valli Posted November 27, 2007 Report Posted November 27, 2007 Great chapter! Emma's really funny Aww poor Martha She still misses Jack so much Oh no, Alf can't die! He can survive and Martha can see Jack again Oh, and I loved the video! It's perfect for this fic More please! Quote
Barbara Posted November 27, 2007 Report Posted November 27, 2007 Great chapter! Emma is so cute. And she's stubborn like her parents, that doesn't surprise me. Claire is really nice. I like the way she started to talk about her single grandson. Emma and her job might be Martha's main concern but I think she still loves Jack and she doesn't want another man. Poor Alf! Hopefully, he'll be okay. He can't die. Martha and Emma are going to Summer Bay. Emma's going to meet her daddy! She's going to like him. I can't wait to see (or should I say read) Jack's reaction. I think he will be happy to see his daughter but he will be angry with Martha (and Kim if he finds out his best friend knew about it) for not telling him. I loved the video. Nice job, Kacie!!! Please update soon. Quote
vale4eva Posted November 27, 2007 Report Posted November 27, 2007 Aw, lovely chapters Not liking how you split them up though But I did already know that before Thats the beauty of recieving your inside info lol YAY! Shes going home! Cant wait for Jack to see Martha. And the daughter he never knew he had Please update soon! Quote
kaciexox Posted November 28, 2007 Report Posted November 28, 2007 Emma is adorable... I love how she says "When i was older', so cute Shes just like her parents Also Claire's really nice i just hope she doesn't turn out to be some physco mass murderer But then Jack could come to save Martha and thats when he discovers he has a daughter ..... Ok maybe i should just leave the writing to you Loved the last couple of chapters even though i cant remember if i replied ... Oh well, they were great Alf had a heart attack *shocked face* He better not die, I wonder how Jack will react when he sees Martha again And his long lost daughter.... Oh well, its his fault anyway for telling Martha it didnt mean anything when it so obviously did Since Rach's fic ended, this one has become my new favourite Cant wait to see what happens Please update soon *smiles sweetly* p.s. sorry for the rambling ... Quote
Zetti Posted November 28, 2007 Report Posted November 28, 2007 Jack and his long lost daughter interesting to read... I want JM back! Now! Quote
xmienkiex Posted November 29, 2007 Report Posted November 29, 2007 Hehe I promise I will update tomorrow night! (Friday night!) I was away this week so really couldn't update! Will reply to all comments later! Quote
-lolly- Posted November 29, 2007 Author Report Posted November 29, 2007 (edited) Yay update tomorrow! Last chapter: So glad Martha's heading back, hopefully her and Jack can eventually patch things up and get back together. Please do not make Sam any part of this fic, don't know if you were planning to, but if you were. DON'T!! Emma So cute! Can't wait till Jack to meets her. You have such a beautiful writing style, the whole story flows nicely and the story is great so far! Can't wait for the next chapter. Edited November 29, 2007 by -lolly- Quote
xmienkiex Posted November 30, 2007 Report Posted November 30, 2007 Okay...I see Sam is a majar concern in all of your replies. So I'm quickly here to sort this out. SAM WILL NOT BE A PART OF MY STORY. All happy now? Quote
kaciexox Posted November 30, 2007 Report Posted November 30, 2007 Okay...I see Sam is a majar concern in all of your replies. So I'm quickly here to sort this out. SAM WILL NOT BE A PART OF MY STORY. All happy now? Very Quote
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