LisaCarmen Posted June 24, 2008 Report Posted June 24, 2008 No! You cant leave it there... Thats evil! Haha! Baby! There Pregnant Yay! Baby Holden You've just said on MSN that Your Evil... But your not evil enough to hurt Baby Holden are you! More please Siana__x mwahaha but am i?
Barbara Posted June 24, 2008 Report Posted June 24, 2008 Great start! Jack and Martha are having a baby! Jack acted like a little child when he was opening his presents! Hope Tony and Rachel are ok. I want to know what happened. You're evil? Come on, you're not evil. Well, I hope so! More please.
-x-Siana-x- Posted June 24, 2008 Report Posted June 24, 2008 No your not that evil... You'll be sorry if baby Holden ( ) Gets hurt in anyway! Siana__x
LisaCarmen Posted June 25, 2008 Report Posted June 25, 2008 Chapter 4 Martha was busy making something to eat when she heard a voice from the door, the voice of someone she really couldn't be bothered with at that particular moment in time. She attempted to make a bee line exit for the bedroom, but she was too late, Colleen had already caught sight of her. Colleen: Yoohoo only me Martha: *Slows down and turns around* Colleen..... Hey *smiles* Colleen: I just thought I would pop round and drop these off *she handed martha a plate of different asorted cakes and pastries* There were plenty going spare so ... Martha : *pauses* Colleen you erm.... you shouldn't have *smiles* Colleen: Now now, its my pleasure love *pauses* if you don't mind be saying, your looking a little rough Martha: Oh... Jeeh thanks Colleen: Is everything okay?, wheres constuble holden? and Tony and Doctor Armstrong? Martha: Erm... they just .... er .... they just poped out for a while. Getting some things in Yabbie Creek. should be back soon, but until then i really should be getting on with ..... Colleen: No no you sit down, let me make you a nice cuppa. you a little on the peaky side Martha: *Frowns* yes... you said but really colleen I just... Colleen:.... Not another word about it Martha... Okay Colleen: Now you just sit down on the sofa there, and i'll get some lunch and tea on. Martha: *bites her lip* Okay ..... 88888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 Meanwhile Jack and Alf have been looking for almost 2 hours Alf: Jack we really should inform the police Jack: No!! not yet .... I dont want to make a fuss if this is nothing to be worried about, lets just keep looking Alf: *unconvincingly carries on searching* 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 **In the summer bay house** *Matilda makes her way downstairs**Phone rings** Matilda: Hello? Cassie: Mattie, hey!, Merry Christmas Matilda: Cass, Hello, You too, How are you? Cassie: I'm great, its really cold here in England. Snowing *laughs* Matilda: Oh, thats brilliant, in a way, a nice change? Cassie: *sniggers* yeah.... oh hold on, Pippa wants to say hello .... Matilda: *laughs slightly* Okay... Pippa: Hi Mattie ..... Matilda: Hey you, hows it going? Pippa: Gooood, I got a bike!!! Matilda: A bike? really wow!! You lucky girl. And what did Chloe get? Pippa: Lots of boring baby stuff .... Matilda: *Laughs* Oh really.... okay well listen it was lovely talking to you honey, have a great day, put cass back on Pippa: Okay .... Cassie: Hey *laughs* I'm gonna have to go, Chloe needs feeding and Sally wants to go out Matilda: Okay, well you take care, and give my little godaughter a big kiss from me Cassie: I will ... See ya Matilda: Bye **Puts the phone down and walks away** **The Machine reads: 1 NEW MESSAGE** 8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 Back at Martha and Jack's ** Martha has resorted to using the nearest cushion to block off the sound coming from colleens mouth. Colleen: Milk in your tea, love? ..... Martha? Martha?? Martha: *quickly brings the cushion away from her face* Sorry what? Colleen: Would you like milk in your tea? Martha: Oh yes, yes please Colleen: *smiles and heads to the fridge* *Long Pause* Colleen: *big scream* Aawwwwww Martha!!!!!!!!! Martha: *Jumps out her skin* What, what what? Colleen: *Points to the Ultrasound picture on the fridge Martha: *sighs* Oh great ............ TO BE CONTINUED
KaitieL Posted June 25, 2008 Report Posted June 25, 2008 Bloody Colleen. Just butt out old woman. Wonder what's happened to Rachel and Tony. More please.
