kaciexox Posted August 4, 2007 Report Posted August 4, 2007 i need an update now so cute loved it Quote
-Jade- Posted August 4, 2007 Report Posted August 4, 2007 (edited) Erm. *clears throat* Where's the update, Rach? Edited August 4, 2007 by -Jade- Quote
dolly-999 Posted August 5, 2007 Report Posted August 5, 2007 (edited) I don't know what else to say, that was beautiful the way Jack was looking out for Martha. Good job. Can't wait for more. Edited August 5, 2007 by dolly-999 Quote
Tasha Posted August 5, 2007 Report Posted August 5, 2007 (edited) OMG Final Destination gave me nightmares. I hate those movies. Martha is already having nightmares, she dont need more BUt a very sweet chapter. MOre please Looking into her entrancing brown eyes, Martha has blue eyes Rach, unless she has brown in this fic, then my bad. Edited August 5, 2007 by Tasha Quote
bay girl Posted August 5, 2007 Report Posted August 5, 2007 Just caught up with the last two chapters. Very good. I love Jack. I guess this is coming to an end soon. I hope you have another one in the works. lol. Quote
puja Posted August 5, 2007 Report Posted August 5, 2007 Another cute chapter. Glad Jack and Martha cleared the air. Now please, no more misunderstandings between the two Hmm, so the night continues does it...can't wait to read more! Quote
vale4eva Posted August 5, 2007 Report Posted August 5, 2007 Looking into her entrancing brown eyes, Martha has blue eyes Rach, unless she has brown in this fic, then my bad. Wups, my bad. I guess cause her eyes are always dark with eyeliner, I just presumed they were brown lol Her eyes are now brown in my fic Quote
-Jade- Posted August 5, 2007 Report Posted August 5, 2007 (edited) That was really sweet. Jack's so cute, Martha's one lucky girl. Please update soon Rach. You know you want to! Preview: the night continues... Well that could only mean one thing... Edited August 5, 2007 by -Jade- Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted August 5, 2007 Report Posted August 5, 2007 Brilliant Chapter I loved it, it was so cute, Martha's lucky Please update soon, can't wait for more Quote
vale4eva Posted August 5, 2007 Report Posted August 5, 2007 (edited) I made a mistake!!! I cant believe it!! *bangs head off laptop in total disapointment* It was so late and I was so tierd and rushing to get the chapter up and Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *cries* Oh well, but you no what im like when it comes to mistakes This part is not meant to say 'cant' .... “Thanks for telling me. I no it cant be hard having to re-live that in your mind." It should say .... I no it cant be easy having to relive that in your mind. Edited August 5, 2007 by vale4eva Quote
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