Tasha Posted May 1, 2007 Report Posted May 1, 2007 wow, great chapter. Jack's a hero BUt Martha better survive, she cant die. I hate fics where she dies More please Quote
dolly-999 Posted May 1, 2007 Author Report Posted May 1, 2007 wow, this just keeps getting better and better, you've got a real talent for writting. Well done. Quote
puja Posted May 1, 2007 Report Posted May 1, 2007 This is really, really good! Poor Martha I hope she's alright. And Jack. Risking his life to go and save her. What a guy Can't wait for more Pamy! Quote
-Jade- Posted May 1, 2007 Report Posted May 1, 2007 Wow, brilliant writing! Very intense and interesting to read. Can't wait for the next chapter - please don't leave it too long. Quote
Tasha Posted May 2, 2007 Report Posted May 2, 2007 wow, great chapter. Poor Martha. I like Brooke, kill Cam She better survive More please Quote
puja Posted May 2, 2007 Report Posted May 2, 2007 Aww, she's a fighter that McKenzie! But, she was shot twice?! Bet that jerk Cam had something to do with it Jack Holden certainly is a hero This fic is really, really good! You write it so well and your style is very unique Hope you update soon. Quote
beckyboo Posted May 2, 2007 Report Posted May 2, 2007 puja said: Aww, she's a fighter that McKenzie! Puja darling shes a Holden This is soo good Update soon xxxxx Quote
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