After the Tone (by Pengzilla) - comments

[vale4eva]

Oh and if I dont speak to you soon, good luck with your exams

PS, and you were spot on with the comment about Jack doing that deep breathing thing lol, he really does do that. I'm glad I wasnt the only one that picked up on that

He does that? I honestly didn't notice. I just made it up.

Now who looks like a freak!?

Oh shut up you

And yes he does do that heavy breathing thing. And if you were a real fan, you'd know that!

Hmph!

Its my obsessive tendancies that make me act this way

[Zetti]

This was beyone amazing, there is absolutely no words around to decribe it! I love the way you add a bit of humour to it. I loved this bit

“If you’re calling because you love me, then I love you too. Always have done, always will. If I’d only have known that before things got so messed up then maybe we wouldn’t have had to deal with half of what we have. But… you can’t change the past. You can change the future though, and I’d really like a future with you. Please leave a message. Tell me where to meet you. Tell me when I can bring you home. I miss you. I love you.”

Too damn cute

[zzazzb]

Oh, and if it’s Jack – please leave a message this time. I mean... it does sound really cute when you do that deep breathing thing when you panic… but it makes crap voicemail. You have nothing to worry about. I still love you.”

that was so cute. my favuorite line.

lovedd the story, even if you didn't come up with the plot, you wrote it so well

Edited June 21, 2008 by zzazzb

[Scotcaz22]

Wow.......the ending (esp. the message Jack left on the answering machine for Martha) have sent a shiver down my back...and now I have goosebumps...I blame you for that! LOL

A very beautiful written story. I loved it!

Thanks