Taniya_K Posted September 28, 2008 Report Posted September 28, 2008 Understood it... Poor Aden! Let him be ok!! Please update soon [i know you said every Sunday but I can always try...]. I wanna know what happens to him now! xoxo
xknomex Posted September 28, 2008 Report Posted September 28, 2008 omg!! Aden..... you must save Aden!!! please make it better!!!! please make sunday come faster!!!! xx
wrongturntaken Posted September 28, 2008 Report Posted September 28, 2008 OMG! What is happening with Aden! More please please please! I can't wait a week! (dw i know what it's like too, lol) Great chapter!
honeychild Posted September 29, 2008 Report Posted September 29, 2008 Ok, so i said i would be updating like every sunday so SURPRISE!! its monday! thought i'd give yous a little bit extra, to make up for the lenght of time i havent updated!!! ------------------------------ After regaining consciousness and stumbling his way off the beach Aden had got Belle's call, although his mind was barely working enough for her words to register. he couldnt concentrate on what she said and eventually overrode any other functions of his mind and while still on the phone his whole body just gave out and he collapsed to the ground, hitting his head on a rock as he fell down down down deeper down into the darkest places that his mind would take him. the odd thing was that he was very, very concious of what was happening inside his mind but he couldn't escape it. and he so badly wanted to. it was like watching an old home movie as his mind replayed various scenes from his life over and over again with no respite. it was like being taken on a journey through all the most tragic scenes in his life as visions flashed through his mind. He just wanted to escape, seeing things in his fevered brain that he never wanted to see again was like even more torture to an already tortured soul. even the memories of his mother. he would've been happy if the memories he saw of her were the good ones - the ones from when he was younger and her laughter would fill the whole house, holidays in the sun, or even just days when he was sick and she would take care of him, tell him stories, love him. instead it was the car crash he saw, in a ghastly slow motion so that he could see every second of the impact; the crunching of metals, smashing of glass, breaking of bones and ending of life. more memories flooded his brain, faster and faster, making it burn. his father getting drunk and smashing bottles merged into his mothers funeral which smashed into his father yelling at him, hitting him, telling him it was HIS fault the car crash. the day he had nearly burnt the house down because Justin wasnt there and his dad didnt care also became the day when Justin left and the day he had tried to kill himself and then it was Cassie's car crash as well....and his grandfather....oh god his grandfather. they were the worst ones, the most frequent and the hardest to escape... All he wanted was peace. But the light was dimming. Was the end coming?
Taniya_K Posted September 29, 2008 Report Posted September 29, 2008 Nooooooooooooooooo! That was an evil update! Make it better!!! xoxo
xknomex Posted September 29, 2008 Report Posted September 29, 2008 NOOOOOOO You have to save Aden!!!! Seriously you have to save him... please. Update ASAP
mk1diva Posted September 30, 2008 Report Posted September 30, 2008 omg please save Aden! That gave me goosebumps from reading it wow it was very well written Update soon xoxo
wrongturntaken Posted September 30, 2008 Report Posted September 30, 2008 Awesome update!!! What has happened to him??? They have to find him!!!!! I loved how you described what he was thinking and feeling!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!
honeychild Posted September 30, 2008 Report Posted September 30, 2008 wow its like im on fire at the moment, i just cant stop writing and it means im getting behind on work (not good!!) but i just feel like i need to get it all out (good!!!) so here you go...again!!! haha, i guess the delay in writing was just like the calm before the storm..... ------------------- Irene glanced over at Belle who sat at a table in the Diner. Her figure was hunched over, her hand gripping a hot mug of tea. it was as though she was folding her body inwards as a way of protecting herself and keeping all of her feelings locked inside. Or keeping everyone else locked out, Irene mused. She was wearing one of Aden's hoodies which he had given her a while and and at that moment in time it seemed to swamp her, making her look even smaller and more fragile. Irene had never particularly liked Aden but now all those feelings were swept aside. He ws in trouble and that meant Belle was too. And now Belle needed her. She had to be her strength in times like these. Irene slid into the seat next to Belle, who didnt even look up, instead she just kept staring blankly at the mug of tea as though it could solve all her problems and bring Aden home to her. Irene put an arm around her and wordlessly Belle leaned into her. It was such a small act, but the comfort it gave was so, so much greater. It needed no words. Gently, as though rocking a child, Irene rocked Belle in her arms letting her feel the love and support that was streaming from her heart. She felt eyes on her and looked up to see Roman watching her, in the middle of making plans with Alf for search parties to be sent out into the bush. He looked like he was barely keeping it together himself. but then again, she reminded herself, for reasons completely unknown to her he did love Aden like he was his own son. His eyes were plagued by worry and as he went back to work with Alf, Irene noticed that he periodically looked over at Nicole who was curled up listlessly on one of the sofas, fighting back tears, as though he wanted to make sure that she was still there. Her attention was then diverted to Aden's mysterious older brother and, if rumour was to be believed, his boyfriend. They too were busy making plans for the search and rescue operation. She watched them for a while too and came to realise that Aden's brother was a broken man, desperate and the thought of losing his brother was killing him. the only thing that was keeping him going was his boyfriend, words whispered in his ear, a hand on his hand, a look that showed love. She also observed the girl, Louey, trying to get involved with the planning because it was the only way she could keep herself from falling apart. But she kept being told to sit down, to keep quiet, to go away. And eventually she did, although by this point Irene had looked away, but she slipped out into the rain unnoticed. Irene had moved on, to see Morag, usually the rock of the community, steadily getting angrier and angrier that there was nothing she could do in this situation. For at that moment none of her legal credentials or her reputation could find Aden and bring him back to them. Irene looked around all these people and back to the girl in her arms and wondered when, and how, Aden had found his way into their hearts. What boy did they see that she did not? What had she missed? Would she ever find out?
Taniya_K Posted September 30, 2008 Report Posted September 30, 2008 Aw! *tear* You really are on a roll! That was just so beautiful! But poor Aden and everyone worried about him! Please update soon once again. I want to know more!
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