Jen Posted April 21, 2008 Report Posted April 21, 2008 Great updates! I could feel the intensity in that room ... and really didn't expect Jack to be dragged into it all. Thank goodness the police came - but how did they know? I suppose you'll tell us soon Quote
Jen Posted April 22, 2008 Report Posted April 22, 2008 Noo! You can't end it there! My first thought was that something has happened to Annie - I hope not. I really liked seeing all the different recounts of the situation. You captured each of the different attiudes really well. I especially loved Aden's reaction to the whole thing. He didn't seem too bothered by it Quote
Luc Posted April 22, 2008 Report Posted April 22, 2008 WOW! I'm in suspense. I loved that chapter, it was great reading each of the reactions, you caught the characters personalities perfectly. Quote
valli Posted April 22, 2008 Author Report Posted April 22, 2008 Finally I caught up! No, you can't leave it like that! I know that I complained about you updating too fast, but I take it back I really liked the way you have written this story. And the kiss in chapter 6 was sweet And Geoff is cute when he's jealous More very soon please! Quote
carmelle Posted April 22, 2008 Report Posted April 22, 2008 you can't just leave it like that! I loved that episode... the reactions from those 3 were exactly what you would expect. I loved this part... ...when Bible Boy and Sister Melody came in Quote
Anaya Posted April 22, 2008 Report Posted April 22, 2008 (edited) I'm intrigued now, and I really want to know what's happened! Please, please update soon. This chapter was very well written. Splitting it up, with each of their reactions to the ordeal they've just been through, was a very good idea. It gave me a better insight on their experience, with their different reactions to the same situation. You really captured their varying attitudes, Melody's hysteria and Aden's Nonchalance, to the situation perfectly. Well done, can't wait for the next update. Edited April 22, 2008 by anaya1 Quote
matticus01 Posted April 23, 2008 Report Posted April 23, 2008 HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE ! ! ! ! ! EVIL . . . . . . . . . . . . But I loved every second of every chapter . . . . . . . . I really hope you update really soon :) Quote
kaciexox Posted April 23, 2008 Report Posted April 23, 2008 (edited) Just read this whole thing and I have to say I really love it I love how you write so true the characters. It was really interesting to see the way the statments differed from each character. And I love Aden and Belle And I bet someone's died or something, hopefully not to do with Annie I really love the way you write and can't wait for the next chapter Edited April 23, 2008 by kaciexox Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted April 24, 2008 Report Posted April 24, 2008 (edited) "Well me and Belle were like, about to leave, because we have better taste in places to hang out, thanks, when Bible Boy and Sister Melody came in." "Them being Geoffrey Campbell and Melody Jones?" "Yeah, right, whatever. I loved that bit I just read all the chapters. This fic is amazing. Especially love Aden and Belle Please update soon, can't wait for more Edited April 24, 2008 by Jacksthehottest Quote
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