Shattered (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[solaris]

You write so well!

*Waits in anticipation of the next update*

[I love music]

I haven't read all of this (too little time tho I'll try to read all of it some time) but that last chapter was very emotional.

[Eko]

I loved thoses chapters. I love how Melody has got so much stronger.

There is only 2 more chapters left. Nooo!!!!

update soon please!!!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. Melody is getting stronger-that's great of her. I am sure she will be a great mum and have Geoff's support. Looking forwards to the next chapter. Can't wait. *waits patiently for the next update*

[~Lynd~]

Melody's one strong girl.Forgiving your rapist is one thing,going to visit them in jail is another.

Update soon!

[maccaz]

Nice chapter.

[xknomex]

awwww they had a son!! thats sooo cute.

i cant beileve that there is only 1 chap ledt

this has been one amazing fic and written outstandingly!!!!! well done.

P.S will there be any aden in the last chap?

[Red Ranger 1]

P.S will there be any aden in the last chap?

Oh good grief...He's going to be in it.If I can think of a line to give him, I will.No promises, mind you...

Oh, and thanks for reading, like.Everyone.

Edited August 26, 2008 by Red Ranger 1

[~Lynd~]

I think naming the baby after Geoffs dad was a nice touch....if you're looking for a way to incoporate Aden i think a scene with him and baby James would be nice lol.

Update Soon...I think.I'm kinda sad this will be the last update.

[wrongturntaken]

I just caught up! These last few chapters have been incredible!!! Writing and emotions have been perfect! How many more chapters are there to go??