Barbara Posted December 11, 2007 Report Posted December 11, 2007 What a sad chapter. Martha being called names, Tasha feeling really sick after one day of treatment and Martha cutting her wrists... Ranya Will she be found in time? I hope so. Come on, Jack! More please. Quote
valli Posted December 11, 2007 Report Posted December 11, 2007 Go Robbie! At least someone still have their brain on Poor Tasha The treatment is really bringing her down on her knees Martha, Martha, Martha. What on earth are you doing? You can't kill yourself! Jack needs to be on time! You can't kill off Martha matticus01, because if you do, I will come and get you More very, very soon please! I need to know what happens!!!! Quote
matticus01 Posted December 12, 2007 Report Posted December 12, 2007 You can't kill off Martha matticus01, because if you do, I will come and get you More very, very soon please! I need to know what happens!!!! wow you guys really feel for this story lol... you will have to wait and find out when i post lol Quote
matticus01 Posted December 12, 2007 Report Posted December 12, 2007 hey i am writing the next chapter now so until then here's a teaser “There on there way!” he had screamed out. “She's lost a lot of blood, did you tell them she slit her wrist's and is bleeding to death!” “Yes wait...can you hear that?” “Run outside and bring them up...NOW!” Pressing against her wrist's to slow the bleeding down, along with his shirt, he hoped, prayed to god that he wasn't to late. will post as soon as it's done...enjoy the teaser Quote
Barbara Posted December 12, 2007 Report Posted December 12, 2007 I hope Martha's going to be ok. Don't forget what HM (aka Valli) said. She will come and get you. Quote
Barbara Posted December 12, 2007 Report Posted December 12, 2007 Glad Jack made it in time. Martha is still alive. I hope she's going to be ok. This is all Ranya's fault. More please. Quote
*purple*star* Posted December 12, 2007 Report Posted December 12, 2007 Two sad chapters! But both very well written! Glad Jack made it in time, just hope Martha recovers! Ohh I hate Ranya and the other people who are making Martha(/Jacks) life hell! More soon please! Quote
dee83 Posted December 12, 2007 Report Posted December 12, 2007 grt story but abit sad cant believe all them people making marthas/jacks life hell especially jacks ex girlfriend she knows that their friend is dying so y is she doing this Quote
Channy!!! Posted December 13, 2007 Report Posted December 13, 2007 They were two really sad chapters.. Poor Martha trying to end her life, her best friend needs her now. I feel sorry for Jack, something has to be done about Ranya and Kim.. please update soon, Xx Quote
matticus01 Posted December 13, 2007 Report Posted December 13, 2007 heya guys will be posting soon so stay tuned Quote
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