posted November 13, 2007 Report Posted November 13, 2007 shes so vulnerable, hes so protective great chapter more please Quote
bay girl Posted November 13, 2007 Report Posted November 13, 2007 Aww a bubble bath for 2. I'm excited. As long as it's J/M. Great update. Looking forward to more. Quote
x_kym_x Posted November 13, 2007 Report Posted November 13, 2007 Aww wicked chapter! I love how Jack looks after her Amazing writing once again And a bubble bath .. can't wait Quote
Zetti Posted November 14, 2007 Report Posted November 14, 2007 Bubble Bath! *Squeee**** Lovely chapter especially the first bit in italics, fantastic descriptons Quote
aejdude Posted November 14, 2007 Report Posted November 14, 2007 Great chapter. Poor Martha. But great chemistry as always between the two and them playing together was really nice. Update soon. Quote
Barbara Posted November 14, 2007 Report Posted November 14, 2007 Good chapter! Poor Martha! Leon was very violent with her if she's suffering that much. I hate him! I'm a little disappointed. Jack didn't join her in the bath. Jack's so sweet! The way he takes care of her... But why didn't he kiss her on the lips? More please... Quote
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