Losing My Way (by vale4eva) - comments

[-Jade-]

Awww - it's nearly the end. How sad.

But on the bright side J&M are being adorable.

Wow, Jack really worships that girl. lol The number of references to 'angels' when he looks at her! Well, it's sweet.

Can't wait for the last chapter (but at the same time I really can, since I don't want it to end) - I know it'll be great.

You better be writing another fic after this Rach or I'll come after you. Be warned.

Edited August 6, 2007 by -Jade-

[beckyboo]

She was going to make us all wait for this

Awwww its over *sheads tears*

Im going to miss it!!!!!!!!

There getting married!!!!!! yay

There going to make a baby

Post a sequal

Well this is the part I would say update soon lol

But I cant sooo Well done im going to miss it!!!!!

[bay girl]

Oh, i loved it.

That was so sweet. Aww, a little baby Holden. So cute.

Great fic Rach. Well, except the first horrid part with Martha and Hugh. LOL.

Can't wait to read a new fic.

[Tasha]

“Let’s make a baby” she giggled…

That cracked me up, i dont know why, but i cant stop laughing at it I guess im just high

Such a beautiful chapter. Its amazing that only a few days ago that were yelling at each other, and now they are engaged and making itty bitty Baby Holdens I love Jack and Martha <33

But its all finished now Another brilliant fic

Now for the new one -angelic look-

Great work Rach

[kaciexox]

its over

but it was brilliant

loved the last chapter it was sooooo cute

can't wait for your next one

[-lolly-]

N'aawwww a marriage and baby! How adorable, i love this Jack and Martha I don't want it to end now

Well done Rachel, this has been a great fic except for the Martha/Hugh stuff, that definately scarred me for life This fic throughout the begining made me angrier than i think a fic ever has, but i still loved it

But I have definately enjoyed reading especially all the last few chapter with the Jack and Martha fluff

Can't wait for your newest one to come out!

[holden_girl9051]

Aww its over

That was such a cute ending

I loved it so much

Can't wait for your next fic

[>>Emma<<]

That was so adorable

They're getting married and they're going to have a lickle baby..it's soo cute!

Now they can live happily ever after.

You wrote it all so well, I can't wait for your new one!

Oh Rach...ever heard of an epilogue?

[-Jade-]

:wub:

Ok, so I used up practically all of the available smileys, but it was worth it, because that was adorable. The proposal took me by surprise! Very, erm, quick, but totally romantic.

All I can say now is...

HA HA HUGH!!!

Fabulous writing Rach, I really can't wait til the next story - don't leave it too long!

Oh yea, and one other thing, you make me laugh. Near the beggining you put 'know' instead of 'no', and later on you put 'no' instead of 'know'. I think you'll get what I mean.

Edited August 7, 2007 by -Jade-

[vale4eva]

^^Shuddup

It was 11pm when I wrote that