puja Posted July 23, 2007 Report Posted July 23, 2007 Excellent chapter! “Because he took from you the one thing I wanted the most ... He experienced the one thing I would have been so honoured to share with you. I wanted that night to be ours more than anything; it was something special that we could share for the first time together. But you just couldn’t wait could you” his voice gradually softened. “I wanted that night with you so badly … I wanted to be your first, and only ... but you just…” the words drifted away as he shook his head, sitting down and putting his head in his hands in sadness. That part especially was beautifully written. You could feel Jack's pain completely in that paragraph Bless him I just hope he doesn't regret it now. Please, please update soon Quote
bay girl Posted July 24, 2007 Report Posted July 24, 2007 Very nice. Finally they gave in. I have a feeling that Jack's going to regret it, and go back to be a jerk to her. LOL. Ah well. Im sure it will end up fine soon enough. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next. Quote
Tasha Posted July 24, 2007 Report Posted July 24, 2007 Its about time Great chapter. Very well written Jacky will regret it wont he more please Quote
dolly-999 Posted July 24, 2007 Report Posted July 24, 2007 I have a feeling that Jack's going to regret it, and go back to be a jerk to her. LOL. Ah well. Im sure it will end up fine soon enough. Sadly I agree, I doubt he'd just move on just from sleeping with her, it would be nice if he did. Poor Martha, she'd be devistated if he regected her. Beautiful chapter, well done as usual. Can't wait for more. Quote
Zetti Posted July 24, 2007 Report Posted July 24, 2007 Jack will regret it, Love is never that easy Poor Jacky. Quote
Zetti Posted July 24, 2007 Report Posted July 24, 2007 It was just perfect Thank you!!! More please. Quote
beckyboo Posted July 24, 2007 Report Posted July 24, 2007 Im not sure what I think Updates soon xxxxxxxx Quote
Tasha Posted July 24, 2007 Report Posted July 24, 2007 awww...bless he's little socks Great chapter More please Quote
bay girl Posted July 25, 2007 Report Posted July 25, 2007 Aw, that was lovely. But im preparing myself for some angst in the next chapter. I feel that Jack's going to get nasty. LOL. Quote
puja Posted July 25, 2007 Report Posted July 25, 2007 (edited) Note: I hope you were able to read that with a straight face Puja Nope, the anticipation left me giggling the whole way through I don't think Jack's going to be a happy bunny in the next chapter; still probably upset and confused Please update soon. Edited July 25, 2007 by puja Quote
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