Inactive User Posted August 3, 2008 Report Posted August 3, 2008 Great work! I agree with everyone. It's really good. Update soon Quote
~Lynd~ Posted August 3, 2008 Report Posted August 3, 2008 This is really good.Very realistic and well written. Where's Aden,lol. Update soon. Quote
maccaz Posted August 4, 2008 Report Posted August 4, 2008 Great chapter. An extremely believable reaction from Aden. Update ASAP. Quote
MissOlivia22 Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Posted August 4, 2008 Roman examined the fist-shaped dent in his living room wall carefully before looking quizzically at Aden. “I decided to blame the wall,”Aden explained, with a hint of embarassment in the otherwise cocky response. Brilliant XD A very believable reaction from Aden and I'm glad the AVO is was taking away. Update asap Quote
~Lynd~ Posted August 5, 2008 Report Posted August 5, 2008 That was excellent,especially Adens reaction.I hope that he and Melody form a good friendship.I'm also hoping Nicole doesn't have any ulterior motives and is just concerned. Update Soon. Quote
Eko Posted August 6, 2008 Report Posted August 6, 2008 Really good story so far!!! Love the Aden scene. i can see that happening Update soon please Quote
Eko Posted August 6, 2008 Report Posted August 6, 2008 great update i wonder if axel will get away with it? i hope geoff helps mel through this. i really liking this story!! update soon please Quote
maccaz Posted August 7, 2008 Report Posted August 7, 2008 Good work. Sneaky, sneaky, Axel... Update ASAP. Quote
~Lynd~ Posted August 7, 2008 Report Posted August 7, 2008 Mmm,sneaky!Wonder if he'll actually get away with it... Update soon. Quote
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