stephyrose4 Posted October 25, 2008 Report Posted October 25, 2008 Since I made you update, I thought I'd leave a comment Hahaha, nah just kidding I was gonna leave a comment anyway. Oh my god Martha, your being such a bitch! Like seriously, let him explain for once! Farrrrr out! Awww our my Jacky!!! Don't worry Jack, you can cheat on Martha with me Next Time: Martha drowns her sorrows; will their unborn baby be ok? What?! No way! You can't do that Katie! Will Jack and Martha ever sort things out? Yes they will, they better! God, Martha just needs to listen! Loved the chapter, finally a update! Haha. More please.
amz89 Posted October 25, 2008 Report Posted October 25, 2008 great update let him explain about hayley then none of this would't of happened more soon please
KatieroxNZ Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 You guys really don't like me now..... I'm sure you'll get over it.... Well i hope yous do I'll probs update on Sunday and then that's it, for the next month as i REALLY have to study for my exams Once again, thanks for the comments!!!!
Barbara Posted October 30, 2008 Report Posted October 30, 2008 Oh noooo. What a sad chapter! Poor Jack! It must have hurt to see Martha with another man. But I think Martha regrets it already or she wouldn't have run after him. I hope they'll finally talk and get back together. I can't believe Martha is going to drink when she's expecting a baby! More please. PS: Good luck with your exams Katie!
KatieroxNZ Posted November 17, 2008 Report Posted November 17, 2008 Thanks guys!!!! Exams are over so me = HAPPY!!! Anyway here's the next chapter Chapter 32 The beach Jack had stormed off angrily, Martha felt upset. She decided to go back to Noah’s and make herself feel better, she would do anything to block out the pain. Noah’s bar Martha walked into Noah’s her eyes were all red from crying, she proberly looked terrible but she didn’t care. “Hi” Martha said the barman. “Hello there, what can I get you” He asked. “Umm” Martha thought for a bit. “Vodka on the rocks thanks” Martha said. “Coming right up” the barman said. Minutes later the barman had poured the drink and placed it in front of Martha. Martha gave him a small smile, and then walked over to sit down at a table. ******************************* An hour later Martha just kept downing the drinks, she didn’t care anymore, she just wanted to stop hurting, but the pain was still there. She didn’t even think what it was doing to her unborn baby. Finally the barman refused to serve her anymore drinks, so Martha walked out of Noah’s in a huff. She was walking past a chemist that was still open at this time of the night, she decided to go inside, and minutes later she walked out with a bottle of pills in her hand. Martha was walking along the beach sad and alone, she had been walking for what seemed like forever. She found a good place to sit down and just think. Then she pulled out the bottle of pills and twisted the lid off, she just stared at them for a while before, without thinking properly, putting a couple in her hand and putting them in her mouth. After a while, Martha felt her head spinning before she fell into an unconscious state. She had successfully blocked out the pain, but at what cost. ********************************* Next time: Will anyone find Martha before it’s too late? How much damage has Martha really done? Comments??
dee83 Posted November 17, 2008 Report Posted November 17, 2008 Hope someone does find her and I hope she hasn`t done any damage to herself or the baby, I know shes hurting but drinking and taking pills isn`t going to help why oh why didn`t she listen to Jack when it first happened then this wouldn`t be happening now Update Soon
Barbara Posted November 18, 2008 Report Posted November 18, 2008 I hope your exams went well. How can Martha get drunk when she's pregnant? And take pills? Is she crazy? I hope she and the baby will be okay. Someone has to find her really soon. More please.
KatieroxNZ Posted November 18, 2008 Report Posted November 18, 2008 I hope your exams went well. How can Martha get drunk when she's pregnant? And take pills? Is she crazy? I hope she and the baby will be okay. Someone has to find her really soon. More please. Thank-you Barbara, yes my exams went o.k.... I think!!! Might of failed French, but 4 outta 5 ain't bad, i guess I might update soon, i've got the day off today.... Woop! Woop! Coz i'm sick ..... But it's given me plenty of time to get the story finished xxx
Inactive User Posted November 19, 2008 Report Posted November 19, 2008 Hi Katie! Hopefully your exams went well. My sister (who had turned 17 two weeks ago) got a exam today and probably more this week or next week. I am six years older than her, lol. Great update and can't wait for the next update.
dee83 Posted December 28, 2008 Report Posted December 28, 2008 Hope you continue its fantastic Update Soon
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