LAURZY! Posted October 23, 2008 Report Posted October 23, 2008 Loved Belle calming Aden down Really great update, loved it
xknomex Posted October 23, 2008 Report Posted October 23, 2008 wonder what Justin wants. I love how you made them so similar.. Loved that Belle calmed Aden down Update soon xx
Inactive User Posted October 23, 2008 Report Posted October 23, 2008 Great chapter. Wondering what Justin does want-hope he won't come between Adelle. Aww Belle is so sweet when she helped Aden calm down. Update soon.
Taniya_K Posted October 24, 2008 Report Posted October 24, 2008 Update? Tonight? Maybe? Yes?! Lol, please? xoxo
Aden+Belle forever Posted October 24, 2008 Report Posted October 24, 2008 Chapter 28 – Unwelcome guest “What is that supposed to mean” Aden asked, confused “That means, I have looked around the town and I like what I see, so I’m thinking of sticking around” Justin said When Aden didn’t reply, Justin continued “So I was thinking, maybe I could stay with you, or maybe your girl” Justin said, smiling at both Aden and Belle “You cant” Aden said bluntly “And why not” Justin asked, folding his arms across his chest “YOU JUST CANT” Aden shouted, before barging past Justin and racing out of the Diner “Aden” Justin shouted, before turning to Belle “what’s his problem” “You’re a jerk,” Belle said coldly, before racing out of the Diner, hoping to catch Aden Justin looked around the Diner and saw Roman glaring at him from the kitchen. He flashed a mock smile at Roman who instantly turned away from him in disgust ----------xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx----------- “ADEN” Belle shouted, as she walked along the beach “ADEN” When she didn’t get an answer, she pulled her cell phone out of her jacket pocket and attempt to call Aden, but it went straight to voicemail Frustrated at Aden not answering for the 3rd time in the last 10 minutes, Belle sent him a text Look, I know your upset about your brother, but please talk to me Aden, if you don’t want him here, we can sort him out, together ----------xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx----------- Aden’s phone went off and he quickly pulled it out of his pocket to see who it was, although he already had a fair idea He slowly read Belle’s text and was about to respond, when he heard someone call him name “Belle” Aden said in shock, quickly wiping away his tears “I…I was just about to call you” “I’ll bet” Belle joked, as she sat down beside him “How did you find me” Aden asked, avoiding eye contact with Belle so that she could see that he hadn’t been crying “I have been all over the beach, this was pretty much the only place left” Belle said, shrugging her shoulders “So, do you want to talk about it” “I just can’t deal with him here, Belle, its…its too many bad memories” Aden admitted, still avoiding eye contact with her “Aden, I know you’re upset, but he is your brother after all,” Belle said “Then why has he never acted like one” Aden asked coldly ----------xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx----------- Aden and Belle walked back into the Diner a few hours later, hand in hand. As soon as Justin saw them, he jumped out of his seat and walked straight over to Aden “Hey, were did you two get too, Aden, I hope you used protection” Justin joked “Shut up, Justin” Aden warned, as Belle squeezed his hand tightly, keeping him calm “So, am I stopping with you tonight, or with her” Justin said, again winking at Belle, who rolled her eyes “Your unbelievable, you know that” Aden said “I know” Justin smiled “Its not a compliment” Aden muttered, rolling his eyes “Whatever” Justin said, not affected at all by Aden’s comment “so about tonight” Aden let out a loud sigh before speaking “Justin, you cant stay with me tonight, because its Roman’s house” “So what am I supposed to do, I came here to see you Aden” Justin replied “Then you made a wasted journey,” Aden said coldly “Aden, I just want to talk” Justin replied “Fine, say what you have to say, then leave” Aden said, using the same cold tone as before “Can we go somewhere a little more…private” Justin asked quietly, looking around the Diner to see the place was packed, full of happy families eating dinner or rowdy teenagers laughing and joking “Fine” Aden replied “The Beach House is empty at the moment” Belle said, “Geoff is with Nicole, Annie is with Jai, and Irene begins work in a few minutes” “Fine” Justin said “Fine” Aden added, glaring at Justin
Taniya_K Posted October 24, 2008 Report Posted October 24, 2008 Justin's actually funny! I hope he doesn't make things bad for Adelle. Loved the ending - cute! Where's Justin going to stay then? Can't wait for more! That conversaion's going to go nice... Thanks for updating! xoxo
Aden+Belle forever Posted October 24, 2008 Report Posted October 24, 2008 Justin's actually funny! I wasnt really sure whether or not to make Justin a funny character in this, but I'm glad I did, it makes him different to Aden, even though they are brothers
Taniya_K Posted October 24, 2008 Report Posted October 24, 2008 ^ Aden's funny too! I like how they say things that are similar, although when Justin says it, it is a bit... urgh!
amz89 Posted October 24, 2008 Report Posted October 24, 2008 Thought i posted from the last chapter maybe not whoops loved the last to chapters, justin leave adelle alone. More soon please.
HAA Girl 08 Posted October 25, 2008 Report Posted October 25, 2008 Oooh, don't let Justin be too much of a jerk - but I have to say he is quite funny... but a jerk! Update soon:)
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