Southernfan Posted July 14, 2008 Report Posted July 14, 2008 Thank you, I'm about to write a update, hopefully it will be better, more engaging than the last couple but we will have to wait and see. But I do want you all to know how much your comments mean, it awesome knowing that people read this and find it interesting enough to warrant the time for a comment.
Roccoluver Posted July 15, 2008 Report Posted July 15, 2008 Update soon, you silly woman (Its okay, shes my friend) I love what you've written so far.
Southernfan Posted July 16, 2008 Report Posted July 16, 2008 Thanks everyone.. except Jane... no, her too heres the next part. hope you like it. Amanda pulled up outside the surf club and got out of her convertible. She clicked the lock button on the keyring. She looked around and swallowed her nerves. Things always seemed to go bad for her in Summer Bay. Apart from finding Belle, her lovely daughter... and Peter, her sexy husband, who was usually very thoughtful...apart from when he ditched her for work. But now Amanda was a mature woman and she could deal with such things in a mature fashion, such as buying new clothes with his credit card.She noticed a blonde girl walking up the road towards the club, deciding that she might know where Belle was, Amanda walked over to her. "Hey, do you know where I can find Belle Talyor?" Nicole looked up over her sunnies at the sexy blonde talking to her, this woman, she could tell had style and money, why would she want to talk to Belle. "Depends, whats it about" "I'm sorry" Amanda said confused "what do you mean?" "Why do you want to know where Belle is?" Nicole asked Amanda narrowed her eyes and glared at Nicole "Someones a little nosey ain't they" Amanda snapped 'Shes my daughter" Nicole took a step back, she need a moment to comspose herself. "Your Belle's mother?" Amanda rolled her eyes, had the I.Q of the bay gone down since she was here last... "That was what I said, wasn't it" she wasn't asking, she was stating. "No need to get in a titch lady, you'll find her at the Dinner Diner or whatever it's called" "Thanks so much" Amanda said, making the effort to fake a smile. ---------------------------------- Aden and Belle stood on the beach, watching as a wave came crashing down onto the bay, there were just a few surfers out today and a couple of people running around the beach. "So anyway" Belle said "What's wrong? and don't do the whole nothing wrong routine" Aden sighed and shoved his hands into his pockets "Can't you just leave it alone" "How can you expect me to leave it alone when its got you so bothered " she said, concern evident in her tone. "Taylor" a familiar voice called out and Belle sighed as she turned to see Drew approaching her and Aden. "Whats up mate" Drew asked Aden before turning to Belle, he wasn't doing a very good job of hiding the smirk on his face, not half as good as the job Belle was doing of not whacking it off... "So Taylor, still going out with that low life loser, whats his name begins with A.." "Rack off Drew" Belle snapped, she could control her anger but she wasn't so sure about Aden... not that she would mind watching Aden trash Drew. Drew, however had other plans and placed his arm on Belle's shoulder. "Aww, Taylor come on..." Drews speech was cut short as Aden pushed him off Belle. "I think she made it clear she doesn't want any thing to do with you, so get lost" Laughing, Drew turned to face Belle one last time before walking off. "You made a mistake Taylor, buts it okay I'll still be here when you snap out of it" --------------------------------- Nicole was lying quite happily on the beach, when again loser sufer boy came up. "Do you actually have a life or do you just wander around" she said, not bothering to look at him. "Nice seeing you too" he smiled "I'm Drew, we didn't exchange before" "I'm Miss too good for you" He grinned as he flopped down next to her. "Don't you undestand english?" she asked as she glared at him. "Maybe.... who said I into you anyway?" Nicole rolled her eyes and muttered "boys..." under her breath "Please, as if your not" "I'm not" was all he said as he got up and walked away, leaving Nicole confused on the beach.
