Lise Posted October 11, 2008 Report Posted October 11, 2008 I loved how she was comforting him through the nightmare. I hope he tells her the truth sometime (soon). Can't wait to read more.
H&A_diehard Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 Just caught up with the last two chapters. I could hug Aden. Hope he tells her everything soon. Keep writing mate, your fic is really good.
adelle Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 Awwwwwww! That was so sweet how she calmed him down during his nightmare. Poor Aden! I hope he opens up soon, I'm glad he didnt flip out at her again Update soon
zzazzb Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 Aw thats so good that's all sorted Aden still has to tell Belle why though. she doesn't know the full story yet! she's such a sweet GF though, she'll understand. update soon, that was great.
MissOlivia22 Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 Sorry, no Adelle in this chapter. Lots in the next I promise hope ----- “Hey Roman!” Miles shouted as he saw Roman just about to leave. “Hey” He replied turning around to face him “Everything Ok?” Yeh, Umm.. I was just wondering how Aden is” Miles asked, realizing how odd it must sound, It’s wasn’t as if Aden and Miles were close. The only relationship they shared was teacher-student “Yeh... He’s fine. Why?” Roman asked concerned “How’s he been at school?”. Before answering, Miles indicated for them to sit down as the two of them were blocking the exit of the Surf club. “It’s just recently he seems kind of distant from everyone else and really tired. He had a detention the other day and he fell asleep. Not only that, when I woke him up, He seemed...Scared. He freaked and bolted”. Roman automatically assumed that he must have had a nightmare, but didn’t really want to go into detail with Miles about the reason behind them. He thought for a moment how to answer without causing Miles anymore concern or wanting to dig further. “I’ll have a chat with him when he gets home” Roman settled on saying, letting Miles know that he was going to sort it and not giving away anything he didn’t need to know --------- Aden sighed, removing his history book from his bag, before chucking it into the closest corner of the living room. He entered the kitchen, finding Roman sitting there reading the newspaper. He looked up and acknowledged him without saying a word, leaving Aden to get a glass of water from the sink. Roman wasn’t sure how to start the conversation, Aden was always closed off when it came to his past and didn’t like to talk about the nightmares he experienced, even though they were becoming more and more common and causing him to have little sleep. The only other time Roman had tried to talk to Aden about his nightmares was just after he had had one. This meant that he was agitated and had bit his head off when he talked to him. Other than that, he hadn’t found the right moment or had him alone. Most of the time Belle was with him or Nicole was in the house. As Roman snapped out of his thoughts, he realized Aden was no longer in the room. Closing the newspaper, he went to go talk to him, finding him in living room, book in hand, doing homework. “Hey” Aden said looking up from his book as Roman sat on the other sofa. “Hey. What homework are you doing?” He asked, trying to sound casual. “History. Fun! fun! fun!” Aden said sarcastically causing Roman to laugh slightly. “How is school” He asked subtly. “Fine”. “I had a word with Miles earlier” Roman said and watched as Aden rolled his eyes and closed his book forcefully. “He’s worried about you”. “What he been saying” He said angrily hoping that he hadn’t told him about what happened at detention. “He said that you’ve been really distant.... And he told me about your det” Roman said Aden didn’t say anything, just looked down at his hands. He didn’t want Roman to think he was weak. He didn’t want him to know what happened in his nightmares, or that he had them every night. “What happened?” Roman asked gently although he was almost sure what had. He wanted to get Aden talking about things; It wasn’t good for him to bottle everything up. “I just fell asleep” Aden said trying to convince Roman that he was fine. He didn’t want to talk; He just wanted to get out of here. “Maybe I could talk to Rachel about you seeing a...” Roman trailed of as he heard footsteps approach the house, as a cheerful Nicole entered, shortly followed by Geoff. “God... who died...” She said noticing the atmosphere in the room and Aden’s sigh of relief. “Haha funny.... Everything’s fine” Aden lied. He placed his history book on the table and stood up avoiding eye contact with everyone else in the room “I’m going to see Belle” He said “Bye” He stood up and slipped past Geoff and Nicole. Roman wanted to stop him, but couldn’t think of a suitable reason and with Nicole and Geoff there, he couldn’t say anything anyway. Instead he turned back to the two teenagers standing hand in hard just inside the door noticing they both looked extremely happy. “What are you so happy about” Roman asked bemused. “Nothing...” Nicole said sweetly, before heading into the kitchen and returning with what Roman would tell was a math’s book. She handed it to Geoff and kissed him on the cheek. “See ya later” She said smiling happily and waved at him as he left. “What was that about” Roman asked. “I had his maths book...” She said not giving anything away. “Yeh, but you’re a little but too happy. You two finally announced your dating” He said noting that for the past few weeks they had been seeing each other, just not admitting that they were going out. “Maybe....” She said grinning “He’s taking me to dinner later, so I better go find something to wear” She said before almost skipping up the stairs leaving Roman smiling for a moment before returning his thoughts the his dilemma with Aden.
xknomex Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 My poor Aden, I need to give him a hug Roman is such a good guy taking Aden in:) Update soon xxx
wrongturntaken Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 That was great! I loved the Roman/Aden interaction and i loved that you brought Miles into it! Update soon! PLEASE! (i WANT MORE ADELLE!)
monkeysmoke Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 i just read this all through and am hooked! aden and belle back when they were good!
H&A_diehard Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 Good update mate. It's nice how Roman is trying to be supportive. It's a good idea trying to write other characters in. Keep up the good work.
Taniya_K Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 Aw Nicole and Geoff! Cute! Loved Roman trying to talk to Aden... Hope they get to talk soon. Can't wait for more. xoxo
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