solaris Posted August 27, 2008 Report Posted August 27, 2008 OMG OMG OMG, you cant leave it there!!! whats she going to say!? i love this fic!! its brilliant Couldn't have said it better! Eli, you're just mean! Excellent writing Quote
Jody Posted August 27, 2008 Report Posted August 27, 2008 How can you make us wait the whole chapter for that moment then just end it? I just can't wait for Belle's reaction. Update soon. Quote
Jen Posted August 28, 2008 Report Posted August 28, 2008 Brilliant chapter, Eli. I'm glad you brought in Drew and kind of paralleled that with whatis happening with Aden now. Very clever. I also really like how you have created the relationship between Belle and Aden. The way she reacted was unexpected, but suitable in a way. She's done stupid things too, so I don't think she would run yelling and screaming from the room. Howver, now she knows it was Geoff things are definitely going to get interesting. Quote
KaitieL Posted August 28, 2008 Report Posted August 28, 2008 Eli, that was seriously mean what you did. How could you leave it there? I wonder how Belle's going to react to that? More please. Quote
zzazzb Posted August 28, 2008 Report Posted August 28, 2008 way to leave us in suspence! Belle reacted way calmer than i expected, though i'm not sure how she'll like the new addition to the ino... update soon! Quote
Dean Posted August 28, 2008 Report Posted August 28, 2008 My jaw has dropped this low! What a cliffie! Excellent chapter there Eli, loved the parallels of Drew being brought back into the story as well. Update soon! Quote
Jody Posted August 28, 2008 Report Posted August 28, 2008 (edited) Great chapter. It certainly made up for being left hanging in the last chapter. My favourite part was when she kept insisting he was lying then finally admitted she knew he wasn't. >So sad. Edited August 28, 2008 by enjoy the ride Quote
solaris Posted August 28, 2008 Report Posted August 28, 2008 Belle's first reaction...imediate denial! Perfect! I'm really curious now as to how this will develope Excellent writing Quote
mk1diva Posted August 28, 2008 Report Posted August 28, 2008 another great chapter well done!! My god why is every breaking adelle up dont think i can take anymore heart ache for them but great writing keep the updates coming... Quote
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