vale4eva Posted April 8, 2008 Author Report Posted April 8, 2008 Aw, this is so sweet I dont want this fic to end I love how they practically act like a couple, but they're both still oblivious to how the other feels lol If only Martha would open up to him! Loving this, cant wait for more Quote
Barbara Posted April 8, 2008 Report Posted April 8, 2008 That was great. Jack wants her to stay. She can't leave. Jack's right; who is he going to tease if she's gone? If only they would both admit their true feelings. More please. Quote
bay girl Posted April 9, 2008 Report Posted April 9, 2008 Aww, this fic is so sweet. It should be more than four chapter though. That was a great update. Cant wait for more. Quote
Tasha Posted April 9, 2008 Report Posted April 9, 2008 awww...cuteness. Jack needs to open up about his feelings so that Martha does too. Then they can finally be together Great chapter though More please Quote
Zetti Posted April 9, 2008 Report Posted April 9, 2008 Jack and Martha are pratically a couple already just without the 'messy bit' Martha cant leave. Who will Jack wind up? More please Quote
Pengzilla Posted April 19, 2008 Report Posted April 19, 2008 Awww very cute fic! I love the banter between JM. And I also love the fact i'm reading a fic from Jacksthehottest and it isn't taking months to update between each chapter! Update soon. Quote
Tasha Posted April 23, 2008 Report Posted April 23, 2008 There she had seen Jack and Laurie sitting down together drinking. Who's Laurie??? Great ending though So to continue the other fic please! Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted April 23, 2008 Report Posted April 23, 2008 Thankyou for pointing that out. Meant to say Julie not Laurie Quote
Pengzilla Posted April 23, 2008 Report Posted April 23, 2008 Awww! Very cute! I could really imagine it happening! I loved the "phoning Alf" bit. Great fic. Nice to read something completed by you! (for a change. ) Heh. Quote
vale4eva Posted April 24, 2008 Author Report Posted April 24, 2008 Aw, I had been looking forward to this last chapter, and it certainly didnt disappoint Such an adorable and cute fic. These types are my favourite, along with ones which include lots of sexual tension Always love your work Hope to read more soon. Quote
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