Inactive User Posted August 15, 2008 Report Posted August 15, 2008 Interesting part. Update soon I agree with what everyone said about Chapter 16. Quote
adelle Posted August 17, 2008 Report Posted August 17, 2008 Annie!! Aw, I hope she makes it! Aden and Belle...lol at the ashtray haha He better fix this!! great update Quote
wooo_im_cool Posted August 17, 2008 Report Posted August 17, 2008 LOL i love how she turned various shades of red and the collection of things thrown at aden hopefully they make up *hint hint* Quote
matticus01 Posted August 17, 2008 Report Posted August 17, 2008 I was going to post the next chapter, but Im too tired so instead, here is a teaser and i'll post the next chapter tomorrow, and the reason I dont have a spoiler for the next chapter is because its not written out so from here on out I'm just typing it as it comes. Im not sure yet, but I may finish this a little earlier than expected because I have an idea for a new fic, something a little different to my usual.. but Im not sure TEASER Peering inside, he wasn’t too surprised to see she had fallen asleep, red visible eyes could be seen as she slept peacefully sideway on the bed. He smiled to himself gently before pushing the door open the rest of the way and walking over to her. Removing her shoes gently he pulled back the covers of the duvet, leant across the bed and gently caressed her bare skin before scooping her up into his arms and holding her closely as she instinctively wrapped her arms around his neck and buried her head into his chest. Kissing her forehead gently he lay her head down on the pillow and let the rest of her body sooth into the mattress before pulling the duvet up and over her, watching as she cuddled the duvet protectively. “I love you…’ he spoke gently to her before leaving the room, closing the doors and resuming his now cold place back on the couch, staring back out at the brightly lit sky. Quote
Taniya_K Posted August 17, 2008 Report Posted August 17, 2008 LMAO at the violence... though that is a bit sad! But it was just too funny! Poor Aden though... and Belle of course! I just knew it was Annie who that idiot shot! Can't wait to read more! Update soon! Quote
h&a-girl Posted August 17, 2008 Report Posted August 17, 2008 Wow wow wow! I had a feeling it would be Annie Two brilliant chapters there, can't wait for the next one Quote
xknomex Posted August 17, 2008 Report Posted August 17, 2008 omg poor adelle. please let them work it out!!! let them have a happy ending Quote
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