puja Posted July 21, 2007 Report Posted July 21, 2007 Josh' cluelessness was amusing! Aww, Jack still showed he cared for Martha by referring to her taking drugs. At least thats something. I wonder what Martha will do next She's trying to get through to Jack but, nothing seems to be working... Can't wait to read more Quote
beckyboo Posted July 21, 2007 Report Posted July 21, 2007 Great Chapter!!!!! This is soo good!!!! Well Martha hes not exacty going to be best friends with you! Quote
Tasha Posted July 21, 2007 Report Posted July 21, 2007 Kah! I so wanted them to pounce on each other Im glad Jamie told Martha about the kiss Very well written More please and your not on line Quote
Zetti Posted July 21, 2007 Report Posted July 21, 2007 Always has to be problems. Martha and Jack talked . Thats something I suppose. Quote
dolly-999 Posted July 22, 2007 Report Posted July 22, 2007 Awsome chapter, very well written, I loved the way you discribed things, particularly in the first half, it was very well done, you should be proud of yourself. Loved the JM interaction. More soon please. Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted July 22, 2007 Report Posted July 22, 2007 Brilliant writing, you write the JM interaction really well I loved that chapter, they argued again lol, but atleast they talked Please update soon, can't wait for more Quote
bay girl Posted July 22, 2007 Report Posted July 22, 2007 Lovin the J/M stuff. I'm glad that Jamie loves Josh; just as long as she's not lying. Jack wants Martha. Martha wants Jack. hehe. Now im just fretting about Hugh, and his return. Whenever that will be. Quote
puja Posted July 22, 2007 Report Posted July 22, 2007 Thanks for the reassurance from Jamie; that she loves Josh. I was starting to get a little worried... Looking forward to another argument Hopefully with a more positive outcome this time round Can't wait to read more! Quote
Sam =) Posted July 23, 2007 Report Posted July 23, 2007 Wow I had alot to catch up on and I will go back and read it again but I had to do it quick before I go out. I don't think I had read it since like chapter 1 and I havn't had a chance while I've been away. All I can say is fix it Quote
beckyboo Posted July 23, 2007 Report Posted July 23, 2007 Jack and Martha Finally back were they belong Update soon Rach xxxxxxxx Quote
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