Zetti Posted July 25, 2007 Report Posted July 25, 2007 (edited) Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek Please make sure nothing bad happens It seems I read it wrong, its Hughy! More please. Edited July 25, 2007 by Zetti Quote
beckyboo Posted July 25, 2007 Report Posted July 25, 2007 I can kinda see were Jacks coming from, however I can also see were Marthast coming from. They both wanted it, yet Jack wont admit that it did mean something. Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Best not be Hugh Update soon xxxxxxxxx Quote
Tasha Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 HUghys back I missed him Poor JAcky and Martha Great short chapter More please Quote
bay girl Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 You told me that there would be no more puke-worthy Martha/ Hugh stuff. Now, it's fine that he's back, but i swear to god, if Martha gives into him; it's war!!!!! Quote
puja Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 Hugh's back! I'm choosing to take this as a positive. He'll want Martha back, Martha won't give him the time of day, and Jack can be their to protect her from Hughs' evil advances That just about sounds perfect Just as long as he doesn't hurt Martha... Ouch. That line about it, 'just being sex' must've hurt Martha. I'm not sure who he's trying to kid but, their night together meant something to Jack too. Maybe Hugh's arrival will be a wake up call for Jack; make him realise that he does still love Martha *hopes* Great update! Even if Hugh is starting to creep me out More soon please! Quote
kaciexox Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 HUGH!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO great chappy update soon Quote
Zetti Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 Preview: Is Martha in touble You should know if she is in trouble Please dont hurt her, pleaseee! Quote
beckyboo Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 (edited) Preview: Is Martha in trouble Is Rach in trouble Update soon yoouuu Edited July 26, 2007 by beckyboo Quote
-Jade- Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 (edited) Right...long post coming through!!!! Firstly wanted to say... HAPPY BIRTHDAY RACHEL!!!! Hope you've had a great day. Secondly, wow! How good is this getting? I love it. I know I haven't commented at all a lot, but it wasn't because I haven't been reading! Partly, I've been busy and away a lot, partly, I'm just lazy. But seriously, this is getting really good - I know you were slightly unsure at one point about it but it's getting really juicy now. Having the two plots running alongside simultaneously is making it really interesting. Now, the problem I'm having really is that J&M are obviously made for each other. But deep down... you know, deep deep down there, I'm still harbouring some Martha-hate. It's not good. And this goes against my natural inclination, but I almost want Jack to say no to Martha. Because she hurt him so badly. In fact, I just kinda want to step into the story and give him a big hug. Figured that it wouldn't be a great idea to stick my foot through the monitor though. lol Anyways, as always, excellent writing, brilliant in fact. AND some gloriously long chapters. AND regular updates. (It's great - since I keep going away for a few days at a time, I always come back to loads of chapters.) I mean what more could I want? Oh yea, that's right, Hugh to go away. Please update asap. (They still don't let you use enough damn smilies in these posts. ) Edited July 26, 2007 by -Jade- Quote
bay girl Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 If Jack gets there and finds her in bed with that creep or something like that; I'll snap. You hear that Rach? You know how i get. LOL. Great chapter. Except for the part about Hugh. I dont like him. Urghh. Quote
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