ezaz8 Posted April 1, 2008 Report Posted April 1, 2008 I really like this fan fic! I like the change in characters, very interesting! Can't wait for the next bit! Quote
matticus01 Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Posted April 3, 2008 hmmmmmmmm Interesting... I like it...ALOT... update soon Quote
matticus01 Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Posted April 3, 2008 that was amazing well done... The chemistry between Mattie and Aden is really fantastic...loved it update soon Quote
Luc Posted April 5, 2008 Report Posted April 5, 2008 ^ Thanks Bec. Hope you like the banner I made for this fic. I've never made a banner for a fic before, so this is pretty roughly done. Quote
matticus01 Posted April 7, 2008 Author Report Posted April 7, 2008 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I love the banner... Whens our next update Quote
Luc Posted April 7, 2008 Report Posted April 7, 2008 ^ I'm glad you like the banner. Next update should be very soon. Quote
Luc Posted April 7, 2008 Report Posted April 7, 2008 (edited) Here's a sneak peek at next chapter... She knew it was serious, but seeing it in writing made it much more surreal. Someone had been shot for her. She had been raped, and now someone else was now paying the consequences. And that person was Geoff Campbell, one of the most known people in NSW’s bay region. Even people from Reefton Lakes High knew who Geoff Campbell was. And she had almost gotten him killed. “It’s not your fault, you know,” Matilda turned to Aden as his voice ran through her ears as they continued to rise towards the third floor. “He knew what he was doing, Hunter. Don’t blame yourself,” Aden’s voice was soft and his facial expression matched. Edited April 7, 2008 by Luc Quote
Drew Posted April 7, 2008 Report Posted April 7, 2008 Just read the first two chapters. It's a good set up so far of what I read. It was also descriptive, the rape scenes and when Geoff was shot... Poor guy. I haven't read on yet, but I'm guessing he lives. What's a fanfic with Aden without Geoff? I can't say I was on the edge of my seat as I'm sitting on a beanbag, but it was suspensful and thrilling in a way. I'll have to read the rest of the chaps soon, they're pretty intriguing. Quote
Luc Posted April 7, 2008 Report Posted April 7, 2008 Thanks Drew. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Chapter three is a bit dull, but chapters four and up get more interesting. Quote
matticus01 Posted April 7, 2008 Author Report Posted April 7, 2008 wow...that was amazing Luc...well done I would really like you to continue but it is really up to you... I loved the discriptive writing between Matilda and Geoff... Looking up as the heart monitor slowed, Matilda couldn’t help but smile as she realised he had fallen asleep. The continuous beep of the steady monitor made Matilda really appreciate who was watching over them on that fretful day. Matilda felt Geoff’s fingers pulse against hers softly and brought her other hand to rest on his arm. She didn’t know what came over her, but she just had a gut feeling that he wouldn’t mind if she rubbed her fingers up and down his arm, her fingertips gently brushing across his scratched knuckles. Matilda smiled to herself as his fingers stopped pulsing and he let out a small breath as she continued to run her fingers up and down his arm, dancing around his IV’s and a few other health related equipment attached to his skin. Laying her head on her free arm, Matilda studied his face, peaceful with sleep and drugs. She didn’t know what was to come of this experience, but for some reason, she just knew everything was going to work out fine. that was my favourite bit...it was so beautiful... Quote
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