-x-Siana-x- Posted November 18, 2007 Report Posted November 18, 2007 Hey! You updated... good!!! vale4eva said: “Oh my god!” screeched a horrified Jack, as his eyes opened wide through fear, “how stupid does that girl have to be! What kind of idiot goes back into the house that they know the killer is in!?” he spoke in a panic as he held onto the pillow for protection. “Well I say; GO HER! It’s promoting girl power if nothing else!” Martha nodded in pride. “Girl power?” he turned to her, “well that’s one word for it” he rolled his eyes, before ducking back behind the pillow. “Seriously though, how can you watch this!? Aren’t you scared?” his face scrunched up through apprehension. “Aw, don’t be such a wuss Jacky” she rubbed the side of his thigh for comfort. Peeking his head from behind the cushion he turned to her; “You told me it was a comedy” he sulked. “It is! Watching you scared out of your wits I find to be very comical” she smiled sweetly. “Oh haha, very funny” he glared at her, before sinking back into the couch. Awww does Jacky want his Mummy!... That little first bits made me laugh! Jackys scared.... Marthas not... Its meant to be the other way around... he's meant to have Martha snuggled up to him protecting her! Bless!!! GIRL POWER!!!! Yes!... Thats what we need more of in this world!!!! Yay he's alowed to stay over now! Awww Martha... she was all horrid to him! he was only doing it to protect her! Bless! He didnt kiss her *Whines* Rachy....Make them kiss!!!!... Please!!! Hmmm Well Anyways Brilliant as usual! Update soon... Pleaseee? Siana__x Quote
dee83 Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 brilliant story update soon cause its grt Quote
Barbara Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 Nice chapter! Jack is so sweet! I want him. They're together again. Martha's so much more beautiful than Angelina Jolie. I wonder where they're going. Somewhere romantic maybe? vale4eva said: Preview: It’s all over But do JnM get a happy ending? It's all over. *cries* Rachel, they'd better get a happy ending. You can't end your fic with a unhappy ending! *begs* Please update soon even if it means it will be over. Quote
dee83 Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 yes plz update soon even if it is the ending Quote
valli Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 Great chapter! Oh, I want Jack He’s so sweet! Yay, Martha got her answers and her kiss! No, it can’t be over! *cries* Well, at least I have one chapter left *tries to put on a smile* There’s got to be a happy ending! Otherwise I’ll be very angry (just kidding ) Last chapter please! Quote
aejdude Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 Great two chapters! Glad that manage to sort things out. It better be a happy ending or else. Don't want it to be over though. Quote
Saïdja Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 Loved the two chapters! It must be a good ending!!! Quote
Tasha Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 ewwwww...Angelina Jolie. Jack could do so much better, like Jessica Alba Great chapter ITs ending How sad, then no more writing from Rachy More please Thats the last time i'll be able to say that Quote
kaciexox Posted November 20, 2007 Report Posted November 20, 2007 Its ending .... noo *cries* that was great chapter Jack and Martha are just I dont want it to end but I want to read the next chapter.... update soon Quote
desiree100 Posted November 20, 2007 Report Posted November 20, 2007 Some of these rock - should really be published Quote
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