matticus01 Posted October 28, 2007 Report Posted October 28, 2007 Quote He knew that if they would just get trough the night it would all pass. Eventually she would calm down. Everything would be ok again. He kept his arm around her, pulling her closer to him. To reassure her that it would all pass. He knew that it would all pass. And that's when her realized, it gets the worst at night. that was so sweet im hangin for the next chapter :lol: Quote
-x-Siana-x- Posted October 28, 2007 Report Posted October 28, 2007 (edited) Hmmm I didn't reply to chapter 6.... ... *Has a brainwave and smiles* I'll do it now!! Ok so here goes *Clears throte* Chapter 6: Yay.... Baby Holden is ok!!! *jumps around and celebrates!!!* They're going to make such a cute little family!!!! Jack Martha and baby holden Cuteness.... Brill chapter!!! And now for chapter 7... *Clears throte again!* Chapter 7: Poor Martha!!!! Typical Jacky wanting a little boy!!! They should have a little girl!!! Then Jacky and Martha would have a little princess And They could spoil her!!!! Cant wait for the next chapter! Ohhh and I agree with matticus01, those last 2 lines were so cute!!!! Please update soon... please please please!!!! *Smiles sweetly* (They don't let us use enough smileys in these posts....) Siana__x Edit: Ohhh This turnt into a bit of an essay i'm really sorry...! Edited October 28, 2007 by -x-Siana-x- Quote
Barbara Posted October 28, 2007 Report Posted October 28, 2007 Great chapters! Yay their baby is okay! I think they should have a girl too. Poor Martha! Luckily, Jack is there now, he can take care of her and protect her! Jack Please update soon... Quote
valli Posted October 28, 2007 Report Posted October 28, 2007 I agree that they should have a baby girl. That would have been so sweet I loved the two last lines! Poor Martha! I feel sorry for her since even though Corey is gone(he is gone right? I don't want that creep back ) she still sees it when she closes her eyes. More please! Quote
valli Posted January 19, 2008 Report Posted January 19, 2008 Aww that was such a lovely ending Jack and Martha had a little baby girl And her name is Katie Jane Holden It’s great that Martha is starting to calm down and forget about Corey It’s sad that this fic is over, but they got a happy ending. A really happy ending Quote
Barbara Posted January 19, 2008 Report Posted January 19, 2008 Loved the ending. Martha won. They have a little girl, Katie Jane Holden. I'm glad everything turned out ok for them. Now they can live happily ever after. Quote
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