kaciexox Posted July 22, 2008 Report Posted July 22, 2008 Martha and Jack-y sittin in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G Awwwh they are so cute Martha's one lucky girl, spending a night alone with Jack in a shed so small they can hardly move, doing God knows what ........ Update soon Quote
matticus01 Posted July 22, 2008 Report Posted July 22, 2008 A gentle huff was released as she contemplated her predicament; either close her eyes and pray the spider wouldn’t creep out and pounce on her in the middle of the night, or remain awake, getting absolutely no sleep and being bored out of her brains. Taking another glance at Jack, she smiled in adoration. He truly was a vision. How anyone could abandon this wonderful man was beyond her. Unable to prevent it, temptation grabbed a hold of her, and she found herself shuffling across. Leaning her body towards him, she tentatively laid her head on his shoulder, keeping her legs folded up tight to her chest, she closed her eyes. Not long after and she felt him fidget, moving slightly to get more comfortable, before wrapping an arm around her body; holding her towards him and keeping her warm. With smiles fixed on their faces, they both drifted off into a peaceful sleep; cuddled up feeling safe and warm in the corner of the shed… I've had so much to catch up on . . . Im so lazy I just loved the way you wrote that part, sheer genius . . . I agree with Kacie . . . Martha and Jack . . . SITTING IN A SHED K-I-S-S-I-N-G Quote
Zetti Posted July 22, 2008 Author Report Posted July 22, 2008 Taking another glance at Jack, she smiled in adoration. He truly was a vision. How anyone could abandon this wonderful man was beyond her. Unable to prevent it, temptation grabbed a hold of her, and she found herself shuffling across. Leaning her body towards him, she tentatively laid her head on his shoulder, keeping her legs folded up tight to her chest, she closed her eyes. Not long after and she felt him fidget, moving slightly to get more comfortable, before wrapping an arm around her body; holding her towards him and keeping her warm. With smiles fixed on their faces, they both drifted off into a peaceful sleep; cuddled up feeling safe and warm in the corner of the shed… Just so well written Quote
Tasha Posted July 22, 2008 Report Posted July 22, 2008 awww...cuteness More please soon As well as SS please Quote
zzazzb Posted July 22, 2008 Report Posted July 22, 2008 that last but was so cute! Update soon please Quote
valli Posted July 23, 2008 Report Posted July 23, 2008 Phew, finally I managed to catch up with this story Anyway, brilliant chapters! Really well written And I really, really, really don't like Alec >.< I'd kick him out before he'd get the chance to say "cake" Jack and Martha are getting closer Now we just have to wait for the kiss and then it's bye bye Alec Hopefully... More please! Quote
Yankee White Posted July 26, 2008 Report Posted July 26, 2008 I've had so much to catch up on . . . Im so lazy I just loved the way you wrote that part, sheer genius . . . I agree with Kacie . . . Martha and Jack . . . SITTING IN A SHED K-I-S-S-I-N-G Yeah too right! Please i'm begging you make them kiss! Sorry i haven't reviewed before Quote
Barbara Posted July 28, 2008 Report Posted July 28, 2008 Too bad it started raining. But now they can sit close to each other. Aw they're sleeping in each other's arms. How cute! Now they have to kiss and Martha has to dump Alec. More please. Quote
KaitieL Posted July 31, 2008 Report Posted July 31, 2008 Is powerfullest a word? Lol, enough picking. I had two chapters to catch up on, two wonderful chapters. Aw Martha's in love with Jack. But no kiss, Rach I'm disappointed. No Martha won't make her decision. Alec will probably be all sweet and she'll have doubts. Dump him woman. More please. Quote
Tasha Posted July 31, 2008 Report Posted July 31, 2008 “I mean, how can a person be in love with someone, after less than a week? God, it’s barely been 4 days! It sounds so ridiculous!” Ridiculous sounds about right But then again, its Jack. It could have been love at first sight So Alec finally decides to spend some time with his fiancee, how lovely. Wedding plans probably, which'll make Martha feel guilty and will decide to stick with Alec Urgh! I dont like Alec. Can Martha at least have an affair with Jack?? Great chapter More please Quote
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