jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 2, 2008 Report Posted June 2, 2008 Poor Martha That's terrible...but Jackie was there to help her through with it. Nothing bad had better happen when they return to the Bay
Barbara Posted June 2, 2008 Report Posted June 2, 2008 ^ Good luck! I'm looking forward to your next update! It will change my mind off my stupid exams! Just for you Barbara Thank you. I hope your exams are going well! Poor Martha! Her little sister died. Fortunately she has Jack to help her get through it! More please.
amz89 Posted June 3, 2008 Report Posted June 3, 2008 Thats kewl, i like this fic, enjoy your holiday!!
KatieroxNZ Posted June 6, 2008 Report Posted June 6, 2008 Thanks everyone for your LOVELY comments, they mean alot ANYMORE COMMENTS???
matticus01 Posted June 7, 2008 Report Posted June 7, 2008 Thanks everyone for your LOVELY comments, they mean alot ANYMORE COMMENTS??? YES ! ! ! I just read the whole thing . . . every chapter and loved it Your chapters are shortbut that not bad . . . You also seem to update regularly which is also a very good thing . . . But can I make a suggestion? With your updates I found it a little hard to figure out who was talking to who so instead of this . . . “Jack it doesn’t matter, please just leave it” she said trying to get past him again, but he stopped her once more “Martha don’t walk away please just tell me what’s going on. Is it the baby” he asked her with a hint of worry in his voice. “Jack what don’t you get, I said leave it…So please just do what I ask for once” she said running into their bedroom and shutting the door, Jack decided not to follow her it was obvious she needed her space. You could do this . . . “Jack it doesn’t matter, please just leave it” she said trying to get past him again, but he stopped her once more “Martha don’t walk away please just tell me what’s going on. Is it the baby” he asked her with a hint of worry in his voice. “Jack what don’t you get, I said leave it…So please just do what I ask for once” she said running into their bedroom and shutting the door, Jack decided not to follow her it was obvious she needed her space. but apart frmo that you are doing a GREAT job with this fic, keep it up
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 7, 2008 Report Posted June 7, 2008 Update soon, please?? *smiles sweetly*
matticus01 Posted June 7, 2008 Report Posted June 7, 2008 dont mention it . . . Cant wait for an update
KatieroxNZ Posted June 9, 2008 Report Posted June 9, 2008 THE NEXT CHAPTER SHOULD BE UP BY THURSDAY NIGHT!!! ANYMORE COMMENTS???
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