Southernfan Posted July 16, 2008 Report Posted July 16, 2008 I was so excited to post, I did i twice silly me XD
HeavenForbid Posted July 16, 2008 Report Posted July 16, 2008 Good update Drew is going to ruin Belle and Aden's relationship Update soon.
zzazzb Posted July 17, 2008 Report Posted July 17, 2008 good chapter. i hope Drew doesn't do anything bad. good to see Nicole get rejected..
Southernfan Posted July 17, 2008 Report Posted July 17, 2008 Thanks guys I will write more soon, poor Aden is going to be picked on by Drew... and eventually Nicole and Amanda will pair up and become the terrible duo
Southernfan Posted July 20, 2008 Report Posted July 20, 2008 Heres the next part hope you like it XD also I dont know if Ozzie has Time Zone, but its a place where you go play video games and pool, etc Aden and his mates were at Gamezone, Summer Bay's own little rip off of Time Zone, playing pool. Managing to get two balls in with one shot, Aden smirked at Axel as he leaned on the pool stick. "I thought you said you never loose at pool?" he mocked friendly, Axel grinned as he eyed up his next move. "The game ain't over yet" he replied, lining up the pool stick, making sure to keep it dead on target. At that moment Drew walked in with Ric, Drew let a smile crawl onto his face. "Hey come on man, just leave it" Ric urged but Drew just laughed it off and walked over to when Aden, Axel and Jai where hanging. "Good game?" he asked innocently, he let his hand drift along the table, "accidently" knocking a few balls. Axel threw down his stick and glared at Drew, Aden on the other hand had grabbed Drew by the collar. "What do you thinking your doing" he shouted at Drew, he raised his fist to knock the silly smile off Drews face but Ric grabbed him. "Oh I'm sorry, it was an accident" Drew lied blantly, Ric let go as Aden shook him off and turned to Drew. "Come on, lets go before you get us in more trouble" Ric demanded, Drew chuckled and followed suit. Making sure they weren't out of ear shot he said loudly to Ric. "Ya know, Belles only pity dating Aden, seems the new girl wouldn't have him so she felt sorry for him. Can't see them lasting, shes bound to get of him". Ric sighed in dissappointed as Drew smiled at Aden foaming. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Belle stormed into the diner, she was as mad as hell at Drew about the beach incident. She raced in she bumped in Nicole who gave her a feral look as she, herself stormed out of the diner. Belle didn't give it a second and pushed her way into the diner, not caring about the angry customers she shoved out of the way. She threw on her aporn and twirled to face Irene who was standing behind her. "I wasn't sure if I should tell you love" "What Irene" Belle snapped, before relenting "Sorry, its just.." "Yeah, yeah doll. I figured, Drew stopped by to drop off a present for you.." "I dont't want it" Belle said simply. "I figured that much as well" Irene replied "Its in the bin if you change your mind, but only till 5 o'clock" ---------------------------------------------------------------------- If looks could kill, Charlie Buckton would be lying dead on Summer Bay beach as Amanda glared at her though dark sunnies. Amanda wasn't a woman to be crossed, not even in her reformed form was she one to be out played, as Peter's credit card could prove. "Bitch" She said under her breath as she sipped on her smoothie, she was so focused on dreaming the ways she could destroy Charlie she hadn't noticed the girl next to her. "You can say that again" Amanda almost chocked on her smoothie, except she didn't because Amanda Baker never did unlady-like things like that. Placing it on the sand next to her, she turned to face Nicole who was sitting next to her. "Excuse me?" "You hate Charlie, I hate her... We have so much in common" "Aren't you Roman's child?" Amanda asked, peering over her sunnies. "Yeah, so" Nicole snapped back. "I thought she was dating him" "She is" Nicole said coldy, Amanda smiled and flipped off her sunnies. Looking at Nicole she held out her hand. "I think this could be the start of something great"
Roccoluver Posted July 20, 2008 Report Posted July 20, 2008 Nice update, I liked it. Poor aden , evil Drew..... as for Charlie she better watch out lol
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.