Barbara Posted June 25, 2008 Report Posted June 25, 2008 Oh great! Colleen is here! She can never mind her own business. Poor Martha! What happened to Tony and Rachel? More please.
stephyrose4 Posted June 25, 2008 Report Posted June 25, 2008 Colleen please, please just go away Aww what'd happened to Rachael and Tony? Hmmm.
-x-Siana-x- Posted June 26, 2008 Report Posted June 26, 2008 Finally its letting me reply! You had better tell us about Tony and Rachel soon or I'll turn nasty Love it... more please xx
amz89 Posted June 26, 2008 Report Posted June 26, 2008 Just read the whole thing love it more soon hope Rachel & Tony are okay. Loving it more soon.
LisaCarmen Posted June 28, 2008 Report Posted June 28, 2008 CHAPTER FOUR Martha: ..... Coleen, Please. You have to keep the quiet Coleen: Oh but Martha, people will be thrilled we must t.... Martha: NO! coleen, we want this kept quiet. Its up to Jack and myself who we tell and when we tell them. You have no right to tell anyone this... and speaking of Jack, they will be home soon, so I think you should maybe go, thanks for the cakes and no doubt we'll see you later in the week.... Coleen: Very well, if thats what you want, but be reasured, in a town like this?.... secrets dont say secret for long.... *walks out the door* Martha: *mutters under her breath* well not when colleen smart lives in it *sighs and sits on the sofa* 888888888888888888888888888888888888888 After 5 hours Alf and Jack had got nowhere in their search for Rachel and Tony and had decided to call it a day. They headed back to the summer bay house to discuss the situation, and while there, found themselves in a situation where they needed to tell Matilda and Ric what was going on. Matilda: So they have just disapeared, just like that? *teary* Alf: 'afraid so Love Matilda: Well we have to call the police... Jack: Mattie no.... not yet Matilda: Jack, they are missing!! this is serious Jack: we dont know anything yet.... its best to wait until the morning and then, maybe inform the police. Ric: So there was nothing out there? you didn't find anything? Alf: No mate, but that doesn't mean their still not okay Matilda: *sighs and gives a sarcastic chuckle* Jack: I need to get home to Martha.... *stands up and makes his way to the door* I'll call if theres any news Alf: All right, same here mate, you take care **Jack leaves** Alf: *to matilda* Its Okay Love, they will be fine. Well I am flamin' shattard, so i'm going to head up for a quick hours kip Ric: Aw, Okay Grandad. Mattie and I might take a walk along the beach Alf: Okay mate, you two keep safe Matilda, Ric leave and Alf walks up the stairs **Answer machine flashes in red: 1 NEW MESSAGE** 88888888888888888888888888888888888888888 Jack returns home Martha: *jumps up* Jack!! thank god your home Jack: Whats wrong? Martha: Urgh, i've just had to put up with 2 hours of colleen!! ... She knows jack, about the baby... Jack: *sighs* how'd that happen? Martha: *points the the fridge* I totally forgot Jack: great, it will be all over town by now Martha: Sorry, anyway... Any Luck? Jack: Not a thing, *sighs* Martha: *Cuddles Jack* 8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 **In An old run down barn house.... dark, cold and wet. In a room covered in nothing but hay, and a tiny light that barely saw a meter ahead, held inside it, a man, terrified, hungry and dirty. Tony had now been in here for a total of 10 hours after being shoved in due to him being caught trying to make an sos call to Alf and he was getting weaker. He needed water. Suddenly he heard footsteps and voices coming towards him. He moved slightly more towards the door in a bid to see the face of his capturer. The door flung open and a body of some sort was thrown in, with a bag covering its face. The capturer had a black ballaclaver on, and what looked like leather body wear. They slammed the door behind them and as tony heard the footsteps fade to outside he listened to a females voice outside on a telephone conversatiom: Yeah we got her.... Just the other three to come She was a tricky one, had to go out of the bay to find her Armstrong and Holden are here as well 3 down, 3 to go Okay boss A car engine began and drove off Tony leavered himself over to the body on the ground near the door Tony: Rachel? Rach *turns the body over and removes the bag from the face reviling an unconsice farmiliar face .... *silence* Tony: *Shock* Oh my god........ Hayley? TO BE CONTINUED
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