dee83 Posted November 17, 2007 Report Posted November 17, 2007 brilliant hope she does stay they are so meant 2 be 2gether update soon Quote
vale4eva Posted November 18, 2007 Report Posted November 18, 2007 AW, yay, they're back together Cute chapter! Please update soon Quote
matticus01 Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 Quote Martha wrapped her arms around Jack’s neck and wrapped her legs around his waist and kissed him. Jack swam around with her as they had a good old make-out session. ‘Flash, flash’ “Martha!” A voice called. Martha and Jack turned to see a dark haired guy walking briskly down the beach followed by heaps of paparazzi with camera’s. “Ehh” Martha sighed. “I’m sorry Jack.” OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG that was such a great chapter...Luvin that phrase though lol...I hope jacky boy and martha survive paris, they are meant to be together Quote
amz89 Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 Thats was the best chapter ever!! Yah his going with her. More soon please Quote
Barbara Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 Excellent chapter! Paparazzi are everywhere! Jack and Martha are so happy! They have to survive Paris. It is the city of love, they can't break up. That would be so wrong! More please. Quote
valli Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 As Barbara said, excellent chapter! God, I hate the paparazzi! Why can’t they just back off?! Maybe I should stalk them, so they would know what it feels like. Maybe they’ll stop then. Yay for Jack and Martha Please don’t break them up! *begs* More please! Quote
vale4eva Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 Jack and Martha in Paris It better not crash and burn More please Quote
matticus01 Posted November 20, 2007 Report Posted November 20, 2007 Wow that was great, well they have survived so far lets just hope they make it back to the hotel..... Quote
Barbara Posted November 20, 2007 Report Posted November 20, 2007 They survived until now. Let's hope it lasts. What's Jack's surprise for Martha? And he bought jewellery! This sounds great. At least if she makes it to the hotel. Jack's afraid of flying. Poor Jack! Luckily Martha was there wih him. Can't wait for the next chapter! Quote
Zetti Posted November 20, 2007 Report Posted November 20, 2007 Hopefully a proposal is in the air Quote
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