Belle. Posted November 9, 2007 Report Posted November 9, 2007 Woah, Jen this is awesome! You're a really great writer, and I'm loving the dialogue Can't wait for your next chapter! Quote
matticus01 Posted November 19, 2007 Report Posted November 19, 2007 “And I wouldn’t try anything stupid,” Diesel continued, “You know what happened last time.” He spun around quickly and drew the gun like he was in a western shoot out. Mattie let out a squeal of terror and I held on to her for dear life. Drew flinched, but there was no movement from Cassie. Diesel just laughed and pulled back the gun. “As if I would do anything that dumb,” he scoffed. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I LLOVED THAT BIT hehe cant wait for the next chapter lol....great again :D :lol: Quote
matticus01 Posted December 6, 2007 Report Posted December 6, 2007 I looked around at the group of adults staring back at me. Talk about pressure. I felt like I was in some kind of interrogation down at the police station. ‘Anything you do say, will be taken down and may be used in evidence’. Was I meant to continue? “That was Barry,” Sally said to everyone and no one in particular, “there’s been a report of a gunshot at the school. He’s there with Jack and they think there are people inside.” She didn’t have to say anything further. Did this mean what I thought it meant? Of course it did. They were trapped in the school with some crazy gunman who’s doing God knows what. Everyone frantically left the Diner, leaving the cold coffee cups on the table. * * * * * that was great...oooooooooo i cant wait to read the next chapter...i hope sally doesn't do anything stupid Quote
*caitie* Posted December 6, 2007 Report Posted December 6, 2007 this is great!!!please update soon or I'll die!!!!!lol Quote
Anaya Posted December 7, 2007 Report Posted December 7, 2007 Loving this story... great update! Cant wait to read more... i'm so intrigued to find out if anyone was shot! Quote
Jackieleanne Posted December 19, 2007 Report Posted December 19, 2007 Just read this and wow its amazing I love it, hope everything is ok with them all loving Mattie and Lucas especially so cute. Quote
matticus01 Posted December 30, 2007 Report Posted December 30, 2007 omg that was so brilliant i loved it...... Sally...you idiot...now your gunna be in trouble please let them all be safe update soon Quote
*caitie* Posted December 30, 2007 Report Posted December 30, 2007 Woah!!Thsi fic is getting better and better!!!Please please please update soon!!!!!! Quote
menacegirl Posted January 5, 2008 Report Posted January 5, 2008 Wow! This fic is awsome, i love how your keeping me on the edge of my seat!!! I soooooooooooo cant wait to see what happens next! Quote
Anaya Posted January 15, 2008 Report Posted January 15, 2008 I am so on the edge of my seat... please update soon i'm really intrigued as to whats going to happen next! Hope they will all be alright! BTW Loving this fanfic... its written really very well! Quote
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