Always & Forever (by KaitieL) - comments

[Jen]

I just had to come and see what you had written. I'm not normally a JM fic fanatic but this is just so beautifully written. You really create a calming atmosphere and the build up to the diagnosis is great. A really touching ending too. I guess it seems the right thing for Jack to do. It was all so emotional. Well done!

[valli]

I agree with Jen. The beginning was also very catching. I read the first lines, and then I couldn't stop, I had to finish. And the build-up to the diagnosis was, like Jen said, great

The ending was so touching and sad It was very Romeo and Juliet

Well done. Hopefully I'll have the possibility to read more of your stories

[Zetti]

That was just so sweet.

A sad but perfect ending to the one shot

Hope you write more one shots or fics

[KaitieL]

Thanks for the comments guys. Nice to see that someone read it and actually liked it.

[valli]

Well, what's not to like about it?

By the way, just let me know when you want it moved

[Barbara]

* wipes away tears *

I think that's one of the saddest fics I've ever read.

The end was so moving!

Great oneshot! It was very well written. Once you start reading it, you can't stop.

Looking forward to read your other fics. Actually, I already read This Old Love but you knew that.

[Channy!!!]

At first the title drew me into reading it as it was such a Naley title...

It was really beautifully written probably one of the best I've read, it was perfect.. SO SAD but great!

You should write more.

[jack+martha=trooluvv]

Beautiful.

Just beautiful.

[muffincake]

That was so beautifully written, I cried!

loved the bit about the puppy too!!!

[zzazzb]

aww that was so sad.

you had me in tears at the end.

absolutly beautifly written too